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Chapter 24 – Extra Dirty
“Hey Tina, we ordered drinks from the waitress but I didn’t know what you wanted.” Dana interrupted.
Bette looked over at Dana and nodded in acknowledgment. “I was just going to the bar to grab myself a drink. Can I get you something?” she asked Tina.
“Yes, please. I’ll have a dirty vodka martini.”
“How dirty?” Bette asked with a knowing look.
“Extra dirty.” Tina flirted sexily.
They eye fucked a little longer before Bette slowly started for the bar without breaking the stare. “Okay, I’ll be right back with your extra dirty order.”
“I’ll be waiting with bated breath.” Tina replied truthfully.
Bette finally turned around and walked away.
Tina sat down next to Dana again but not before leering at Bette’s ass and involuntarily licking her lips. “What the hell, T!?” Dana exclaimed. “You guys are so getting it on tonight, aren’t you?”
Tina blushed. She smiled at her friends and began filling in the guys about last Friday at Hit.
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Bette walked up to Marina who was behind the bar enjoying the show. When she noticed Bette, she smiled. “Who’s the blonde?” she said motioning to Tina with her head.
Bette looked back at Tina who was now sitting and giggling with the others at the table.
“She’s fuckin’ hot, right?” Bette asked her friend.
Marina chuckled and nodded in agreement.
“Her name is Tina. I met her last Friday night at Hit but failed to get her phone number since Alice was knocked unconscious by one of Shane’s old conquests. Looks like I get a second shot at it tonight.”
“Good for you, Bette. Can I get you something?”
“Yeah. Let me get a Maker’s Mark Manhattan and an extra dirty Ketel One martini for the extra dirty hottie over there.”
“Coming right up, Little P.”
“Once the show is over, I want to take her to the green room to meet Kit and everyone,” Bette tells Marina. “Can you make sure your people know she’s cool to let back there?”
“You got it, Bette. Uh-oh, looks like I’m out of Ketel One up here. I’m gonna go grab some from the back.” Marina said as she walked away.
“Okay,” Bette said as she turned around and leaned her back against the bar to alternate watching the band and Tina.
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Hi MeLL,
Thanks for my 3 Episode Fix – started Sunday night and completed early Monday morning.
Enjoying the re-write and looking forward to it’s ultimate completion.
Trust they’ll be more before the Festive Season so no Noël Greetings.
Luvs u and your stories:-)
SG
Thanks Sassy! Although it was a 4-episode fix (but who’s counting!?). I will definitely be back next week with 3-4 more chapters.
Hey don’t get Sassy with me I’m the expert:-)
My time line has me reading at strange times and I may miscalculate post numbers!
Anyway no matter the number of posts – thanks.
Look forward to more!
Have a good week
SG
Fantastic story…can’t wait for the next chapter..
Although the language sometimes hard to understand (for a non english speaker like me) but i really enjoy it… :-)
I’m glad you’re sticking with this story even if it’s difficult to understand. Feel free to ask me questions via PM if you’d like!
You made a great story.. Glad that you decided to share it to everyone.. ^_^
Hi! Thanks for another multi updates!
I am mentioned earlier that i hate Jodi character, don’t i? )
hahaha, yes, you may have mentioned your dislike for Jodi ;-)
Hi MeLL,
Thank you for the chapters!!!
They finally met again and their kiss. Mmmm, awesome!
Like Zhenya, i do not like Jodi at all, never saw the goodness in her, first class bitch.
Thank you for the updates, can i ask for more this week? I am free till Sunday.
I’ll see what I can do. It’s a pretty busy week for me until Saturday. Thanks for reading!
Thank you for posting this incredible story again!!!
It is so good and fun to read the new version!
I will wait patiently for the updates.
Wonderful !! I so love this story
I’ve read and re-read this story numerous times on the other site and I couldn’t resist this new version.
Please keep posting , can’t wait until next week :-D
Thanks for the kind words Izz and I’m super stoked to have you re-joining me for this ride!
Thank you, MeLL, for this multi-chapter posting. Finally T + B got to finish their dance without distractions.
And what a nice distraction for me at the beginning of the week.
Looking forward to the next weekend for more!
cheers
Glad I could accommodate that distraction ;-)
Thanks MelL, for all the chapters, just caught up reading all of them. Thanks again, for this new version of the story, enjoying it very much, happy you let them find one another again. Looks like the heat is on and a hot relationship is beginning. Fantastic!!!!! Please tell me you will not let Jodi get her hooks into Bette, can not stand that woman, she is the worst of the worst. And Nadia is not far behind. Thanks for posting.
Hi there Dainty!
Glad you could join me for the re-telling of this tale.
Cheers!