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Brief Encounter Chapter 9
I laughed as Shane played 20 questions with me.
Bette: Shane honey slow down. I dont know how long Id be here no one knows Im here. Ive only met you. I wanted to surprise you guys thats why I didnt tell you I was coming. I just got here
Shane was smiling ear to ear.
Shane: Im Im glad youre here Bette. God Ive missed you. Come and sit down!
We walked toward an empty table through the crowd. Once Shane was stopped by this cute woman asking her to dance and Shanes reply was
Shane: Sorry babe. Im busy (she pointed at me and winked and that made me laugh)
As we sat at the table I couldnt help but think how things really havent changed at all. I could feel a few stares burning on my skin, most probably wondering who the lucky lady with Shane is. Things really havent changed!
Shane: Hey Bette! Look at the bar! Those girls are eyeing you.
I turned to look but quickly averted my gaze at Shane.
Bette: Well, I have a different agenda.
Shane: I just I just cant believe youre here Bette! Oh you know what? Could you wait here for a second? I really have to get Kit out of her office! Would you like that Bette?
Bette: I would like that very much Shane. Thank you.
Shane smiled at me one last time before going into the back to look for Kit.
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I saw Shane walking back towards the table. She had covered Kits eyes with her hands and somehow the music at The Planet stopped playing. Spotlight was on Kit. I smiled and stood up.
Shane: Kit, we have a very lovely surprise for you.
Kit: Come on Shane enough with the suspense girl let me just see for myself!
Shane: You ready?
Kit: Shane!
Shane: Ok here we go.
I walked closer to Kit. Shane was biting her lower lip. Kit opened her eyes. Kits mouth was open. Her eyes didnt blink. Well, this wasnt really the reaction I wanted to get from Kit
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(53 votes, average: 4.00 out of 5)
We need Tina to be with Bette. Will leave it up to you as the time and place. Great chapter. thanks
Thumbs, the suspense of when Tina is going to make herself known is driving me crazy. I am so enjoying this story.
where is Tina? forget mel bette
i cant wait until b&t see each other , they so belong together! .. nice insight into shane too :-D
really great are we getting more ? hope so !
Okay, the suspense is killing me. Why won’t anyone tell Bette what Tina has been up to. This is torture. Is she, or isn’t she with Helena, in NYC? Something’s gotta give. How ’bout it, Thumbs?! Please don’t leave us hangin’ here.
Bring on Tina!!!
Nice update. I guess you can leave Helena’s sorry butt in the story…that is, if she gets kicked to the curb one really good time! Find someone sweet for Mel. Bette belongs to Tina and even though she seems to be having a hard time remembering it, Tina belongs to Bette! Waiting patiently for the hook up.
I’m very happy to see the gang see Bette in LA. Yeah only person that will make Bette happy is Tina and can’t wait to see Bette and Tina see each other. Post soon, thank you! Great chapter!
Light, but oh, so nice. I like the insight you gave on Shane. I remembered something Shane said about the special delivery; calling the place to see a “return” address. Will she bring it up again? Will Bette get a special delivery at the hotel? That’ll be so cool but scary? Thanks for another great chapter.
TINA ONLY TINA….CAN’T WAIT TILL WE FIND OUT TINA IS THE SECRET ADMIRER
Very nice. We all know B&T belong together. Now let´s get Tina in the picture ya. Post soon
Ooooh, lets get Tina and Bette together, and lets get Bette back to LA permenantly
Geez, the suspense of waiting for Tina to come back into the picture, is killing me!! In a good way, though. :) Thanks.
Thanks for the update, but where, oh where is Tina?
Thumbs….another great chapter…..i love this….can’t wait to see what happens when B & T finally meet again…Thanks:)
Hi Thumbs, very nice, do you know you are killing me here.
Thanks for the update.