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    Can’t Help Falling In Love Chapter 39

    The cab ride back to Bettes was filled with anticipation and longing. And even though Bette felt that they had cleared the air, there was still something lurking between them. The cab pulled up to the skyscraper and after paying the fare, they were on their way up. Bette quickly unlocked the door and before it could even close behind them Tinas lips were on hers. She pushed Bette backwards toward the bedroom with more force than Bette had ever seen her use. When they reached the edge of the bed, Bette pulled away from Tinas tight grip.

    Bette: T, whats your rush?

    Tina didnt answer. Her face was flushed with desire.

    Bette: Im not going anywhere. We can take our time.

    Tina: I know Im sorry. I just, I need you.

    Bette: You have me T. Do you understand that?

    Tina looked down, not knowing how to answer.

    Bette lifted Tinas chin and met her desperate eyes.

    Bette: Tell me you know that.

    Tina said nothing.

    Bette took both of Tinas hands and led her to the bed.

    Bette: You need to tell me what is going on in there.

    She gently kissed Tinas forehead.

    Tina: I dont know exactly what Im feeling.

    Bette took a deep breath.

    Bette: Do you love me?

    Tina didnt even hesitate.

    Tina: Yes.

    Bette: Then whats the problem?

    Tina searched Bettes dark eyes but all she found was hurt and confusion.

    Tina: Look at you Bette! You are just perfect. Why on earth would you want me? I mean maybe at first but the thrill has had to wear off by now. You can have any man, woman, or child you want.

    Bette frowned.

    Bette: Children arent my thing.

    Tina realized exactly what she had said and couldnt begin apologizing enough.

    Tina: Oh god, Bette no. I didnt mean it like that. I wasnt trying to rehash your past or anything; I was just trying to say that

    Bette smirked.

    Bette: Its ok. I know what you meant.

    Tina: I cant believe I said that.

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    Comments

    1. i have happy feet today. you posted. as you know love it. so glad that tina is seeing the light. needs to still be strong cuz it will uncomfortable for her to see her with others and bette needs to take care of tinas heart. post soon.

    2. alright now where’s the next one! so happy that tina understands now understands bette as well as herself. i’m missing the alex banter, and i hope he finds someone. u should write a book, cause this story is fantastic!

    3. Wow, that was such an important discovery for Tina. It was so nice that the realization is sweet and loving I love your story once again a awesome installment. THanks

    4. ” Her lips met the button of Bette’s jeans and she quickly used her teeth to undo them.”
      Girl, do you know how much orthodontia costs??? Tina’s parents would probably cringe if they saw this…though probably not for fear of her teeth.
      Okay. Nevermind that…
      “Floating, falling,
      sweet intoxication!
      Touch me, trust me
      savour each sensation!
      Let the dream begin,
      let your darker side give in…”

      Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhh, yesssssssssss.

    5. so i’ve spent the last 3 days catching up on your stories and I’m absolutely in love with your writing. I have got to e-mail you. or you’ve got to e-mail me! Please…..you’re awesome!

    6. Again you always leave us breathless, either NC-17 or Drama…but always breathless. You have dialed in total knowledge of these two with this story…all who read are honored that you continue….so pls CONTINUE!!!!

    7. “Tina: And now, for my last trickÉ

      Tina placed her hand up Bette’s shirt until she reached the clasp in the front of Bette’s bra. With one quick snap the bra opened.

      Tina: tada!”
      …
      “Tina: Hey, we’re playing by your rules, remember? “We can take our time, I’m not going anywhere.” I guess you should eat your words.”

      Bette: I have something else you can eat.”

      Great lines in this chapter, flair! I had to fight not to spit water out at my computer or to choke! Excellent job!!! I’m glad Tina finally realizes what they mean to each other. Thank you!

    8. K
      Damn girl, that was hot. Glad Tina finally got it. LOVE this so much. Please post again before tomorrow morning, I won’t be able to read this for 5 days, I don’t know how I will survive.

    9. Hurray, my favorite story is back !
      How beautiful was Tina’s realization at the end, that just gave me a sweet thrill…

      You know, taking this new great chapter’s ideal opportunity, I wanted to let you know how much I admire the way you so wonderfully succeed depicting each one of B&T’s love makings with all different moods and lights : teasing or deeply romantic, highly hot or movingly tender – and always so subtly mixed with every pieces of drama (for exemple, this last fairy moonlight moment mixed with inward painful and intense feelings – or also the former so bittersweet scene that mixed the hottest love making ever with Alice’s heartbreaking sorrow in the next room, like echoes of raindrops in the middle of a tempest…
      With you, so gifted storyteller, no scene is gratuitous because the stage is always mixed with the wings. Applause !

      Yes, so-well-called Flairforthedramatic, you definitly have all the possible colours in your painter’s palette (something our dear arts’ lover Bette would deeply appreciate in you !) for the biggest pleasure of all your faithful readers – and consequently for mine too of course. So much.
      So, here’s once more these two simple words to express that in the most sincere way : THANK YOU !

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