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Broken Girls with Strange Frames (Ch. 29)
I paused. “Uh, have you met me?”
That almost got a smile, and at least she seemed to relax a little. She brushed away a lock of hair that was hanging in her eyes, which relieved me a little since I’d been aching to do the exact same thing. Swallowing, I added, “Of course I’ll be honest.”
Bette let out a breath. “Am I do you think I’m incapable of-no, I’ll reword it-am I self-involved?”
“Yes,” I said without thinking, and then made a face because I wasn’t sure that was what she wanted right now.
Bette was smiling a little at this point, that absorbed smirk that I had now learned was often just a product of about a million thoughts running through her head and a stubborn contentment to keep them there. “I thought I was,” she said quietly. “I don’t mean to be, I just am.”
“Uh-huh,” I agreed, not sure where this was going. “I wouldn’t call it a flaw. Just a character trait.” I blame that comment on the whole thing where it was 2:00 in the morning and I wasn’t thinking straight.
She looked down and then sighed, blowing her bangs out of her face. I waited. “I’m sorry,” she said. “You were right about Kit.”
I hadn’t expected that.
“I was?”
She nodded. “I should have-we both made mistakes-I’m not-she’s not-” She broke off, seemingly unable to articulate whatever it was that the Porter sisters were exactly.
“It’s okay,” I told her.
“I’ve just been walking around for hours,” she said. “I can’t think straight.”
“Because of Kit?” I asked, bewildered.
She looked at me like I had fifteen heads. “No.”
“Because of…”
“I think that I… *****.”
At the rate she was going, it’d be light outside before she got anywhere. “What?”
“I love her.”
I shrugged. “That’s pretty obvious. You just don’t know how to show it because she’s let you down so many times.”
Bette shook her head. “She’s never let me down.”
“But-”
“Who are you talking about?”
I bit my lip. “Kit?”
“Why are you talking about-look, will you forget about Kit?” I watched her swallow hard and turn on the couch, facing away from me. She put her feet up on the coffee table. “Tina. I’m in love with her.”
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Such a great story. Admirably well-written and you’ve got the characters in a believable place before we would have met them as they were in show. Kudos on making up interesting backstory. Looking forward to more.
So damn good!
Fabulous is getting kind of redundant. Can’t wait for the next chapter but don’t want it to end either.
Wonderful, wonderful, wonderful!
One question: Does Tina ever speak in her own voice? It’s okay if she doesn’t. This is Alice and Bette’s story, and it’s good.
Marvelous. Most of us I think, have assumed that Bette just persued Tina and bowled her over with her wit, charm and personality, never taking the time to think that maybe Bette was insecure and mess just as you have portrayed her. Brilliant. Alice continues to be…well…Alice.
I like it when you’ll write the people like they really are. Thanks