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A little while later Kit arrived. Alice and her new pal Helena were close behind. A few other mutual friends to the group came as well. Then the night took a quick turn south. Just as Alice and Bette finished blending margaritas, Dana and Lara arrived.
Bette: “Come on now
Dana and Lara: “Hey everyone.”
Group: “Hey!”
The two walked around and greeted everyone. Then they got to Bette and Alice. Lara hugged Bette.
Dana: “Hey, Al.”
Dana: to Bette. “Still?”
Bette: “she’s hurting Dana. Give her time, she’ll come around.”
When things seemed to not be able to get worse, in walked MarkTina’s Mark.
Mark: “Hello everyone”
Bette: to herself. “What the hell? To Dana. “Who invited him?!”
Tina walked over to him and they hugged. Bette looked over in Shane and Carmen’s direction. They both shrugged and looked puzzled indicating they hadn’t invited him. Clearly, Tina had. Dana rubbed her arm.
Bette: “where the hell is
The mood was awkward. The party seemed to be divided. Dana, Lara, Tina, and Mark on one side. Bette, Alice, Helena, Carman and Shane on the other, with Kit, Jenny, and Mark playing peacemaker. Right when things seemed to hit rock bottom, a little hope was offered. Bette heard the distinct rumble of a vintage Harley Davidson. Bette’s heart could have leapt our of her chest. Not only was she eager to see MK once more, but she was anxious to show Tina she wasn’t the only one with options to explore.
MK walked through the drive way into the back. All conversation stopped as the beauty walked in. She wore a brown leather blazer with matching boots and a sheer button down shirt that exposed her black lacy bra underneath. Her was pulled to one side, draping over her right shoulder. Her high cheek bones were exposed and the new do made her eyes pop even more. She was a natural beauty so she worse little or no make-up. Only lip gloss from the looks of it that made her mouth look juicy and inviting.
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i have to agree with whats being said, its not fair bette still isnt gettin any cuz of tina, bette and MK are good together, definitely rooting for them. love this story.
Really enjoying your story. Still would be most happy with T/B together but as it stands with show right now I like this scenario. Chaiken really pisses me off with how she’s portraying Tina. Anyhoo, can’t wait for more.
Ewww… it’s still very hard for me to accept this Tina. This is so wrong to be with MAN after all the dramas from S2, I just don’t get it! I’m very frustrated as I’m living in UK (mean I have to wait for months to watch the S3), and all I could read are all these spoilers.. sobs.. it’s really breaking my heart.
Opps.. forgot to say, I enjoy reading your story even though it’s breaking my heart. Bette deserves to have some fun! Go MK, don’t hold up!
Tina…where’s your head at?!” Vibes, you are really trying to make us wanna “put a hit out” on Tina. Unfortunately, you don’t have to work hard on this one as the small screen version is making us very edgy. Anywho, very cool response from MK. Tina really needs to get a grip, decide where her heart is, stop just acting and talk to Bette. I have actually read stories with a few good matches for Bette. Even though the author warned and warned us through the build up, I was still a hopeful, yet sobbing Tibetter to the end when B&T did not end up together. Please continue to go where your heart leads.
This is still breaking my B&T heart, but I like the way you write, but why are there two guys named Mark??….Of course Mark can touch Tina in a way Bette hasn’t in some time because she won’t let her!!!!
I’m enjoying this story very much.
really, really, really enjoying the story line. Mk and bette seem good together and it should so go further. who gives a flying hoot about Tina at the moment anyway. though i have to admit i still am a huge tibette fan.
God damn it you mean even in fanfic Bette is not getting any because of Tina. Come on let Bette get hers since Tina seems to be getting her fill. I know not very mature but it is fair. btw since Tina feels like Bette has not touched her like that in a while doesn’t she think the best thing would be to either work on it or walk. Nice story.
Hey let Bette have some :P Why think about Tina? she is doing Mark anyway. Im liking MK..she is cool.
Another Lovely chapter…why can’t MK exist on the show??? Tina has not even giving Bette the chance to be there for her or talk about their issues. I am rooting for MKBette!!!
but i still luved it
How does she know what Bette can give her,she hasn’t given Bette the chance. Bette has more on her mind than Tina right now. Tina is going to come up the loser. thanks
Really enjoy this chapter. Tina got to realize she cant have her cake and eat it too. Go MK!
u should of let tina c bette with her…