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MK: To Bette who’s talking to Jenny. “why isn’t anyone swimming?”
Shane over hears.
Shane: “Yeah, why is that?”
MK: “Hey Shane woulda say we kick off this pool party?”
Shane: “yes lets.”
MK: “I don’t have my suit but..”
Shane: “fuck it”
MK: “Yes” looking at Bette “lets”
Shane and MK begin to undress. People looked on and smiled. Mark catches on and begins to strip too. Mk removers her jacket slowly in front of Bette looking her square into the eyes. Even with everyone watching. She then bends to remover her boots. She slowly began to unbutton her shirt, letting it fall to the floor. By now Shane, Carmen, and Jenny have entered the pool. MK unbuttons her jeans and slowly wiggles out of them. She now only wears her black lacy bra and matching boy style panties. Mk did this intentionally. One, to entertain Bette and two, to give Tina something to think about. If she didn’t want Bette, there were others who did. This was too much for Mark, Tina’s date, to handle. Tina wasn’t enjoying herself anymore either. They went inside the house. Bette and MK both noticed, everyone did. And they all secretly felt a bit of vindication on behalf of Bette for the other night at the planet. MK looked again at Bette and asked:
MK: “Coming?”
Bette: “Very soon” with a sly smile as she too began to undress.
MK went ahead and jumped in. Everyone shouted as she did. MK watched from the pool as Betted undressed. She soon after jumped in as well. The group happily swam around. MK and Bette touching and flirting in the water. The group, felt comfortable including MK in the fold. Especially Bette.
Tina watched from the window. She began to think about Bette and losing her and it scared her. Especially for Angies sake. But her connection with Mark was inexcusable. He touched her in a way Betted hadn’t in some time. So she didn’t want to end it with him because of jealousy. He entered the kitchen where Tina was watching through the patio doors.
Mark: “How bout we get out of here?”
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i have to agree with whats being said, its not fair bette still isnt gettin any cuz of tina, bette and MK are good together, definitely rooting for them. love this story.
Really enjoying your story. Still would be most happy with T/B together but as it stands with show right now I like this scenario. Chaiken really pisses me off with how she’s portraying Tina. Anyhoo, can’t wait for more.
Ewww… it’s still very hard for me to accept this Tina. This is so wrong to be with MAN after all the dramas from S2, I just don’t get it! I’m very frustrated as I’m living in UK (mean I have to wait for months to watch the S3), and all I could read are all these spoilers.. sobs.. it’s really breaking my heart.
Opps.. forgot to say, I enjoy reading your story even though it’s breaking my heart. Bette deserves to have some fun! Go MK, don’t hold up!
Tina…where’s your head at?!” Vibes, you are really trying to make us wanna “put a hit out” on Tina. Unfortunately, you don’t have to work hard on this one as the small screen version is making us very edgy. Anywho, very cool response from MK. Tina really needs to get a grip, decide where her heart is, stop just acting and talk to Bette. I have actually read stories with a few good matches for Bette. Even though the author warned and warned us through the build up, I was still a hopeful, yet sobbing Tibetter to the end when B&T did not end up together. Please continue to go where your heart leads.
This is still breaking my B&T heart, but I like the way you write, but why are there two guys named Mark??….Of course Mark can touch Tina in a way Bette hasn’t in some time because she won’t let her!!!!
I’m enjoying this story very much.
really, really, really enjoying the story line. Mk and bette seem good together and it should so go further. who gives a flying hoot about Tina at the moment anyway. though i have to admit i still am a huge tibette fan.
God damn it you mean even in fanfic Bette is not getting any because of Tina. Come on let Bette get hers since Tina seems to be getting her fill. I know not very mature but it is fair. btw since Tina feels like Bette has not touched her like that in a while doesn’t she think the best thing would be to either work on it or walk. Nice story.
Hey let Bette have some :P Why think about Tina? she is doing Mark anyway. Im liking MK..she is cool.
Another Lovely chapter…why can’t MK exist on the show??? Tina has not even giving Bette the chance to be there for her or talk about their issues. I am rooting for MKBette!!!
but i still luved it
How does she know what Bette can give her,she hasn’t given Bette the chance. Bette has more on her mind than Tina right now. Tina is going to come up the loser. thanks
Really enjoy this chapter. Tina got to realize she cant have her cake and eat it too. Go MK!
u should of let tina c bette with her…