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    Can’t Help Falling In Love Chapter 38

    Story written on July 11, 2005 by flairforthedramatic.
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    “There’s just no stopping the way I feel for you”
    a real moment

    Tina was panting and gasping for air. This experience had really taken her. Bette continued to hold her tight to her own body.

    Bette: I love you! Only you. I need you to hear me.

    Tina looked up from the crook in Bettes neck.

    Bette: Really hear and understand me. I love you!

    Tina dropped her head back down to Bettes shoulder.

    Tina: I love you too.

    The two-sat silent wrapped in each others arms. Neither dared to say a word for fear of breaking the silent promise they had made each other. Bette felt Tina shudder with a gust of wind that blew by.

    Bette: Can we get out of here?

    Tina leaned back so she could see Bettes face. She looked like she was close to tears.

    Tina knew that Bette had figured out what was truly bothering her and it obviously hurt her deeply. Tina felt awful. This was all of her fault. Her insecurities were coming between her and the woman she loved.

    Tina: Yeah we can go. Just one more thing ok?

    Bette forced a smile.

    Bette: Whatever you need sweetie.

    Tina stood up adjusting her pants and then offering Bette a hand to get up. They locked hands and Tina led Bette to the railings by the water.

    Tina: do you see all of this around us?

    Bette looked around her.

    Tina: The water, the stars, the lights, the wind. I love all of it. It makes me feel so alive to just be standing here in the middle of all of it.

    Bette: Its beautiful.

    Bettes voice was as light as a whisper.

    Tina: Its amazing isnt? All of this around us, all of this beauty and wonder and yet the most important thing in my life is right here standing next to me. That everything else pales terribly in comparison.

    Bette looked at Tina in shock. She knew Tina loved her but to hear her put it that way send chills down Bettes spine. Her heart was racing and her palms became sweaty.

    Tina looked nervously at Bette.

    Tina: Arent you going to say anything?

    Bette paused for a moment still taking in Tinas words.

    Bette: Take me home.

    TBC…

     

     

     

     

     

     

     

     

     

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    8. South Street…one of my favourite NYC spots Flair :D

      Thanks for both chapters. I still say Bette’s too much woman for Tina. T needs to step up and meet the challenge of this ultimate NYer. And I love how you’ve written Bette…so vulnerable, but such a kick-ass…OooooWeeee!…hahaha.

    13. Damn that is so fucking hot and beautiful, and yet take me home and make love to me, that will be on the next chapter I hope. Please post soon, thanks! Great chapter!

    14. yay, tina heard Bette! alex is such a great guy. and i’ve just caught up on the past 3 chapters of my fav story aka. your story so now i’m happy! i liked that u had a chapter that was just about revealing Tina’s problems with their relationship. very good stuff, hope to see more soon! amazing Flair!

    15. Hey Flair, I haven’t posted in a while, but I wanted you to know that I am still reading, the last two chapters were beautiful…I am in NY, and the seaport is one of my favorite places

    18. K
      Wonderful as always! How sad to say I love you and not have them believe you. But I can see why Tina might think that. Hot and sexy! Love it, can’t wait for more.

    23. Tina is a writer. I love the way she expressed herself. She could imortalize their love in print. It would ease her self-torure, and give her a vocation every bit as valid as Bette’s acting.

      Thanks for coming back and posting another chapter. We needed this denouement.

    24. flair…I love your story! I just cannoot get enough of it…I was so happy to see you posted again! Now it is time for Tina to take Bette “home!” Whooppeeee!!!

    25. ” (…) send chills down Bette’s spine. Her heart was racing (…)”
      God, I feel the same way reading this second part of your truly magical seaport’s poem…
      And it was so amazing to find this new update right after I posted my comment to your last chapter : like a wish comes true ! (lol)

      By the way, I very like Techgal’s idea : something similar could be great for Tina indeed. Two different artistic talents mixed for the good of their love… yes, that could be great.

      … oh, and did I tell you enough how much I love your story ? Let’s me tell it again and again to convince you, just like Bette did : I LOVE it !!! ^_^

    26. oh that was so sweet! I wasn’t feeling very well, and I couldn’t sleep (time difference in Europe!) but your story made me feel better, and I think I can sleep now! I really loved it! thanx for posting and I can’t wait to read more!

    27. and what did my eye spy. another post from flair. aaahhhhh! tina tina tina. its gonna be bad enough for her with all the lezzies coming on to bette after the shows and all. better start getting a thick skin. thanks. and keep it coming.

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