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    chap 6 – summertime

    Story written on August 22, 2008 by salerate.
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    B.E.T.T.E’S V.E.R.S.I.O.N O.F T.I.N.A’S D.E.P.A.R.T.U.R.E

     

    "I’m sorry…I didn’t mean to…

    -It’s ok…It’s not your fault."

     

    …With the exception of Tina who was looking at her with concern.  She was so pretty and sweet.  Bette felt like stroking her cheek.  It looked so soft.  She raised her hand but stopped halfway.  Instead, she took the blond by the elbow and dragged her to her level.  Tina had the most fine-looking eyes ever.

     

     

    "How old are you?

    -I’m fifteen.
    -Mhmm…I was sure you were older…”

     

    It was somehow deceiving…

    ”and you? How old are you?
    -Seventeen
    -I thought you were my age
    -Jesus! I look like I’m fifteen?”

     

    What Tina just said was pretty insulting!

    ”Well…Hey! What’s wrong with being fifteen?

     

    And what Bette had answered was pretty TACTLESS!

    ”Nothing…It’s just that it’s kind of young…”

     

    She looked quite stupid now…

    ”Yeah…’cause you’re so much older.”

     

    VERY STUPID.

    ”I’m not…but there’s a huge difference of maturity between a fifteen year old and a seventeen year old because it’s a period of life where we experience a lot of change.
    -I can’t believe this! You are so pretentious!”

     

    Apparently, it was the wrong thing to say…

    ”I’m just stating a fact.
    -Whatever. “

     

    Tina jumped on her feet about to leave.  Bette’s couldn’t le her go.  Her heart sunk at the idea of never seeing her again.

     

    "Oh come on! You’re not really going to leave me because of that!”

     

    She was about to cry again.  She hated this summer.  Everything was going wrong.

    ”It’s getting late and my mother must be worried.”

     

    Bette closed her eyes in relief.

    ”Ok, wait. I’ll walk you to your door.”

     

    Bette was imposing herself again but she had to make sure to know where to find Tina the next day.   She smiled at Tina who was waiting at a few steps distance from her.

     

    "Tina?"

     

    She seemed completely gone.  Bette tried to catch her attention.  She touched her shyly. 

     

    "I thought you were in a hurry?

    -I’m sorry. I was daydreaming.
    -More like nightdreaming."

     

    Had she really said THAT?  That had to be the worst joke ever made…but Tina laughed in a warm and sincere way.  Bette blushed.  The lovely blond suddenly grabbed two of her finger and pulled her through a meandrous path.  Bette could feel her heart racing, as she was being lead by Tina.   “I wish she could lead me again and again!”  She thought even if it didn’t make any sense.  They stopped in front of a door…way to soon.

     

    "513”

     

    Bette said knowing that it was a number that she would never forget.

    ”Yes”

     

    Tina answered.  The brunette suddenly wondered if she wasn’t the only one who had hoped the moment would never end.

    ”Tomorrow, I’ll come and knock at your door and wake you up. We’re playing a volleyball game you could join”

     

    “PLEASE SAY YES” was the only thing Bette could think.

    ”That would be nice
    -I guess I should go now.”

     

    But she didn’t want to go

    ”-Ok.
    -See you tomorrow.
    -Yeah
    -Bye
    -Bye" 

     

    And she disappeared behind the door of the room 513.  Bette was immobile for a while grasping the last effluvium of Tina’s perfume.

     

    “Tina”

     

    She said timidly.

     

    “Tina, Tina, Tina.”

     

    She repeated louder and louder as she walked back to her room trembling…laughing…unable to walk straight. 

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    2. It’s a really nice story =) but I really like it since Tina’s point of view. And if you continue to tell the story from both sides it will become a little tiring =/ Hope you post soon from T’s side of the story ;D

    4. Really like this story and we can NEVER have too many TiBette stories that show how they started a relationship. This is YOUR story and you should tell it as you see it or as the characters give it to you, because they will direct you, no matter what you are thinking. The characters tend to take on a life of their own if you listen to them. They will lead you. Let them. Whether you tell the story from either point of view, it doesn’t realy matter, what matters is what the characters want you to do. Keep writing we will keep reading. Now I will finish reading this chapter. Have a great weekend. PPS

    6. Like Dainty said, let the story speak to you and you can’t go wrong…you’re doing a great job so far!….Hmm, Bette “drunk” on Tina, sounds about right ;)

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