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Can’t Help Falling In Love Chapter 37
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Bette: Get in.
Tina: What? Where are we going?
Bette: Just get in. We need to talk.
Tina wiped the tears from her eyes and opened the door. She sat down next to Bette, hoping the awkwardness would fade.
Bette: Whats going on with you?
Tina: Nothing.
Bette: Oh ok then.
Bette gave Tina a look that said I dont believe a damn word youre saying.
Tina sat quietly with her hands in her lap. Her face was red and tear stained. Bette slowly took Tinas hand and held tightly. The two women remained in silence.
The cab driver pulled over on what seemed to be a dark street.
Bette reached into her purse and pulled out a $20. She handed it to the driver and exited the cab, Tina, right behind her.
Tina: where are we?
Bette: Youll see.
Tina: It smells awful here.
Bette: Dont worry, the smell will fade.
Tina held her nose.
Tina: I hope so.
Bette took Tinas hand again and led her quietly around the corner. Tinas eye lit up and her smile moved slowly from ear to ear.
Tina: Oh my god. Where are we?
Bette: This is the South Street Seaport. You like?
Tina: I love.
Tina followed Bette down the cobblestone walkway past the large boats that were docked, and up to a large deck that rose above the water. The lights from city glimmered off the water.
Tina: It looks like the light is dancing.
Bette: I know.
Tina continued starring. She saw the watchtower across the water. The numbers 2:57PM blinking at her.
Tina: Is that the Brooklyn Bridge?
Tina pointed across the water.
Bette: Yup, and the Manhattan Bridge is behind it.
Tina: It looks so beautiful.
Bette: I know. Its like out here, even if just for a second, New York comes to a stop. You know?
Tina: Yeah. Wow.
Bette walked up behind Tina and wrapped her arms around her. She placed gentle kisses up and down her neck causing Tina to shiver.
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Awww that was so sweet. Now some hot sex at the seaport makes it even better!
Nope I think this is a beautiful pleace to make love tonight and let do it, lol. Ok this chapter is good and let see some hot scene coming. Post soon, thanks!
Tina has to stop this and have faith in their relationship i hope she underestood Bettes point and go home for what??enjoy the moment..lol..that will be great i cant wait… and i just start to read all of your chapters from the beggining and so far is amazing..post soon thanks
Oh my goodness, this is the best “Bette: I just wanted you to know that whatever you’re going through, whatever you’re feeling I’m feeling it with you, because I love you.”….So…so…so…romantic… :))
“people could see us…” Uh oh… ;-)
flair…what a tease you are!!
K
Another excellent chapter. I love that Bette didn’t just let her walk away. I LOVE this story. Can’t wait for the next one, hope it’s soon :)
Hey flair, your story rocks! I got all warm and fuzzy reading this chapter…the tug boat analogy was so cute! Looking forward to your next post! Thanks:D
what a tease you are. I love it. Thanks
if there’s a wall somewhere.. then no… it’d be better there. LOL. Well T, you gotta learn to share your girl. what can I say.. takes time ya? Thanks for posting so quickly. I can’t write fast enough.
Tina has to get over this paranoia, what does she expect when she goes out with someone famous!!!
No dont go home. how romantic Flair. wonderful story.
Hey this is so lovely LOL! You’re really have a sense of humor about the tugboats a lot of S*** thats was so funny I love it, Thanks for posted again Please post soon I can’t wait for the next chapter.
I think Tina’s feelings are so realistic. Some people are paranoid when they first enter a realtionship. The fact that Tina knows it is stupid but still can’t help feeling the way she feels makes your story come to life. This is one of the many reasons I love your story.
oh wouldn’t be great if B/T made a sex tape??? They shouldn’t have sex in public peeps might be watching and a tape is the last thing B/T needs.
everthing about how you write seems like true to life, like were peaking in on someones actual daily events…great imagination!!! pls another chapter today!!!!plllsseeeeee
oh that was a sweet chapter! give us another one, soon please!
Is this seaport real? It sounds beautiful. Thanks for having Bette comfort Tina. Good job, flair!
Wow!! More really,really soon
FFD
I am a recent convert to your fantastic story. It has taken me since Friday to catch up on this new twist to Bette and Tina’s beginning.
I adore the way you have made Bette a touch selfish but now aware of that fact she is prepared to be selfless and think about Tina and what is best for their relationship.
Tina has a backbone and is willing to risk it all for the greater reward. Thankfully this has paid off.
Glad the Bette, this time took the bit between her teeth and refused to let Tina go.
These gals do need to clear the air about Tina’s jealousy and insecurity about competing with Bette’s fans while Bette can demonstrate how much Tina means to her.
Please post real soon and make my day.
Thank you for sharing this marvelous masterpiece with me.
Your fan.
Ya knowI love your story. I feel Tina’s angst. But did you have to remind of the shit that used to get sent to mt hometown oh sorry home island.
Bette, the megawatt Broadway star with the sex abuse in her past comes out, and she has to be the one to console her girlfriend? Does she have to do all the heavy lifting in the relationship by herself?
What she really needs now is for pictures of her naked butt at The South Street Seaport to appear on Page 6 of The Post! Tina is a selfish brat!
Bette is an epic lover! So romantic! Tina, not so much…
And your story is dreamy! Thanks for another wonderful chapter!
I have to say that I am addicted to this story. Its something new and different from anything else on the site and I think that is what has drawn me in. I look forward to reading new chapters…thanks.
DONT GO HOME,lol…great chapter keep them coming, thanks
No going home, let them stay right there, please!. x great chapter.x
Love it, 5 stars for you ;) please post soon
As long as their anticipated activities, don’t make the morning newspaper, I’m good with this. Happy to see them trusting each other, and not adding to the drama, that will obviously find them.
Get a grip tina!
ya got me hook line and sinker, you tease. i so love this story. is this a place on the ultimate tour. sounds beautiful. keep it coming.
How I love this bit of pure romantic poetry, on the moonlight, in such a magical place ! God, do you really have to make me feel so charmed each time I’m jumping on one of your soooo wonderful chapters ? You’re pitiless ! (lol) And in addition, I was reading it now, at night, right under a thin moon crescent, in front of my balcony… I must be crazy !
Please, please, post again soon ! (… how selfish, those avid readers !)