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Broken Phone Calls Pt 9
"i love you"her voice like velvet in my ear.. and like the first time she said it i feel goosebumps..
"i love you too…"I say lifting my head up to look her in the eyes, then I lean in and brushing my lips against hers.. i can feel her fingers as they bunch the hair at the back of my head… pulling me closer.. deepening the kiss..
But as expected it didn’t last and i laughed breaking the heated kiss when i felt Shay tugging at my arm.. this kid has the worst timing.. i peck at her lips one last time before turning slightly towards my brother.. god he reminds me so much of myself.. honestly i shouldn’t be able to pick him up but he’s still kinda small for his age and he weighs nothing.. so as usual i lift him up, ruffling his hair.. he smiles and looks towards Carmen..
And just like that it hits me… i need to call Alice..
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Its now 3 in the afternoon and i sitting alone in the kitchen starring at the ring in my hand.. Carmen and Shay went to the mall about an hour ago.. something about cloths and shoes.. i wasn’t really paying attention.. not since this morning.. since the idea popped in my head.. god wheres Alice.. she should have been here by now..
The ring isn’t really flashy and i doesn’t look like much but i know Carmen will love it.. i had it re-sized before the whole fiasco in Canada.. it was the only thing my mother ever gave to me.. and soon i hope to give it to Carmen.. the last time i proposed it wasn’t planned and i wasn’t in the best state of mind..
At first i did it because i was afraid of losing her, but after asking her.. i realized it was something i really wanted.. 5 years ago if you had asked me if i would ever want to be married and have a family.. id probably have laughed in your face and asked you what drugs you were on.. cuz id want some…
Its funny really.. my life.. one minute I’m telling Alice i don’t do relationships and shes going off on some rant about a code i apparantly follow.. then that same fucking day i met the women of my dreams.. sure i fought it.. but the more i saw her the harder i fell.. and i don’t think id have it any other way…
The sound of the front door slamming shut pulls me from my thoughts.. and i turn expecting to see Alice but I’m surprised to see the entire framily.. i shouldn’t be but i am.. alice is in front.. the ring leader… god i love these women.. apparently Alice felt i was gonna need a little more help.. and she’d be right.. this has to be perfect..
"so Yoda.. whats the plan.."Alice asked.. the smile on her face is mirrored on all of their faces..
TBC
**please tell me what you think..**
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Great chapter! finally Shane is free to be happy and not having her past hunting all the time. She deserves to be happy with Carmen and Shay :)
great story!!! I want Carmen back on the show, let’s hope for the next season!!
OMG i loved it what a fantastic update , I have said this through out thsi whole story that this is what should have happened on the show for sure this fic is simply amazeing and i would love to see it on the show , but as for this update , wow it was great and i lvoed it I cant wait to see what happens witht his omg this was great thank you and please dont wiat for ever for an update this fic is great and definitly should be in the show.
Well I think it was damn time you updated ! Well worth the wait, thank you and don’t be such a stranger ;)
Glad to see that you finally found time to post. It was obviously worth it:) I also love how you switched to Shane’s POV and gave us insight into what she’s thinking. Well, amazing post! PPS.
I’m glad Shane is finally at peace with Gabriel; I know that’ll be very good for her. And I can’t wait to see what Shane has up her sleeve.
I’ve been waiting for this chapter so long. But it was really worth it. Great to see how things work out between Shane and Gabriel. Seems like she finally can be happy with her little family. She definetly deserves it.
great story!! can’t wait for the next update.. hope you’d update soon.. i love ths update because finally could be happy again with her life.. great writing!!:)