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Can’t Be – 5
FINALLY
Alice: We’re doing so well. Almost done. See, I knew we could do it. It’s all about self-control. I’m pretty proud of myself. Uh oh. Here we go. Im feeling kinda giddy. We actually did it. This is fun. See its all about self-control. No harm in trying to find out what she thought of me when we first met. Innocent question. Huh? The first thing she noticed were my *****? They talked to her? No way! *****, am I blushing? Really? Uh oh. What did I think about her? I thought she was pretty hot. Aw man, I just admitted I thought she was a hottie. She looks so fricken hot right now. This isn’t good. Look at her. Shes surprised. (Dana reaches out to fix and sort the gifts) No, don’t look at her. Oh no dont do that. Her *****… its like right there. Shes got a really nice *****… I can’t help it. Gotta touch
Dana: Tell her the truth. She asked what you thought about her ***** it why not? I noticed her *****. (Smiles remembering) Oh my gosh, is she blushing? How ***** cute! How about her? Wonder what she thought of me Ask her. She thought I was a hottie? Really? Awww really? I never knew that. Wow. Really? *****, am I turning beet red right now? Why am I feeling like this? Were flirting again. Not good. Ok, keep busy Organize yeah She looks so cute right now. No, we have constant reminders surrounding us. We are not flirting. Keep busy. Fix the gifts. Oh no. I can feel her eyes on me. Dana I totally know what shes thinking. Yeah I am really turned on right now. *****. Not a good position to be in.
Alice: ***** it. Tell her You have a really nice ***** Please turn around Dana. I have to just I have to. (Reaches out towards Danas back pocket, and Dana turns around and they kiss each other urgently) Damn, I just want to rip her clothes off. She feels so good right now. Can’t believe this is happening. Finally, it’s happening to me… what the? (Pulls her in closer to feel her body against hers and desperately tries to take off Danas pants) Why does she have to wear these tight ***** jeans? Well, she does look great in them. Shut up and just go with it, Alice. Feels so good man mmmm
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(29 votes, average: 3.62 out of 5)
Well done! This is getting better and better woth each passing chapter. Keep it up!
Aw shucks. Thanks. ;)
Awww, that was great! I can appreciate how hard that was to write but you did a great job! Update soon :D