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Brief Encounter Chapter 9
Bette: Kit?
Kit immediately snapped out of it.
Kit: Oh my god! Shane! Its Bette! Its my baby sis! Come here you!
Kit held me in her arms. And tears start to flow.
Bette: Kit really its nice that youre holding me but I think youve blocked my air passage
Kit loosened her hold of me and smiled.
Kit: Sorry baby sis. Im just surprised is all. I cant believe youre here! (Kit turned to everyone) Sorry girls and guys (she laughed) this is my baby sis Bette. Shes visiting from New York! Hey DJ play the music! Enjoy the night as I really am enjoying mine now! What a lovely surprise Bette!!!
The music started again and everyone cheered.
Kit: Baby girl why didnt you tell me you were coming/? How long have you been in LA?
Bette: I just got in an hour ago. It was last minute so Hey where are Alice and Dana?
Shane: Danas on tour. Alice said shell be coming.
Kit: Where are you staying Bette?
Bette: Chateau Marmont.
Kit: Gee pretty posh Id say.
Bette: Helena hooked me up.
Shane, Kit: What?!?!
Bette: Yeah shes the reason Im here. Its a long story but Im so so glad Im here.
Kit: Yeah and so are the girls by the bar!
I rolled my eyes.
Alice: Hey whats with the commotion?
Alice came up behind me. She didnt realise I was there. Kit raised her eyebrows and pointed at me. Shane shook her head and laughed.
Alice: What? Whats so funny?
I turned around to face Alice. Alice just stood there. She blinked once twice just to make sure I really was there.
Bette: The look on your face Al! Thats whats funny!
Alice: Oh my god!
Alice pulled me into her arms.
Alice: When did you get here?!!?! And why didnt you tell us??
We talked and talked, none of the girls left my side. I filled them in on what has been going on the past week since their visits; about Mel, Helena, Peggy, the show and the special delivery I get everyday at work. In turn they listened and laughed at appropriate times. God how Ive missed being surrounded by people who matter. How Ive missed LA.
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(53 votes, average: 4.00 out of 5)
We need Tina to be with Bette. Will leave it up to you as the time and place. Great chapter. thanks
Thumbs, the suspense of when Tina is going to make herself known is driving me crazy. I am so enjoying this story.
where is Tina? forget mel bette
i cant wait until b&t see each other , they so belong together! .. nice insight into shane too :-D
really great are we getting more ? hope so !
Okay, the suspense is killing me. Why won’t anyone tell Bette what Tina has been up to. This is torture. Is she, or isn’t she with Helena, in NYC? Something’s gotta give. How ’bout it, Thumbs?! Please don’t leave us hangin’ here.
Bring on Tina!!!
Nice update. I guess you can leave Helena’s sorry butt in the story…that is, if she gets kicked to the curb one really good time! Find someone sweet for Mel. Bette belongs to Tina and even though she seems to be having a hard time remembering it, Tina belongs to Bette! Waiting patiently for the hook up.
I’m very happy to see the gang see Bette in LA. Yeah only person that will make Bette happy is Tina and can’t wait to see Bette and Tina see each other. Post soon, thank you! Great chapter!
Light, but oh, so nice. I like the insight you gave on Shane. I remembered something Shane said about the special delivery; calling the place to see a “return” address. Will she bring it up again? Will Bette get a special delivery at the hotel? That’ll be so cool but scary? Thanks for another great chapter.
TINA ONLY TINA….CAN’T WAIT TILL WE FIND OUT TINA IS THE SECRET ADMIRER
Very nice. We all know B&T belong together. Now let´s get Tina in the picture ya. Post soon
Ooooh, lets get Tina and Bette together, and lets get Bette back to LA permenantly
Geez, the suspense of waiting for Tina to come back into the picture, is killing me!! In a good way, though. :) Thanks.
Thanks for the update, but where, oh where is Tina?
Thumbs….another great chapter…..i love this….can’t wait to see what happens when B & T finally meet again…Thanks:)
Hi Thumbs, very nice, do you know you are killing me here.
Thanks for the update.