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Brief Encounter Chapter 9
Martin: Really? Wow.
As we got to the Planet I could see through the window that the place was packed. Well if it isnt Thursday night – Kits turn to DJ. I stayed in the limo for a minute longer. I was afraid that I might bump into Tina here… but also was excited about accidentally seeing her Would I be breaking my promise if I saw her here at The Planet? I would love nothing more than to see her. It had been three long years.
Martin: Miss Porter? Is everything alright?
Bette: Huh? Umm Yeah. Well Im going to be here a while, so why dont I just see you tomorrow morning at 8.30?
Martin: Youll be ok going back to the hotel tonight?
Bette: Yes, I should be fine. Thanks Martin.
I slowly made my way to The Planet, breathing in and out slowly just to calm my nerves. What is wrong with me? Ive walked into the Planet thousands of times. I could feel people staring at me. Some Ive seen before but saying hello would have to wait. I want to surprise Kit by my arrival at The Planet.
The music was loud and people were dancing along with the music. The sea of people somehow calmed me down. I never really liked crowded place but this is different, I couldnt even put my finger on it. I wonder if the girls are here and I wonder if Tina is here This scene hasnt changed much. I smiled to myself. God I didnt realise how much I miss this place until I set foot here.
Woman: Hey I havent seen you around here. Are you new?
I turned around. Me? New? I wanted to laugh.
Bette: Im sorry. Im just here to surprise someone.
Woman: Well, that someone is lucky
Yeah I know where youre getting at!
Bette: Im here to surprise my sister.
Woman: Oh I thought well, what does she look like? A name maybe? Maybe I can help you find her
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(53 votes, average: 4.00 out of 5)
We need Tina to be with Bette. Will leave it up to you as the time and place. Great chapter. thanks
Thumbs, the suspense of when Tina is going to make herself known is driving me crazy. I am so enjoying this story.
where is Tina? forget mel bette
i cant wait until b&t see each other , they so belong together! .. nice insight into shane too :-D
really great are we getting more ? hope so !
Okay, the suspense is killing me. Why won’t anyone tell Bette what Tina has been up to. This is torture. Is she, or isn’t she with Helena, in NYC? Something’s gotta give. How ’bout it, Thumbs?! Please don’t leave us hangin’ here.
Bring on Tina!!!
Nice update. I guess you can leave Helena’s sorry butt in the story…that is, if she gets kicked to the curb one really good time! Find someone sweet for Mel. Bette belongs to Tina and even though she seems to be having a hard time remembering it, Tina belongs to Bette! Waiting patiently for the hook up.
I’m very happy to see the gang see Bette in LA. Yeah only person that will make Bette happy is Tina and can’t wait to see Bette and Tina see each other. Post soon, thank you! Great chapter!
Light, but oh, so nice. I like the insight you gave on Shane. I remembered something Shane said about the special delivery; calling the place to see a “return” address. Will she bring it up again? Will Bette get a special delivery at the hotel? That’ll be so cool but scary? Thanks for another great chapter.
TINA ONLY TINA….CAN’T WAIT TILL WE FIND OUT TINA IS THE SECRET ADMIRER
Very nice. We all know B&T belong together. Now let´s get Tina in the picture ya. Post soon
Ooooh, lets get Tina and Bette together, and lets get Bette back to LA permenantly
Geez, the suspense of waiting for Tina to come back into the picture, is killing me!! In a good way, though. :) Thanks.
Thanks for the update, but where, oh where is Tina?
Thumbs….another great chapter…..i love this….can’t wait to see what happens when B & T finally meet again…Thanks:)
Hi Thumbs, very nice, do you know you are killing me here.
Thanks for the update.