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Her fingers lightly scratch me down my neck. ”So good,” she moans, when I twist my tongue inside her.
Changing positions, I kneel behind her perfect round buttocks, sending a long lick up her spine. ”This way?”
”Yes, Baby, fuck me.”
We fold our bodies together, her hands pressing against the headboard banging into the wall.
Rings of muscles grab along my fingers, a pulse expands at my fingertips, a blush of red appears, rippling up the white skin covering her spine.
Moments absorb the scents of sex, time becomes the intake of our breaths. I touch myself, while thrusting my hips.
My arousal climbing faster with hers.
As we crest over elongating waves of ecstasy, her hands slide down the headboard and the pillows muffle her screams.
Twenty minutes later –
Her head on my shoulder, her leg crossed over me, she pulls me closer, kissing me slowly, before finally whispering into my ear, ”I invited you here just to talk.”
”Hm.” I float down from the ceiling to focus on her words. ”Surely not now.”
”Saturday a terrible mistake will happen.”
”There’s a fallen tree in the forest. I’m riding out there Saturday to stick my head in its hole.”
”My television gig ends at two.”
”You should come down to Virginia.”
”What do you ride?”
”A black horse named Nightingale.”
Madison Neurological Research Center
Three days later –
Friday afternoon – one day until inauguration
Cassie and I are finishing up the surgery on the woman, who after a car crash lost her ability to speak and the use of her legs. It’s taken hours to relieve her brain edema and rebuild the nerve damage impeding her lower movement. ”Nurse, please test the feeling response in her feet.”
At the other end of the operating table I see the sheet wiggle. ”One more, this one up her calves.”
Before I close up the incision in her back I study the scans of her spinal damage. I’ve rebuilt the tiny tears of her nerves on her left side with implanted nanorobots snug inside the section that threads through her spine. Cassie marked seventeen tiny nerve tears on the film. After each repair I’ve made, she’s checked them off. Even still I study them further, before I close my patient up.
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Hi, Command:
Very nice chapter, very hot too; I remember those days two months and a half ago, very stressed, if people had known five months ago what we know now (and what probably some of us always knew), probably history would have changed; so, let’s see how Dr. Bette Porter will show the truth behind the mental condition of this guy. Looking forward to the ‘Women’s March’ in your next chapter (I hope), and to see what you have prepared for us.
Thanks so much for posting soon
Proteonomics
Dear Proteonomics,
As the real time news story of Christopher Steele’s dossier unfolds my awe and frustration is that first Jeb Bush’s campaign had the intel, and later they passed it onto Hillary Clinton, and, of course, we know the Obama White House got a copy, too. This happened in July! Meaning right after the conventions the FBI had the Steele report, as well!
In Countdown we’re likely not going to be chasing the Russian connections because Doctor Porter’s role is firmly in neuroscience. However, because they are so damaging and damning and of interest to me, I plan to weave them in, as the shocking revelations they are. As you noted, Dr Porter has another role to play by way of Trump’s mental disease. I hope you’ll stay tuned as she figures this mystery out.
My great thanks for your comment and continued interest.
Bette is not the only who is smitten ????, but i must admit that i prefer Tina more.
Any change that she will appear in this incredible story?
Great and hot chapter and i look forward to the next update!
Bibi, It seems both are nervously smitten, doesn’t it? In the beginning of this thriller, Maria is needed to show the investigative journalistic side of the unfolding mysteries that develop around the presidency. She is vital as this develops. I hope you’ll enjoy her even while enjoying Tina more!
Bette will meet Tina at the Women’s March, but only as an introduction and in passing. Until the story shifts, due to a series of plots developments, Bette will be off on forays with Maria figuring out how to get the story of Trump’s insanity into the forefront of news reporting. Then Tina’s role can be developed, but we’re not there, yet.
Tina is with an NGO that will fight Trump’s “anti-human life on earth” policies, to state them broadly! I’ve not decided which NGO yet, but I’m leaning toward an environmental/climate change NGO, because exploring that subject will take Bette out of Washington and into many places in America with Tina.
Please enjoy Maria, if possible. I am. Bette is and Nightingale will like her on their upcoming riding adventure.
My thanks always for reading and commenting!
HOT???? HOT ????HOT????
HA! Very! I loved setting it up: “Under the glow of another century, she’s draped across a chaise longue, almost nude except for heels, almost close enough to touch, but not quite.”
You see why I need Maria to knock the cobwebs off Dr Porter! The photographs of Maria are exquisite.
lol the cobwebs eh???? i love it. Im a fan of your writing. keep it up
Enjoyed the update. Glad that Bette will be able to let the CIA and FBI as well as the American people and the world know that the man is definitely unhinged. How people can still support him is beyond me. It is obvious that he is not ready or capable of doing this job. When his daughter was given an office in the West Wing, no pay and high security clearance that only means one thing to me and i.e., that she has the job of disemanating info in the security briefings that he does not understand. It has already been reported that he does not read anything. And his staff has told the various agencies to make their ibriefings ONLY ONE PAGE, with bullet points. Well DAMN, how does he expect to run the country with briefings of one page and not anything in depth. I shall leave this alone before I get us all in trouble. We are the laughing stock of the world and this country is in so much trouble. Thanks for posting.
Agreed! Whenever Ivanka enters a scene in this story I expect there be a witching-chill crusting the air.
In total, there are so many distressing things, it’s like deep pinball, if there is such a thing. One ever level your ball collides with obstacles too fantastic or grim to contemplate and then down a spiral hole you go to a deeper level that hits you emotionally. I’m writing this as a piece of storytelling to share with you all and to vent my own imagined meandering in down the rabbit hole.
So, let’s hope Dr Porter figures out a cool gizmo that will secretly take a scan of Trump’s brain while he’s unaware.
That one of the plans to see inside Trumpworld.
Good to see this late afternoon for me. Happy you liked the update.
Command, is that from Scandal? Love your writing, pls don’t make us wait!!