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    Frozen Beginning – Chapter 10

    Story written on June 2, 2015 by kins40.
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    For once Tina, had to agree. The master bedroom was a triumph. Light, airy, with large window panels opening on a large green expanse. Away from prying eyes it would surely mean waking up in complete seclusion and beautiful surroundings. “Where will the bed be?” Kelly suddenly demanded, affecting again her air of great connoisseur

    For once Tina, had to agree. The master bedroom was a triumph. Light, airy, with large window panels opening on a large green expanse. Away from prying eyes it would surely mean waking up in complete seclusion and beautiful surroundings.

    “Where will the bed be?” Kelly suddenly demanded, affecting again her air of great connoisseur in all matters of Feng Shui but throwing suggestive looks in Bette’s direction.

    Tina ignored them and started on her plan for a colour scheme in this particular room. Her idea was for soft colours and furnishings.

    “Wait a minute,” Bette interrupted, “Kelly’s question is pertinent. Where will my bed be?”

    “You gotta make sure, it is not backing on the window. That wouldn’t be Zen. It has to be Zen, it is important to me.”

    “I didn’t know civil engineers were that knowledgeable in Oriental philosophies?” Tina cut the other woman’s ramblings, “Is it new in the curriculum?”

    Not really expecting an answer, Tina carried on leafing through the swatch catalogue proposing other colour schemes before she felt it removed from her hands by Kelly.

    “All you are proposing is boring.” Kelly exclaimed before addressing Bette. “What do you think my darling? We need bold colours, dangerous, passionate tones.”

    Her perfectly manicured finger was skimming over the different coloured rectangles as she leafed quickly through the book.

    “There!” Her finger finally stopped on a red and black design. “What do you say Betty Boo? A woman would be prepared to do all sorts of things in a room like this!”

    “Betty Boo?” Tina was trying really hard to suppress her laughter.

    “That’s my pet name for her.” Kelly obligingly explained.

    “Charming!” Tina bit the inside of her cheeks really hard as she found it increasingly difficult to keep her face straight.

    “I’ll think about it.” Bette replied quietly.

    “Why?” Tina seized the moment, regaling in the financier obvious sudden discomfort. “If you tell me the exact shade of red that you want, I can order it today. Kelly, isn’t that the one you like?”

    She found the exact spot on the page where a sample of wall paper stood boldly, its swirls of red, black and gold jumping aggressively at the onlooker.

    “I said I will think about it!” Bette reiterated snapping the book away from the two women and closing it with a loud thwack. “I have to go now. I’ll leave you to make the choices for the rest of the house.”

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    8. Hope the ol leg is getting better!

      This Bette is turning into an insecure and jelous control-freak, me no likey.
      Where is the mature, secure hottie from the chalet who in my opinion needs to figure out wether she wants a serious relationship with Tina or if she only wants a f**k tool.

      I also think Tina needs a serious apology and full disclosure of Bettes feelings for this relationship to work out. Poor Kelly is only used as a pawn.

      I have one complain: PLS POST MORE OFTEN….next to BenMac you are my favourite fiction writer on this site.
      Can`t wait for the continuation.

    9. .I’m thinking you are teasing us with Kelly.Didn’t like Kelly in the LWord
      and I certainly don’t like her in this story either’

      Not only are you teasing us but I’m pretty sure Bette and Kelly are teasing Tina too and are together in that.

      Hoping the next chapter sees them talking to one another and stop being so pigheaded .They need their heads banging together.

      Great chapter as usual my dear friend.Look forward to the next one..xxC

    12. I’m glad your leg is better! And as always it’s great to see a new post from you. Bette is being ridiculous, Tina deserves much more than this. She was always cocky and manipulative, but now also she’s also childish. Interesting to see how Tina started out as the immature one, but grew tremendously and is dealing far better with her attraction. Bette, on the other hand, is all kinds of lost! Hope she can see the error of her ways. And hope we can see another post soon! :)

    14. Glad to hear the leg is better. Hope it continues to improve. As for the chapter, yes it certainly was meant to provoke some reactions and sadly not in a good way. Bette wasn’t very likable at the beginning of this story but now she’s unbearable. Tina needs to stop allowing herself to be mistreated and disrespected; no matter the attraction. Unless I missed something in the story I don’t think Bette owns Tina so she should stop allowing herself from being treated like property instead of a person. It’s not like she’s hard up for the job or the money so she can walk away at any time. Bette using Kelly was childish and insensitive – as someone said earlier Tina deserves better. I hope she realizes it soon and gains some self-confidence, self-respect, and becomes her own person instead of Bette’s plaything to be toyed with. This certainly is a different TiBette than you normally deliver in your stories.

    15. Happy to know that you are much better. Totally agree with BAT2012 and a couple others. Sincerely hope uou will poison kelly very soon to get her out of this story. Thanks for posting.

    16. LOl.. this is a great story, Bette cracks me up and Tina was so childish at first but is starting to grow up some. Bette how ever doesn’t express all her feelings completely for some one like Tina to understand she is deeply in love with her also neither one can get past their own toying with the other to say what needs to be said it’s a game of cat and Mouse and the sexual frustration is building fear they may kill each other when they do finally get together. And they will get together!.. and Kelly is a ditz…pps…

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