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Can’t Help Falling In Love Chapter 10
Alex: You don’t even have a right to touch her.
Bette: You don’t know what your talking about. Neither of you do.
Alex gestured toward the living room and Bette led the way.
Once there Alex was ready to rip into her.
Alex: Ok so what is it that we don’t get.
Bette: That kiss meant nothing!
Alex: If something means nothing then why bother doing it?
Bette: He was an old friend and the producer’s son
Alex raised his voice and Bette could hear the venom.
Alex: Ahh I get it nowyou were trying for a raise? Need a little extra cash?
Bette began yelling as well.
Bette: What?? No?? It has nothing to do with money. I can’t explain it! You wouldn’t understand why I did it.
Alex: oh my godyou fucked him didn’t you?
Bette: where would you get that?
Tina: You did, didn’t you?
Both heads turned to the blonde who looked sick from the alcohol, or maybe from heartbreak.
Bette lowered her gaze to the floor.
Tina: Don’t lie to me. I’m not one of your adoring fans. I used to be, but not any longer. I know what you look like after a good *****, I know it well.
Bette: won’t you even hear me out?
Alex jumped to Tina’s rescue.
Alex: No she won’t. You don’t deserve a second of her time. Not any more.
Bette: I don’t see how this concerns you?
Tina: It concerns him because he is the only one in this cold steel city that gives a ***** about me. He cares what happens to me.
Bette ran to Tina and grabbed her hands.
Bette: So do i!
Tina ripped her hands from Bette’s.
Tina: I am going to ask you one question and after you answer me I want you out of my apartment. And once you leave I don’t ever want to see you again.
Bette’s eyes swelled up with tears but for the first time Tina saw them for what they really were. A prop. Something Bette used to get what she wanted.
Tina: Was it worth it? Was ***** his brains out worth losing me?
Bette didn’t answer.
Tina: I guess that answers that! Now get the ***** out!
Tina walked over to the door and opened it for her.
Bette eyed Tina one last time, pleading.
Tina: Now!
Bette walked quickly out the door and for the second time in a week Tina slammed the door in her face.
TBC….
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(70 votes, average: 3.43 out of 5)
K
Wow, very intense chapter. I could forgive the kiss but nothing more. I have to say I love the drama. I can’t wait for more. Tina should go have some “fun” with someone else until Bette gets her shit together. I just love this story, excellent job.
great story, post again soon
Woah, this chapter got me all sad.I love your writing, it amazes me. <3
For just 10 chapters, you sure have captured my attention. Can’t wait to see where this journey is going! Good job!
Damn this totally rocks i’m so loving it !!!!!
COWABUNGA DUDE!!! OH THE DRAMA!!!! LOVE YOUR STORY, LOOK FOR IT EVERY HOUR ON THE HOUR!!!
OMG! You are ripping my heart out! I cannot believe Bette did that…UGH!
VERY NICE!!
shit did I forget to invite you, there is an open invite to anyone who wants to come!! Party there ass off like there is no tomorrow cause that’s the only way I know how to party. So far it’s been a non stop party since last friday. I’m house sitting in the Country club and it’s time to show these old fools how it’s done. So anyone who is in cali or wants to fly to cali get your ass over here.Yes I’m a huge fan of drama, and a bigger fan of this story you have amazing writing skillz, I wonder what else you can do.
Very intense and loved the drama.
Thank you.
OMG THAT WAS GREAT. I LOVE THIS STORY. I agree totally with Tina fuck that bullshit Bette talking. Do you, be who you are and dont let anybody take that away from you. I know you dont post that often…but do you think you could give us onre more today???PLEAE?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!
wow, I didn’t see that coming. I know Bette feels the pressure, but I hoped she was a big enough star that she wouldn’t have to get on the producers couch, so to speak, anymore. I guess not. Poor Bette, poor Tina!
Damn that was intense. Good Job.
~snif~ told you I couldn’t take the drama! That was sad! But I’m still loving your story so continue soon please and don’t leave me hanging here for to long :)
Megga- Oh crap. This story is heartbreaking, but I love it. Please continue writing!
Lovin the drama. Lovin two posts in one day!
If Bette can make a comeback from this, she’s a better actress than Patti LuPone!
If she can get Tina to forgive her she deserves a Tony.
Thanks!
Poor T!
Got home today and had this wonderful surprise waiting…Oh my god there are so many twists yet to come I just know!!! Don’t make bet pay too dearly…that dirty bisexual wannabe…ewh how could she…Can’t wait til tomorrow…if I ask nicely again….2 pls pls..smiling happy
Hurrah!! an update…am so glad i stopped by for the “billionath” time….More really soon
Woah Woah Woah.. I just can’t get enough, lady you really have to write a play.. you’re so talented..
It’s like watching a movie or something..
Ouch!!! I love this story, their loving is so intense, and now, so is the drama. Can’t wait for more.
That was so intense! Can’t wait to see what happens next!
Can you say INTENSE.Ok I’m loving this now…hOPE FOR SOME FORGIVING, LOVING, CLUBBING, HUGGING, OR SOMETHING…dON’T LEAVE ME HANGING…Post ASAP
Shit this is gonna be sad. Post soon, thanks!
oh the drama….I love it!!!!
Awsome story Love the Drama let’s see Bette doing some but kissing.
Just wanted to join the rest of the adoring fans. My heart broke with Tina’s at the same instant. Be waiting for the next 3 posts.
Ouch! That was intense, but great. Adding you to the fav’s list.
Grrr bad bad Bette!! I hope things can be patched up even though what Bette did is wrong. I’m loving this story, please continue and don’t leave us hanging!