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Brief Encounter Chapter 25
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Everyone took notice of this and went all quiet. Dana reached for her coffee and held the cup with both her hands, closing the gap between her mouth and the cup.
I turned to look at Bette who was still smiling.
Tina: What? What did I say?
Bette: Nothing Tina. Absolutely nothing.
Tina: Awww come on Bette. You didn’t just look at me like that and thought of nothing?
Bette looked over at our friends, began to say something and then stopped. She squinted her eyes as if to think hard. She looked at her watch and smiled again. What is up with her?
Bette: I just, umm, can I, umm talk to you for a minute?
Tina: Uhmm.
Dana: Laundry?
Bette: I won’t.
Tina: I will.
Shane: Yeah I have to check out my salon. See what the girls are up to. See you guys.
Shane and Alice left The Planet. I laughed at the antics.
Dana: I don’t really have to go anywhere but seeing that I’m uhm ya know aaahhh. Yeah I have to go. It’s nice to see you Bette.
Bette: Kit you have somewhere to go too?
Kit: Me? Naaah but I’ll just be doing the accounts in my office if you need me. I’ll talk to you later baby girl. I’ll see you T.
Bette: Ok thanks Kit.
Tina: Bye Kit.
Dana walked out of The Planet as Kit retired to her office.
So it was just Bette and I left.
Tina: So what were you asking me Bette? I’m sorry the girls just up and went I didn’t get a chance to process what you were asking.
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They acted as if they were digging fish from one another’s mouth. Finally Tina tried to step forward, but was interrupted… I dunt know whose ass I should kick, Bette or Mel?
im confused,wasnt tina pregnant in thisstory.
what took you so long..thumbs???!?? but yay..u’re back! ha~ this is really great stuff…is there really a chance when Tina can actually blurt it out to Bette..the main purpose of her being there? hey..good one. do post soon..!!!
please continue, I like your story ;-)
Hey, Thumbs….well, I weren’t sure if there may be more than one Thumbs out there! I’m so glad to see another post by you. Can’t wait when both express their continued love for each other; Bette and Tina; not Mel or Helena. Oh, ok, Mel can express her love for Helena and get themselves out of the way! Holding my breath for the next post….I’m lying of course, not holding my breath, but patiently with a big smile on my face! Thanks for writing.
Good chapter. I agree with BetteAndTinaForever and really want Bette and Tina be together again. Ok post soon please, thanks!
k baby. you have them talking but about nothing. jesus, cant anyone just say what is no there mind. hell you may get hurt but maybe you wont. maybe you will get the best gift you can think of. oh well thats just me. thanks.
T!!!!!!!!!come on now you didn’t like my joke???shit have I lost my touch?and why haven’t I gotten to talk to you yet?? I guess I will just have to try harder.very glad to see your story is coming along very slowly but it’s getting there lol
Thumbs I’ve missed you and you’re story too! It’s about time they got to talk but I’m gonna have to agree with Albeez here. I guess Tina needs to give Bette a sign or something so she knows she is interested. Bette will take care of the rest….right? Oh and Mel needs to go. Lol.
Yes, what a great present to have this morning. Thank you – Thank you – Thank you.I really think the way they danced was important. No harm, no fouls just good times in a way. I like that Bette requested that she be at the next show, I think Tina was great in how suttle she was. Thanks Thumbs I love your story, I will wait forever for the next installment.
Thumbs, thanks for posting. I’m still hangin’ in there. Question though, you’re not going to just let them have another ‘brief’ encouter, and leave it like that, again, are you?! I mean, will I’m just hoping that they have more than just a ‘brief’ encounter, to express their true feelings to each other. Hangin’ in there. Post soon, please.
woman..for the long time we didnt talk you should be nicer with me and make B&T together again..i cant take this much longer..your mean woman..lol..miss you too Thumbs gostosa..see ya soon and thanks for the update please let B&T be together again :o)
time for Bette to say goodbye to Mel and Hello to Tina and talk some more about what they are really feeling…thanks for posting
Hiya girlriend;)! Wanna know what I think??? I think you should do nothing else but write FF…all the time!…no sleeping or eating…or chatting…Whatever it is that is keeping you from doing this on a R_E_G_U_G_U_L_A_R basis just stop it NOW!!! I don’t care if your boyfriend is out of town and you r finally getting your freak on with some hot chick! STOP IT and get back to writing this story!!! as a matter of fact…I don’t want to see you until you post the next chapter, got it? LOL! (You’re great girl!)
Oh please make our favourite girls find a way back to each other
What a super surprise to see your name on the board of updates Thumbs…I have missed your story you know that….I can tell you are busy as always…so am I at the moment but just postet another chapter today. Do post soon again Thumbs because we need Tina to tell Bette about her feelings and for Bette to kick Mels ass out of her bed.
Well well well.. i stay away for a couple of months and what do i come back to.. not one but two postings.. must be a bloody miracle lmao… anywho great chapters.. but please come on stop skirting round the issues and get on with it woman! nice talking to you in chat today i missed ya loads ya big gaymo! lmfao..