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Can’t Help Falling In Love Chapter 14
Tina cut in
Tina: When her father cheated. I knew that.
Alice: Right. Bette was really young only 7. Anyway, at one
point during the interview I started saying how amazing Bette was. I mean I
really laid it on thick. And at one point I said she was as sweet as punkin
pie
Tina: so?
Alice: Well Kit said never to say that to Bette. When I
asked why she said it was because it was nickname their father used to call her
and it just wasn’t a good idea.
Alex: Well what does it mean?
Alice: I have no idea. But I sorta, may have, accidentally
on purpose mentioned it to her and then she may have run out of the store in
tears.
Tina: WHAT????? Al! *****!
Alex: Wait, when did you see Bette?
Tina: That isn’t important.
Alex: ***** yes it is! Girl now you have explaining to do.
Tina: OK, here is the dealI will tell you everything that
happened this afternoon, while Alice goes in the bedroom and calls her sources
and finds out what the ***** punkin pie means! Deal?
Alice was already heading to the bedroom with cell phone and
pen in hand.
Alice: TK, I’m really sorry. I just wanted to help. You know
that don’t you?
Tina stood up and walked to her shaken friend.
Tina: Of course I do Al. I just wish you would think a
little before going on these missions to ruin people’s lives. But I know you
did it because you love me. And I love you too.
Alice gave Tina a gigantic hug and walked into the bedroom.
Alex: Ok girlspill it!
Tina relived the afternoon for Alex leaving no detail out.
Alex: Waitso she basically forced herself on you!
Tina: No, I mean yes, but I wanted it Alex. I didn’t push
her off until later. I don’t know I can’t explain it. We both said some pretty
harsh things and I am sure that it is over now.
Alex: We may have some clean up work to do with this whole
nickname thing, you know that don’t you?
Tina: I know. I know. Why would you encourage her to go
fishing for drama?
Alex: I don’t know. Seemed like a good idea. I’m sooo sorry
Tina.
Tina laid her head across Alex’s lap.
Tina: Tell me something that will make me smile.
Alex thought long and hard.
Alex: So I went the store Religious ***** after work and I
bought this new lube, it’s supposed be better with
Tina: That’s enough. Thank you.
Both laughed.
Alice entered the room white as a ghost.
Alice: Houston, we have a problem..
Tina: Oh god what.
Alice sat down and dropped her head to her knees.
Alice: This is soo bad guys.
Alex: girl, just tell us.
Alice: So I had my boss
Alex: Slash lover
Both giggled.
Tina: Guys, quit joking around!
Alex & Alice: Sorry.
Alice: Ok so I had him look up Bette’s father.
Tina: And
Alex: And
Alice: Melvin Porter is currently incarcerated.
Tina: For what???
Alice: sexual abuse of a minor
Tina: Oh I don’t like where this is going
Alice: his daughter.
Alex: Bette?
Alice: Bette.
Tina: Oh god! Alice what have you done?
Alice: I didn’t know, I didn’t mean to hurt her. I wanted
her to know that she couldn’t just hurt you and walk away! I never meant
Alice covered her eyes with her hands. Tears spilling freely
down her cheeks. Though it took
every ounce of energy she had, Tina stood and walked to her friend. She wrapped
her arms around a frightened Alice and held her. Alex stood to join them.
Tina: It’s going to be ok. We’ll figure this out.
Alex: Shh baby, it’s ok. Shhh.
TBC
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(45 votes, average: 3.60 out of 5)
absolutely fabulous!! u’ve ‘connected the dots’ really well.
Damn, what a twist!!I didn’t see that coming at all. Wow-Alica has some apolgizing to do & I hope that T can reach Bette. Awesome job-loving this fic!!!
Oh bad Alice she owes Bette an apology..love the drama you do it so well.
Thank you.
Wow what a twist! It sheds light on the reasons for Bette’s behavior. Excellent update and please post soon when hopefully Tina is the one apologizing to Bette.
Wow Flair, I did go through a little withdrawal yesterday.., but your update more than made up for it. Do you have enough drama on reserve to last until the start of season 3?.. just joking
OH MY GOD..
Didnt see this coming AT ALL.. Damn this Bette suffered hell before she even die.. I’m glad that Alice is feeling bad & guilty..
**TWO THUMBS UP** Totally loved this chapter.. one of the strongest so far..
I’m lovin’ each twist you throw at us! I can’t wait to read your next post!
WOW, I guess Alice learned an important lesson today! Will Tina apologize or act like she doesn’t know..hmmm
Now for your praise :P This has become my favorite fic! What does that mean? When I get to the site I look up your posts FIRST!!
And, Thank you so very much for writing this fantastic story!
Megga- OMG, this is soo sad. Tina should go find her and talk to her. Please post again soon, the suspense is killing me!
Normally I’m a silent reader but I like this story so much I just wanted to let you know that its prob. my favorite story running right now.
post again soon!!!!!!!
Wow! Love the drama. I know everybody wants them to be together right away, but then the story would end. So, take your time.
God I love it…I can’t get enough of your story I tell you…Can someone pass me a kleenex please?…Thankyou…Excellant…Please post soon
Uh-oh! This ‘Punkin Pie’ makes Bette a victim. Sad!
I think I liked the porno scenario better.Imagine the videos!
Thanks for posting more on this engrossing story.
Damn this is sad, poor Bette. Hope Tina will find her and talk to her. Post soon, thanks!
Oh my, poor Bette. please let Tina go say sorry, not Alice. Great chapter, please post soon
hey flair ! I totally love ur story ! I am hooked . :D Ur writing is amazing and very creative . And , Ohh The Drama u weave !!! I love it !! :D
I really feel sorry for Bette . This sure was an unexpected twist . I hope Tina talks with Bette about this . I can’t wait to read what happens next ? Will Bette talk with Tina after this ? Will this issue be resolved ? umm , I really hope that TiBette work it out :).
Pls keep up the gr8 work and pls continue writing this excellent story :D .
Gazillion stars to u all the wayyyy !!!
Thanx :D
K
That was wonderful. Poor Bette. And poor Tina, I feel bad for them both. Love the drama. Can’t wait for more.
OMG!!! But that completely exolains Bette’s behavior though. Wow!!! I was expecting a rap from her past but not her father. Tina needs to swallow that shit up and go find Bette. And Bette needs to get help. I hope you dont wait until 2mrw to post the next chapter. Today is my birthday why dont you bless me with another post before the day is done. PLEASE!?!?!?!?!?! Great up date
oh man, poor Bette, what did Alice do!!? I hope Bette and Tina work it out, and get together SOON!! As always, I love your story, it was a great chapter! post soon please
Hey! love your story and the drama of course. I agree with Lauren25 please le Tina go say sorry.
Totally Great….Everytime we read you have us mesmerized…The Drama, suspense your writing is amazing…Def Fanfiction award level!!!! Keep going girl, I’m all ears…tks
whoa so did not see that coming !!! Nice one flair wait with anticipation for the next post. Still loving it and still think you rock