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Brief Encounter Chapter 22
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Bette: Thank you Al. I really appreciate it.
I looked outside wondering what I wanted to tell Tina. I mean I know what to tell her. I wanna tell her everything. But how and where do I start? Hey Tina I’m sorry. *****, sorry isn’t going to make anything better. I tried that a couple of years back. Hmm so what should I tell her?
Shane nudged
Bette: I don’t know Al. She is in
Bette: I uh No, I mean yeah yes. We are but umm yeah well we are together
Shane: Good choice of word there Al.
Shane and Alice laughed and I joined in the amusement.
Shane: Ok we’re here
Oh god. We really are here.
Shane: I’m gonna park my car ok? I’ll meet you guys inside.
I let out a huge breath and climbed out of Shane’s car.
Shane gave me a wink and a thumbs up and I nodded in acknowledgement.
Ok here goes nothing
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The place was busy as usual. People running around to go places, especially the weekend.
I shot her a look.
The information board flipped and showed the flight from LAX had landed. My breathing became faster. I started to pace back and forth again.
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Okay, I’m outta here. All that build up and then, Mel? And, to leave us hanging like that. Too much for this B/T lover to handle. Good luck on your other adventures.
that was wrong to bring mel and tina back at the same time!!!!!!!!!!
oh no… get back here.. how could you do that to us… tina and mel on the same plane… oh god.. and this better not be the end…
lol my arse T. You are the Queen of drama. Having Mel and TIna on the sme flight, next you will say they were seat mates discussing the woman they love not know they were both talking about Bette. Later T post soon.
NNNNNNNNNOOOOOOO , this can not be the end! , damn that Mel, should of got Al to dispose of her before Tina arrived ;)…. please we want more!
YOu got to be kidding! This is can’t be an ending could it? What do you want us to do? Fill in the blanks for you? Hey,…you are the author righ? Come on now…be a good sport and give us an ending that brings closure or better yet! Write a new storyline! Thanks for writing, I have enjoyed reading it!
WTF!!! You are so very, very, bad!!! You better be following up with a not so brief encounter!!! Otherwise we’ll have to form a posse and hunt your teasing a$$ down!!!!
TEASE!!!!!!!!!!!!!
You are in soooo much trouble Thumbs for this one….Glad to see you are posting again. Just been doing some catch up on your wonderful story full of surprises. So you are still alive eventhough your not replying my email or didn´t you get them. Anyway glad to see you name on the post again. I guess we have all missed you while you have been gone. Post soon
oh shit. funny, real funny. thanks for whatever that was. lol
OMFG!!!!!! NO YOU DIDNT!!!! ARGGGGGGG!!!!!. Okay, now you have to start finishing Home. That was a great ending, you sure did fool me.
Thumbs would you like to keep them?
DAMN! Now how am i supposed to go about my daily business with my heart stuck way the hell up in my throat like this?!! Huh, thumbs?! I’m so gonna have to give up this fanfic addiction soon! THe cliffies are HELL! ARGGHHHHH!!!!!
Last comment I Love it I’m gonna signed off for a moment I’ll be back maybe maybe not but Thank you for all the Fanfiction Story I Love all of them to read again Thanks you as Always MOMO.
HAHA T that is some funny shit, where did you learn to be funny???
Hey maybe they could have a 3some??
just my opinion when you have 2 hot girls with you and you don’t know what to do with them.
So first off I’m in shock cause I swear you posted last night too, umm please wake me from this dream.
YOU ARE SO BAD,i CAN;T BELIEVE YOU DID THAT..PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE POST SOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOON…………………..
OMG, how could you do that? So cruel. Nice setup though. Looks like there will be lots of fireworks going on.
I’d hate you for that ending but it’s so offbeat I’m LMAO.
Tell me there’s a longer encounter somewhere around the corner. Ah, but if not, what a way to go. :D
I know you said this was gonna happen… but i thought you was kidding… you better get your ass ba ck to this story you little git.. god are you gonna get it when i speak to you.. lmao.
NO WAY Thumbs, now i thought my eyes were deceiving me when i saw you had double posted, yes very nice i thought two post from Thumbs, that girl has been away too long..what no way is this the end?…..Seriously Thumbs this can’t be the end….how much begging do we have to do for you to post another chapter….please.
Thank you.
Ahhh…don’t leave us hanging. you can’t stop there. damn, this is getting very good, please continue…soon.
Oh no you didnt, did you??
YOU CAN’T NO REALLY I MEAN IT, YOU CAN’T STOP NOW..
what the hell was that???..you are soooo mean.. how could you??? i told you NO MORE DRAMA..i didnt say thumbs please start more drama..FIX this or no more bad words in portuguese for you..lol..great chapter T
OMG!!!! Is this what I’ve been waiting for???? You are surely a classic tease!!! Can’t believe I’ve waited and waited for the past 1 month for this BRIEF encounter!!!! But I still love you….r story!
NNNNNOOOOOOOOOOO! I knew it! I knew it. I felt something bad was going to happen, especially when you apologized in your note!
Why? Why? I’ve been a good girl. I promise. I’ve been really good.
Your writing continues to be good and now I worry that I have to wait another month for the “real” encounter.
Still, I Thank You for writing and posting for our enjoyment.
muhahah TROBLE MAKER!! i am the first to comment this shit! I HATE YOU!! LEAVING ME HANGING LIKE THAT!!! not cool!!! how can you do that?!?!?! i need to know what happens next!!! it better not be the end to the entire story or i’ll kick your bootay!! if it is i want a sequel!! hmph! gosh!!!! first you cause trouble now you leave me hanging…what next?????? hmph but i love you anyways! great update! <3
Noooooooo, that can’t be it. Change the title and carry on with the story.
this cant be the end? we need more! been waiting so long for you to write the next chapter
the end?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!????!! is the end??????????????????????????????????tell me you didn’t juz do that!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
What the hell what the hellll, this is fucking crazy and why you leaving us like thissss, and this can’t be the end. Please post soonnnn, thanks!
thumbs – that was just mean!! Mel and Tina on the same flight. Haha, this should get interesting. I’ve been working way too much and travelling. Sadly it happens – but I get to come here find your story posted and down time is that much better!