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Brief Encounter Chapter 23
Shane: Oh alright ok.
Shane smiled at me and I smiled back. Shane. That is our Shane, hard on the outside and very soft on the inside. Only those she lets near can see that side of her. She never shows it to anyone else.
Tina: Decaff please.
Cashier: That would be $5.20 please.
I handed the exact amount.
Cashier: Thank you.
Tina: So Shane, what has been going on since I left?
Shane: Nothing much T. Just the usual. Dana just got back from her tournament.
Tina: Oh yeah I heard about that. Must be great being a tennis player eh? The girls?
Shane: Haha yeah but you know Dana. Crazy about Lara!
Tina: Yeah. They’re sweet together don’t you think?
Shane: Yeah, so ***** cute.
Shane and I walked back to the table after getting my coffee. In a distant people would think Dana and Alice are an item. Sitting so close and being very comfortable with each other. But we know that they can never be more than friends, Dana is crazy about Lara and Alice, well she’s just too much for Dana to handle.
Dana: Oh guys, Lara said hi. She said she couldn’t make it today cos she had last minute orders from an important client. Sorry
Tina: Oh was she supposed to meet us here?
Dana: Yeah
Tina: Awww sorry Dana.
Dana: It’s ok.
Shane: Yeah she better be!!!
We all laughed and Dana just sat there smiling and blushing.
Kit: Aaaaahhh there you are T. Give me some love!!!
I turned around, stood up and gave Kit a hug!
Kit: Man you had me worried there leaving without a word!!! What did you think you were doing?
Tina: I’m sorry Kit, it was last minute and I didn’t even get to tell anyone.
Kit: Ah it’s ok. It’s just good to have you back.
Tina: Yeah it’s great to be back.
I pulled myself away from Kit. I’ve missed her. I knew I had a huge smile on my face as I let go of Kit. And I knew how happy she was to have me back again. I guess she still thinks I am the nearest to being her sister since Bette left
Bette: Hello TTina.
I closed my eyes and turned around. The image of Bette in my head, with her smile, and her beautiful eyes came to me like a flash.
I opened my eyes and I was right. There she is. All smiling. I can’t help it I get weak in the knees. I just want to reach out to her. I just
I blinked twice.
Tina: Hi Bette. How are you?
Bette: I’m good. Thanks. How have you been?
Tina: Never better.
I smiled. Gosh I haven’t had this feeling for so long. And just like those previous years, Bette always has the same effect on me.
Bette: Uhmm That your coffee?
Tina: Uhmm yeah I just bought it.
Bette: Well, you wouldn’t want to spill it. Here let me
I snapped out of the trance as soon as Bette moved to my side taking the coffee from my hand. My god. I nearly spilled my coffee all over my top.
Tina: Oh, thank you Bette.
Bette: Not a problem. Here, I’ll just put it on the table.
Tina (Bette): Huh? (huh?)
The girls burst into laughter seeing what was in front of them, Bette and I being polite to one another must have been like a scene from a different planet to them.
Bette and I looked at each other. At first we just smiled and blushed a little. But as the girls were laughing like crazy, we too burst out laughing.
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wb thumbs babe..ok im not happy yet..do something and quickly..blow of Mel and make B&T talk thye meant to be and need some time alone to rediscover this..please dont take soooo long to post i missed you :o)
Life does get in the way of things you like to do. Missed you. Let have more and more. get Tina and Bette togrther…thanks
I am so happy your last chapter was just your usual tease! Glad to see you coming back. Post again soon, please!
THUMBS, YOUR VERY VERY BAD..hehehehhe…I LOVE HOW TINA GETS ALL CHOCKED UP WHEN SHE IS WITH BETTE….PLEASE PLEASE DON’T STAY AWAY TO LONG THIS TIME…PLEASE PLEASE ..
i know im late to the game and all. but i have read it from the beginning. so my comment is, how was this gonna make me feel better. yes tina gets all emotional around bette. but no talk and is mel still hanging around. they need some time alone and time to connect. so i hope youve got something more in there quick girl. you write wonderfully well for it not being your mother tongue. understand everything your saying, lmao. ;). post soon please. thanks.
Good chapter. Bette and Tina are so cute, and please let them have a talk alone and tell each other about their feeling, and let see what’s next. Post soon please, thanks!
I love that Tina loses all mental ability at the sight of Bette. And, yes, I am all too familiar with the temptation to tease readers. LOL
I hope the next chapter comes faster than the wait for this one. Great chapter.
Not long at all! More, more…..where’s Mel….and what’s Lara cooking up? Something for our girls????
All is forgiven….(what were you sorry for?)
Thanks for continuing…I was losing hope you’re posting again.
I’m happy I checked before bedtime. “night-night”.
Welcome back Thumbs…what took you soo long..we have missed you and your story…glad to see you postet again.
You´re forgiven for not replying my email…I know you are way to busy girl. Just as you know I got a new job and I´m starting the 1th of sep so no more free time for me…Post soon Thumbs we want more of your story here.
Ok you big dyke wannabe that was a great chapter.And what do u mean im being nicer to u in chat ? Im always nice to u…lmao. Hurry up and post soon don’t leave us hangin too long or i really will have to stop being nice.. lol.
I’m sorry but I’m stunned about something $5.20 for coffee???? One cup or a few????? lol, damn…
Hey T!!!!! good cahpter. love the way tina gets all chocked up just hearing and seeing bette. they will find their way back to each other. see u in chat
great update!!!! your right Things are better when they don’t go smooothly I don’t mean that lol post soon
I agree post soon please!!!!! but have them talk and confess everything
What took you so long,
What took you all night,
What took you forever to see i’m right
WooHoo, look who’s back.. I love you i love you i love you, mwah mwah mwah.. LOL..
see it wasn’t too hard to write another awesome chapter, and i’m sure it won’t be hard to write more.. =P
Hey Thumbs, you are such a tease!!!!LOL…nice that you have come back to tease us again with your cliffhangers….now this is going to be interesting.
Thanks for the update T you have been forgiven.
they juz are meant for each other. but dun mind the slow process…is nice to see how they go back to each other.. great job,thumbs! love.it!post soon!!!
T!! you big horn dog lmao
ok i’m now on strike I said I wanted a 3 some!! WTF i didn’t see any action. LMAO just kidding, but you do have to let us know where all the missing peeps are. and tina would look good with some coffe down the front then bette could get some napkins and help her wipe it off, or take her to kits office wear they could replace her shirt. ok now don’t take a month to write a update or i will hunt you down.
*Gives Thumbs a huge hug* – Thanks for continuing with this story :) Now, get rid of Mel and let our girls get back together.