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    Can’t Help Falling In Love Chapter 39

    Story written on July 12, 2005 by flairforthedramatic.
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    “Girl. girl girl, you’ve gone and set me on fire”
    Let’s clear the air

    Bette took a hold of Tinas arm to reassure her.

    Bette: T, its fine. Seriously. I know you didnt mean it that way.

    Tina: See this is what I mean? Im a mess, why on earth would you want me?

    Bette: Because you are the most wonderful mess I know.

    Tina: Dont say that.

    Bette: Its the truth.

    Tina: There will be other messes, more wonderful than I am. And they can offer you more than I can.

    Bette: T, thats what this is about?

    Tina sat silent again.

    Bette: T, dont you get it?

    Tina shook her head.

    Bette: I am a name. Thats all I am. And people can have my name, they can have my picture they can have an autograph and they can even have a hug, but they cant have my heart. Thats yours.

    Tina: Everyone wants a piece of you.

    Bette smiled sweetly.

    Bette: Maybe, but all I want is a piece of you. Doesnt that count?

    Tina: Of course.

    Bette: OK, then. So problem solved. Dont you feel better?

    Tina gave Bette a small smile.

    Bette: You can do better than that.

    Tina watched as the corners of Bettes soft mouth turned up into a perfect smile exposing her brilliant white teeth. It was infectious and Tina had no choice but to smile along with her.

    Bette: Much better. Now

    In one swift motion Bette had pushed Tina back on the bed and straddled her.

    Bette: We have some unfinished business to attend to.

    Tina used all of her strength to roll Bette onto her back.

    Bette: Oh my.

    Tina smiled.

    Tina: I can be tough when I wanna be.

    Bette: I like a tough lady.

    Tina bent down and met Bettes sweet lips with her own.

    Tina: And now, for my last trick

    Tina placed her hand up Bettes shirt until she reached the clasp in the front of Bettes bra. With one quick snap the bra opened.

    Tina: tada!

    Bette arched her eyebrows with delight.

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    3. i have happy feet today. you posted. as you know love it. so glad that tina is seeing the light. needs to still be strong cuz it will uncomfortable for her to see her with others and bette needs to take care of tinas heart. post soon.

    4. alright now where’s the next one! so happy that tina understands now understands bette as well as herself. i’m missing the alex banter, and i hope he finds someone. u should write a book, cause this story is fantastic!

    5. Wow, that was such an important discovery for Tina. It was so nice that the realization is sweet and loving I love your story once again a awesome installment. THanks

    9. ” Her lips met the button of Bette’s jeans and she quickly used her teeth to undo them.”
      Girl, do you know how much orthodontia costs??? Tina’s parents would probably cringe if they saw this…though probably not for fear of her teeth.
      Okay. Nevermind that…
      “Floating, falling,
      sweet intoxication!
      Touch me, trust me
      savour each sensation!
      Let the dream begin,
      let your darker side give in…”

      Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhh, yesssssssssss.

    12. so i’ve spent the last 3 days catching up on your stories and I’m absolutely in love with your writing. I have got to e-mail you. or you’ve got to e-mail me! Please…..you’re awesome!

    19. Again you always leave us breathless, either NC-17 or Drama…but always breathless. You have dialed in total knowledge of these two with this story…all who read are honored that you continue….so pls CONTINUE!!!!

    20. “Tina: And now, for my last trickÉ

      Tina placed her hand up Bette’s shirt until she reached the clasp in the front of Bette’s bra. With one quick snap the bra opened.

      Tina: tada!”
      …
      “Tina: Hey, we’re playing by your rules, remember? “We can take our time, I’m not going anywhere.” I guess you should eat your words.”

      Bette: I have something else you can eat.”

      Great lines in this chapter, flair! I had to fight not to spit water out at my computer or to choke! Excellent job!!! I’m glad Tina finally realizes what they mean to each other. Thank you!

    21. K
      Damn girl, that was hot. Glad Tina finally got it. LOVE this so much. Please post again before tomorrow morning, I won’t be able to read this for 5 days, I don’t know how I will survive.

    27. Hurray, my favorite story is back !
      How beautiful was Tina’s realization at the end, that just gave me a sweet thrill…

      You know, taking this new great chapter’s ideal opportunity, I wanted to let you know how much I admire the way you so wonderfully succeed depicting each one of B&T’s love makings with all different moods and lights : teasing or deeply romantic, highly hot or movingly tender – and always so subtly mixed with every pieces of drama (for exemple, this last fairy moonlight moment mixed with inward painful and intense feelings – or also the former so bittersweet scene that mixed the hottest love making ever with Alice’s heartbreaking sorrow in the next room, like echoes of raindrops in the middle of a tempest…
      With you, so gifted storyteller, no scene is gratuitous because the stage is always mixed with the wings. Applause !

      Yes, so-well-called Flairforthedramatic, you definitly have all the possible colours in your painter’s palette (something our dear arts’ lover Bette would deeply appreciate in you !) for the biggest pleasure of all your faithful readers – and consequently for mine too of course. So much.
      So, here’s once more these two simple words to express that in the most sincere way : THANK YOU !

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