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Can’t Let Her go Chapter 8
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Candace rubbed Bettes back soothingly, whispering everything would be all right, and laying gentle kisses on her dampened cheeks…assuring Bette that everything would be okay in the end….
Bette cried and cried, wanting to feel loved again…taking pleasure of being held…and imagining it was Tina…..
Baggage Claim…
Tina and Kasey stood by the luggage carousel and anxiously waited for their luggage to come out…Tina watched her niece impatiently tap her foot…She realized that a lot of her own habits had been picked up by the little one and that made her smile….
Tina: Oh look here they come…
The carousel started up and the two walked closer so they could get their luggage. A few minutes passed and soon they spotted Kasey’s pink luggage first. Kasey bounded toward it and tried to get it off but it was to heavy for her so she wound up missing it. Tina was a bit behind and was unable to reach it
Tina: Uh-oh I guess were gonna have to buy you new clothes, since you missed it.
Kasey looked shocked
Kasey: But my picture of me and Bette is in there I need it…I can’t lose her again…
Her voice shaked….
Before Tina could get out that she was just joking around and that the luggage would be back around shortly Kasey jumped on top of the carousel and tried walking towards her luggage…
Tina at first stood in shock as some people laughed others look scared as the little girl crawled towards her bag. In that moment Tina literally felt a few gray hairs sprout of her head and she yelled Kasey’s name.
Tina: Oh my God, Oh my God…Kasey get down from there
Tina was running towards her niece who was drifting away a bit too fast for Tina’s liking…Kasey unaware of any danger ignored her aunt and continued crawling towards her luggage…giggling a little as she saw her aunt wobbling towards her direction…Tina aware of all the staring, felt her face flash with heat as she watched in embarassment and horror…She finally caught up to Kasey and ripped her off the carousel..
Kasey came tumbling off into Tina’s arms…
Kasey apparently shocked of Tina’s rough display said nothing as she watched her luggage slip away yet again..
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It’s amazing what pride can cause someone to do. There are so many missed opportunities that we all accept simply because they are less complicated than dealing with the real issues. Wonderfully written as always.
awww man that is sad! poor kasey…well i really hope she is the one that will make Bette forget about Candace (she sucks and you know it! :P) and get back to Tina :) Stop the torture !! lol
ok..you don’t have to kill a character because you are doing a good enough job on me. UGH… will you please post soon…need to get to where tina and bette are back together and candace has fallen off the face of the earth.
Awwww man Bette…go 4 the temptation….GO FOR IT!!!!!! U gotta get candy ass outta the picture…B has gotta get back with T, and own up to her BS…..SOON!!!!!!!!On another note, when r u gonna post another chappy of Hold me…kiss me…..forever????
My hangover wasn’t as painful as reading that Bette is giving up! NOOOOOOOOO!!!!! Have her cling to Tina – Casey will help them, nobody can resist a child that looks up to them like she does to Bette!
F**K, F**k F**k candy ass go away,
Forget Bette already…Exactly and if the kid needs therapy because of this I’ll gladly pay for it. Í don’t like how this Tina is shaping up. She should not take Bette back until she gets her shit together and even then she should have to work for it. It’s one thing to cheat but to be this low is well lets just say ewww.
AHHH ok i admit it Kasey cracks me up (i like kids really!!lol)I can understand Bettes need to move on and really its only with Candace because “shes there shes handy” ok there are some feelings but im glad she told her she wasnt over Tina yet!!!hey wheres there hope…so i sense there will be some sparks aflying hopefully good ones but not before the bad ones…bring on the drama…and look i packed it all into one comment box!!!god im good!lol still lovin it
Aww that made me sad. How can she just try to push her out of her mind and heart like that? I hope Tina won’t see Bette with Candace…that would totally crush her.
i’m laughing and agreeing w/ xxjoey6. maybe it’s me but i don’t like her at all. but the part with kasey was priceless. the bystander in the scene are the people i can’t stand. they’re always quick to tell somebody something bout parenting, knowing damn well they ain’t the greatest parents in the world or they don’t have themselves. but the chap was wonderful as always. please post soon. PEACE.
Dayum!!! No car wrecking or fatal work accident for Candy…lol Too bad then, we’ll continue to hate her with a passion…! Poor little Kasey, she makes me melt like butter in a frying pan every single time, hang on baby! Come on T, get a freakin’ grip, you can do this! Great as always, post soon! :)
LOL..loved your comment, “isn’t great true love left in the hands of a 5 year old.” Kasey is priceless..God, if you didn’t know she was Tina’s niece you could swear she was related to Alice..except she seems to have common sense. LOL. Bette is in survival mode…she’s clinging onto Candance because she’s there…it’s convenient. If Tina would have stayed she would have tried; but what can you expect? Tina left, she disappeared…Bette needs to move on. Damn, I’m on a seesaw. LOL. Got myself dizzy for a moment. I can understand both sides…of course, they are wrong, but I can see why they feel as they do. Thanks for the update…as always a pleasure to read.
No no more Bette and Tina! Ok, Bette could try to move on, but S~L~O~W~L~Y~. Tee, get your woman back, QUICKLY. =P
Tina better hurry up and get to bette to stop her from forgetting her. Kasey to the rescue.. can’t wait for Kasey to see bette
I guess your going to torture us for awhile yet nyc but that’s ok i will keep reading!!!
Oh I’ll keep readin. I think I must like the pain, either that or I trust U to make it right. Thanks for taking the time.
What are you crazy? Of course we want you to keep writing the story! We love it! Keep up the good work!
well good timing on tinas part…i cant wait ny!!
Yippeee! Another chappy for me!!! I can’t wait for Kasey to talk some sense into Bette, as only a child can, about “moving on” with Candy girl!
Things can be worst between B/T ??? Anyway I can’t stop read it !! But sometimes I wish I had some FASTFOWARD control to kwnow how it will end!!!I’m enjoying not this post but the whole story! I love Kasey so young and so smart I feel sorrow for Tina, I hate Bette right now but I understand her feelings and I miss the gang!!I don’t kwnow if you post again before Christmas but I wish you FELIZ NATAL!Fui….
Still sad. Poor Kasey and can’t wait to see her see Bette and hope Tina will get her woman back and kick candace’s ass away! Ok post soon please, thanks!
kasey is my only hope
Pride goth before a fall. Hope Tina calls Bette before she spends the Night With Candace. Can stand her. Bette has better taste than that. Thanks
At least 20 people posted prior to me and none of you have grabbed Bette by the back of the collar and made me get that number out the trash……..excuse me (pushing ya’ll out the way) Bette, get your azz back here!!
I love your story, please post soon. happy new year !