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Brief Encounter Chapter 28
“Yes”
Upon hearing this, Sam got confused. “Are you Annie too?”
Annie just smiled. She pointed at the bag she was holding, “Is this yours?”
Jonah smiled and took a few step towards Annie. He held out his hand and Annie shook it.
“I’m Jonah. That’s my dad. His name is Sam”
“Hi Jonah. Sam. (looking at the teddy bear) And who is this?” Annie asked.
“Howard”, Jonah replied.
“Howard”, Annie repeated.
Sleepless in
I want Tina.
Huh? Where did that come from? God I am going crazy sitting here alone. I need to go out.
As if my prayers were heard, my cell phone rang
Bette: Bette Porter.
Shane: Bette
Bette: Oh gosh SHANE!!!!!
Shane (laughing): Are you ok?
Bette: Yeah why?
Shane: You sound a little bit you sure you’re ok?
Bette: Yes but are you free?
Shane (laughing still): Yeah I was just about to ask if you and Mel are free maybe we can go out?
Bette: Yeah I’m free. Where are you?
Shane: Well, I’m just at the lobby now.
Bette: Wow good timing. Ok I’m going to be down in a minute or so. Or would you rather come up here?
Shane: Oh no it’s ok. I’ll just wait down here. Take your time.
Bette: Ok I won’t be long. See you.
Hmm good timing! Just the person I need to talk to.
Keith Urban was playing on the radio singing a sad song. Sigh. I turned the music off.
Shane: I take it you don’t like the music?
Shane took a left turn at the traffic lights.
Bette: Oh no it’s not that. I just need to clear my head that’s all.
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(44 votes, average: 3.84 out of 5)
Thumbs, it is always great to see your post! What a cliffhanger, will Tina find out how Bette really feels? Tragic hospital scene full of emotion are always excellent! Post soon, and as always, thanks for your time and talent!
What happened???????????????
OMG!! … dont leave us here waiting too long …
Hope Bette be ok!
Please dont leave us hanger for 30days Thats 720 minutes.thats a long time. Did Shane and Alice set Bette and Tina up? thanks
Was that Mel or Candace driving that car! lol
omg …. don’t leave us hanging toooo long…..
i can’t believe you just left us again with a cliffhanger like this…i don’t want to wait another month for the next chapter, please post soon
hope we don’t have to wait a month for your next post……. please
man what did i do to you you want me dead!!!!!!!!!! 30 days i will be on my death bed and no pizza for you!!!!!!!!!!!!
What will happen next? I’m as frightened as the girl. Will Bette hit by something or beated by someone? Or let’s be more optimistic: Tina saw Bette running out of the Planet. She thought Bette’s running away from her. So she rushed out to catch her like a rhinoceros? I’m not kidding. I really want the last thing to happen. ;)
you love playing with our nerves, don’t you ?! Please post soon, thank you
Oh Shit!! Don’t leave us hanging like that!!!! Post soon you tease…lol
Oh My you are definately trying to see if I can hold my breath that long aren’t you. Bette finally in thinking along the right track and she’s going to get hit with a bus right. The proverbial bus in the head. Please say it’s not so Joe.
DAMN WHAT A CLIFFHANGER!!!! Now if Bette was hurt…I AM HOPING YOU DON’T GIVE HER AMNESIA, CAUSE THAT WOULD REALLY SUCK, unless she has no recollection of any separation from Tina, that she thinks they’re still together and all..but then again that would still suck, especially for Tina. MAN POST A LONG CHAPTER SOON AND LET ME FIND OUT..OHHHHHH THE POSSIBILITIES!!!!!!!
Shit this is sad and please don’t let anything bad happen to her. Ok post soon please, thanks!
i was reading your story what a cliff hanger, omg i want chapter. like some of the other girls said please don’t leave us hanging too long
After a whole month and we are left with the same cliffhanger? Seems a little unfair.
Once a Month and you leave the story like that..OUCH THAT HURTS>>PLEASE POST SOON
please, please post again soon..
come on, don’t make us wait too long, please, post an update. only one page, or half one, please, it’s not too much for you, you’ve already write 28 chapters !! Thank you, merci !