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    Broken Sonnet Chapter 1-4

    Story written on July 27, 2006 by kllynt.
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    Author Notes:

    Alternate Universe fanfic with Shane and Carmen. Shane is a singer-songwriter who thought she has lost the ability to love after being dumped unceremoniously by Cherie. When Sharmen met, they hated each other. However, Carmen begins to break down Shane’s defenses one by one.

    Shane opened her hand and lying in her palm was the bracelet Cherie had given her.

     

    Chapter 2

     

    Alexis and Carmen had been queuing for over half an hour. “Is she really that good Alex?” “Yeah I love her songs…there’s a quiet strength to her songs….if you ask me, her songs seemed more like pages torn out from her journal….haunting and melancholic,” Carmen raised her eyebrows. Well, she bet that this Shane McCutcheon also looked good because merely a good voice wouldn’t capture Alex’s interest. When they got in, they were pretty far behind and Carmen’s view was obscured by the people in front. “Is that Shane McCutcheon?” Carmen asked about the long-haired girl crooning into the microphone on stage. “Hell Carmen, no….believe me, when you see her, you will know it,” She heard polite applause and the shuffling of feet onstage. Then there was a familiar low husky voice. “Thanks for coming….If only,”

    There were cheers and whistles but a hushed silence fell upon the crowd the moment they heard the acoustic strumming of the guitar.

    What’s the way of love?
    Tell me your fiction
    Tell me your lies
    Say to me now, you’ll never forget this night
    I’m feeling emotionless
    My head’s so clear
    My enemies aren’t, the one I fear
    You know your kiss confused
    This troubling soul
    And I found out
    That we’re all breaking hearts
    That we’re all broken hearts

    Carmen heard the low poignant voice and it seemed to strike a chord deep inside her heart. The sweltering vocals reminded her of Gail’s parting words to her “I’m afraid of you Carmen because I love you and I’m not supposed to…it’s so easy to lie rather than tell the truth, but I want you to remember me Carmen…I did love you….and I’ll never forget that night, long after I get married to Keith….I’m sorry I broke your heart, but Carmen….but so is my heart breaking,” She had pressed Carmen’s palm to her heart and that was the last time she ever saw Gail.

    If only love could find  us all
    If only hearts didn’t have to fall
    We can’t mislead to make things right
    So instead we’ll sleep alone tonight

     

    And if somehow fate were in my hands
    Would it be enough to understand
    Why we feel lost in a world so small
    If only love could find us all…

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    1. Really like the story, please continue I want to see where all of this is going. Shane is such a jerk but in the same time all heartbroken.. really interesting. Post soon.

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