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Can’t Help Falling In Love Chapter 44
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Tina: *****, Bette.
Bette reached for
Tina’s right leg, wrapping it over her shoulder. Tina placed one hand on the
sink to steady herself and the other wrapped in Bette’s hair.
Tina: God, I didn’t
think I would make it through this night without feeling you inside of me.
Bette took Tina’s
swollen ***** between her lips and applied a gentle pressure. She reached her
hand up Tina’s thigh and slowly let 2 fingers enter her. Bette’s tongue now
drew small circles around Tina’s hard *****.
Tina: Harder, please.
Bette used all of her
strength to pump her fingers quickly in and out of her lover. She kept her fast
pace all the while licking the wetness surrounding her fingers.
Tina: ***** me Bette.
Bette needed no further
instruction she let a third finger enter Tina and proceeded to guide them
quickly in and out. Bette kept her eyes focused upward, watching Tina lick her
lips. She knew she was close. Tina took her hand from the sink and brought it
to meet her other hand already tangled in Bette’s hair. She pushed her
girlfriends face deeper into her core, wanting to feel all of Bette. Her hands
pulled at Bette’s hair as she exploded onto Bette’s face. She lapped up every
drop of Tina, letting nothing escape her own tongue. When Tina had regained her
strength she swung her leg back over Bette’s shoulder bringing it down to the
floor. She looked down at beautiful angel kneeling before her. Tina dropped the
ground in front of Bette and pulled her in for a smoldering kiss.
Tina: You never cease
to amaze me.
Bette: I hope you can
say that 20 years from now.
It brought a smile to
Tina’s face knowing Bette had thought of them that far in the future.
Tina took Bette’s soft
hands and helped her up off the floor. They shared one more kiss before
sneaking back into the bed with their unsuspecting friend. Tina wrapped her
exhausted body around Bette’s and snuggled into the crook of her neck.
Tina: I love you.
Bette’s smiled widened.
Bette: I love you.
She placed a sweet kiss on her girlfriend’s head before closing her eyes and falling immediately asleep.
Bette woke up alone in
the bed at 8:30 the next morning. She heard the shower running and saw Tina
sitting at the table drinking a cup of coffee.
Bette rubbed her eyes
sleepily.
Bette: What time did
you get up?
Tina smiled at the sound of Bette’s raspy morning voice.
Tina: Just 20 minutes
ago. Alex went downstairs and they
will have a room for him by 1 o clock.
Bette: That’s good
news.
Tina stood up and
walked over to Bette’s side, sharing a sweet kiss.
Tina: Good morning.
Bette smiled brightly.
Bette: Great morning.
Tina: Oh, babe, before
I forget, you’re cell phone was ringing before.
Bette: Can you pass it
to me T?
Tina reached down to
the edge of the dresser and handed over to Bette.
Bette: Thank you.
Tina: Anytime.
She gave Bette a quick
wink before going back to her coffee.
Bette eyed her cell
phone suspiciously, 3 voice messages.
She didn’t even bother
listening to them; she recognized Chad’s number and called him immediately. The
phone only rang once before he answered.
Chad: Where the *****
have you been?
Bette: Well Chad,
usually when it’s late at night people do this strange thing called sleep.
Chad: Now isn’t the
time for sarcasm Bette. Megan broke her leg, literally and Leah has to go on
for Jenn. We have no one to cover your role! You need to come back!
Bette: What? I can’t.
Tina’s eyes focused
completely on Bette.
Chad: It’s that or lose
your job.
Bette was silent.
Chad: I’ll book you a
flight; just keep your cell phone on so I can call you back.
Bette: Ok.
Chad had already hung
up.
Bette: *****!
Tina: what? What’s
wrong?
The door to the
bathroom opened and Alex emerged in a pair of boxer briefs.
Alex: Why was there a
towel on the bathroom floor this morning or do I not want to know?
The girls were silent.
Alex: Did I say
something?
Bette: I have to go
back…
TBC…
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lol, this story cracks me up. I can just picture Rupert Evert (the roll he played in My Best Friends Wedding) as Alex.
What a delight to read. I am so in love with this story and you just continue to bring the goods with each chapters. Thanks so much
GOD..I love this story. You could write a million chapters and I would read them all. Funny, full of love, and great sex. please post soon
This makes me laugh so much
My Flair lady, you’re such a naughty girl here ! At first the hitchcockian suspense of the one-bed thing, then a delightful reward for the poor readers who were as red as Tina… and bing here’s the big unexpected drama to end the journey ! Grrrr… let me friendly tweak your ear ! (*big wink !*)
… Well, seriously now : do I really need to express once more how much, how deeply I enjoy your story ??? I L-O-V-E I-T !!! ^_^
ah flair, more drama. thanks. knew some good times couldn’t last forever. you know how much i love this story. so please post away.
Great chapter, love the humer and awaiting the drama.
Enjoying each chapter. Please post again, soon.
Tks for the bonus….we did deserve it and tks!!! You could see this happening, it’s too much for you to let the seperation things not happen…I’m sure that there is too juicey a story turning around that brain of yours…ee haw!!! tks
Funny, funny and well written. Encore, encore and give us more.
Funny tina will understand people have to work
Funny, sexy and bad new. Hope Tina’ll understand. Thank you
LOL, it’s hillarious but well, Bette, I think you do have to go back. No worries, your gf will be back in no time.
Sorry I have not commented in awhile. I have been out of town. I am still in love with your story! I love the relationships between all three characters.
Loving the banter between these 3! Can’t wait for the next chapter =)
I JUST READ THIS ENTIRE STORY FROM CHAPTER 1 TO 44 AND I AM HOOKED. YOU ARE THE ONLY WRITER ON THIS SITE WHO REALLY PUTS THEIR OWN ORIGNAL SPIN ON THESE AMAZING CHARACTERS. NO WRITER HAS EVER MADE ME LAUGH AS MUCH AS YOU AS WELL AS KEEP ME IN SUSPENSE. NOT TO MENTION YOUR SEX SCENES ARE JUST AMAZING! EVERYTHING FEELS SO REAL. I ALSO LOVE HOW YOU MADE NYC SO 3D FOR THOSE WHO DON’T KNOW THE CITY. TO ME IT HAS BECOME ITS OWN CHARACTER IN THIS STORY! PLEASE KEEP IT UP! I HOPE THE JUDGES FOR THE FAN FIC CONTEST SEE HOW WONDERFUL AND ORIGNAL THIS STORY IS AND HOW TRULY AMAZING YOU ARE AS AN AUTHOR! 100 STARS! THANKS FOR KEEPING ME HOOKED, I’M ALWAYS LOOKING FOR A NEW ADDICTION!
This story had me LMAO Flair. You are a great writer. Love this story. keep up the good work You Rock.
She has to go back! Ahhh! Nooooooo!!! Haha, I love this story, please post again soon!
Wade i was about to say the same thing about Alex…lol..ok…ohh now i´m sad about Bette and Tina..i hope you find a way so Bette could stay with Tina..and you never cease to amaze me too.amazing chapter please post soon thanks
Another wonderful chapter. You never disappoint us readers. I don’t want Bette to go :( Stupid clumsy Megan breaking her leg. Doesn’t she know that when someone says “go break a leg” they don’t really mean it lol B&T will be even more sexually frustrated during the remaining time of the 2 weeks, which means some good sex will be coming up hehe Post again soon :)
Once again, laughing out loud. I can’t wait for more.
Surely they can last for two weeks!
Or, maybe not…
LOL! WHOA! HA HA HA LOL! Again Hey I’m still crack me up to the other story chapter 43 in the Bathroom Air Plane LOL! and this one still funny I Love it but then Bette is going back home Please write more funny post soon THANKS.
i love this story. it has everything. i laughed i cried i took a cold shower.
Damn still so fucking funny and hot, man Bette has to go back, it’s sad. Let see what’s next. Post soon, thanks!
Truely loving this story. I love the comedy and even the drama. Great job Flair.
Yay for extended chapters!! It really sucks that Bette has to go back already, but at least they had one great night together. Maybe Megan’ll recover right away and Bette’ll be able to go back really soon? Thanks, flair!
Flair,
Astonishing!
How on earth did Bette then Tina not wake Alex? Did they drug him? Surely he can’t be that heavy a sleeper.
It was very sexy especially heightened with the likelihood of being caught.
I love the way you go from humor to shock to reality to sultriness to hot sex to ‘Helllooo baby’ to despair.
How will the separation affect the gals? Will they be seduced by the temptations around them? Will there be misunderstandings?
All these questions and more to be answered in the next Long chapter. Please.
Your loyal fan.
ha! girl, you always bring the drama.
K
Well damn, the trip was fun while it lasted. Too bad B has to go back. Wonderful chap as always. Love this. Can’t wait for more.
This was super hot!!