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    Broken Girls with Strange Frames (Ch. 2)

    Story written on July 25, 2005 by rachel_raj.
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    Alice recalls her first meeting with Bette.

     

    She moved a little closer, I think out of necessity because she was being jostled by the throng of people milling about and it was difficult to hear. I like to pretend she moved closer because she wanted to, though. She leaned forward and shouted in my ear: “You know those bad hair bands from the 1980′s?”

     

    I nodded and she threw me a cute half-grin, cocking her head slightly toward the stage where the warm-up band was still butchering an already bad song. I couldn’t help but giggle. I took a swig of my beer and then said, “I don’t know. At least Quiet Riot and those other bands looked like they took some time getting ready in the morning.”

     

    The girl smiled blithely and then leaned in and shouted in my ear, “What?”

     

    “Never mind!” I shouted back, because crowded clubs were not my best place to be witty, I guess.

     

    After another moment of seemingly endless torture from the warm-up band and me chugging my beer neurotically, hoping that I’d get buzzed enough to say something interesting, the girl leaned in once again and said, “I’m Bette.” She extended her hand and I took it. We shook.

     

    “I’m Alice,” I said. Her hand was strong, with long, slender fingers. I looked at them and then glanced at her guiltily, smiling to alleviate my embarrassment. She smiled at me, this ***** brilliant smile that lit up her whole face. I mean, that’s half of Bette’s charm, I’ll swear to it. She smiles like she’s smiling specifically for you and you just sit there wondering what you did to make her so happy.

     

    “So, are you a big Kit Porter fan?” Bette wanted to know.

     

    I shook my head, decided that seemed sort of harsh, and then shrugged. “I like Kit Porter, definitely,” I said. I ordered another beer and then added, “I’m actually supposed to write a story for L.A. Magazine about the Kit Porter comeback.”

     

    “As unobtrusive as it is,” commented Bette.

     

    “Exactly.”

     

    “So you’re a writer.”

     

    I licked my lips and smiled. “I hope so.” This made her laugh lightly, a soft, intimate laugh that made me feel buzzed and happy. “What do you do?” I asked.

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    4. love this POV from Alice. This must be when Kit was doing her bad drinking. Bettes beautiful smile. Waking up to that each morning .what a way to start the day.

    7. Younger Alice is so much fun. Still a little wet behind the ears, full of energy and no filter from her brain to her mouth. Interesting to see Bette single and mingling, if only to see her sister. Can’t wait for more.

    8. I don’t usually read stories when it’s just about plain love or attraction, but this one really has something to it.
      The way you write Alice and picture younger Bette is very cool and realistic and since I’ve always wondered what had happened between the two of them, I think I’m along for the ride too :)
      Thanks for this cool story.
      xxx

    9. I just started this wonderful chapter in which Alice makes this pithy statement,”And it wouldn’t have been so bad except that, in these days, I was a pretty poor motherfucker.”

      I had to pause for this comment:

      Take me with you! I am your slave!

      Ahem…

      Now, back to the story…

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