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Broken Girls with Strange Frames (Ch. 2)
So, I found the club (and it was on Sunset anyway, thanks for the tip, dickhead-guy-who-works-in-the-office), and I’ll spare you the grisly details of how I got in, but needless to say, there was a guy on the guest list whose date stood him up and I didn’t have to flirt with him too heavily, although I’d guess he would say differently based on the possessive way he had his arm around my waist by the time we got in.
But anyway, I was in and I managed to lose the guy. And there was this warm-up band onstage that pretty much sucked, so I went to the bar and ordered a beer-which, due to the bartender being completely deaf, ended up being a Budweiser. Ever notice that no matter what you feel like ordering, the only thing bartenders can ever hear is “Bud”? Whatever.
The ***** warm-up band got shittier and I was leaning against the bar, sipping my beer, waiting for Kit Porter, and performing an entirely clinical and objective examination of the woman’s ***** in front of me. I mean, innocent. I was just examining her jeans. To be fair, I don’t know if you remember Calvin Klein jeans back in 1995, but I don’t recall if we all wore them as tight as this, so I was just curious.
I mean, the ***** that the jeans covered was nice too, but I swear I was just trying to ascertain whether or not they were CK.
But then, the girl turned and she turned maybe a little too quickly for me to recover. My eyes darted up to her face, but you know that intensely guilty look you get when you’re not sure whether or not you’ve been caught checking someone out? And you know that look you get when you see someone who is insanely gorgeous and you’re not sure if they’re really looking at you? Okay. Combine those two looks. That’s probably what I looked like.
She then decided to grace me with quite possibly the sexiest grin ever and said, “Hi.”
All I could think was ‘Hi’? That’s so hot. Why didn’t I think to say ‘hi’? I’m never quick like that. What I said, actually, was, “Uh… hey!”
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Wow, I JUST posted a comment for your other story, and you posted! :D I’m viewed #1, niceeee lol
This story is awesome. I love who you are writing Alice. Can’t wait to read the rest.
loving the alice pov…please continue soon.
love this POV from Alice. This must be when Kit was doing her bad drinking. Bettes beautiful smile. Waking up to that each morning .what a way to start the day.
More, more, more. Please, please, please. Thank you.
Hey I just catching up of your Story WOW! I Love it Please continue Thanks.
Younger Alice is so much fun. Still a little wet behind the ears, full of energy and no filter from her brain to her mouth. Interesting to see Bette single and mingling, if only to see her sister. Can’t wait for more.
I don’t usually read stories when it’s just about plain love or attraction, but this one really has something to it.
The way you write Alice and picture younger Bette is very cool and realistic and since I’ve always wondered what had happened between the two of them, I think I’m along for the ride too :)
Thanks for this cool story.
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I just started this wonderful chapter in which Alice makes this pithy statement,”And it wouldn’t have been so bad except that, in these days, I was a pretty poor motherfucker.”
I had to pause for this comment:
Take me with you! I am your slave!
Ahem…
Now, back to the story…
Take me home
Take me hommmme
I wanna be with you
I wanna be with youuuuuuuu…
Is that just too Cher?????
Don’t hate me. I love this story!!!!