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Classical Repertoire… Chap 36
Next they went down the steep, slippery steps which lead to the Devil’s Cataract, a small alcove which allowed you to view the point where the main body of water plunged into the Gorge below. The mist rising up and lightly coating them in a film of water, displaying the reason why the steps were wet and the surrounding vegetation being more tropical and green. On of the most amazing things about this spot was the fact that because of the sunshine and the mist, if you were lucky, you would be able to see a rainbow which you felt you could almost touch. They then traipsed back up the stairs and began the walk which ran along side the Falls with intermittent alcoves where you could get closer and see some of the amazing areas of the Falls. The vegetation was remarkably different to the usual Zimbabwean grasslands, it was reminicant of a rainforest due to the constant mist which eminated from the Falls. Every once in a while they would see a vervit monkey or a small antelope hiding in the bush…. the monkeys were more adventurous and so came closer than the antelope and often stole your food if it was left anywhere they could reach. Bette was in awe of both her surroundings and the woman who’s love of her contry was evident to all, but especially to Bette who could hear the enthusiasm in her voice and see the excitement reflected in her eyes. She could see why Tina was in love with this country and how it had contributed to the wonderful woman that stood in front of her today, it was beautiful and serene yet it had an underlying strength to it…. just like Tina.
They finally reached the end of the trail and it was a rocky area with a beautiful view which looked back on the sights they had just seen. This was where Tina had wanted them to have their picnic, it was her favourite place as the view was spectacular. It showed the observer both the power and the beauty of Victoria Falls in one panoramic view, it encompased all she loved about the Falls and it was the perfect spot. Bette could see what Tina loved about this spot, it seemed as thought the Falls were made just so that people could come and look on in awe of the power and beauty of nature, to remind them that nature was here first and would seemingly outlast everything else. They had a veritable feast prepared for them, there was warthog baguettes that made your mouth water as well as sadza, which was made of maize or corn depending on where you come from, with a selection of cold meats such as steak, kudu, buffalo and the ever dependable chicken. A wonderful green salad was also prepared with a combination of green and black olives and feta cheese, mixed lettuce, tomatos and cucumber, most of which was hard to come by in Vic Falls. There was also a nice bottle of South African wine, a Boshendal Merlot that the staff knew was one of Tina’s favourites, to help wash down their meal. It was bursting with ripe tannins, rich fruit and layers of chocolate which lingered in the aftertaste. All in all it was a perfect day, the hot sun shining down on them, the mist cooling them and the food replenishing them after the long walk and fueling them for the walk back. Bette and Tina could not have imagined a more perfect day, it was one that would be etched into their memories and burned into their souls, they would remember this day for the rest of their lives.
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(59 votes, average: 3.46 out of 5)
A wonderfull story from a wonderfull country. Thank you
Wonderful….awsome….oh please continue…this is amazing….
Nix, this is a beautiful story. Thanks for sharing your country with us. Your chapters could never be too long. Please keep posting.
You bet I am still here but now you are going to kill me if you make me wait to see what Tina has..Love this story and love all in the info on Vic Falls..Please post soon..You are a excellent writer girl keep going
…IF we’re interested? (tapping fingers and waiting for more) Good job, nix!
as soon as I have scraped enough money togeher I will go see Wic Falls. Untill then I will continue to dream about your contry as you decribe it to me. I love your story and the proposel was just perfectly written.
This was absolutely perfect. Just what I needed! Thank you so much.
yeah.. if i get my work done then next week is the last week of hell and am free. who hoo!
Wow, what a great story everything seems just bigger than life including your T&B Thanks
i wonder what tina has under the pillow? please continue i love this story!!
Beautiful! Of course continue.
Beautiful! Of course continue.
Beautiful story. Your descriptions make me feel like I am right there with them. Yes, please continue.
Nix…..amazing chapter, just beautiful and romantic..Awwww …..gunna have a goofy smile plastered over my face all day now…hehe…..i love how you incorporate info. about your country in the story and i love how Tina was the one to propose:)……In short i just love this story of your…..btw your writing could never disappoint me….It made my day…Thank you:)
Yes please continue. I want to know what’s under the pillow.
Very romantic. I’m with everyone else Yes Please Continue!
that was really something very romantic and yes we do want more thanks
Beautiful,Brilliant,Wonderful.What more can I say,Please post soon.
WOW Nix…if I did not have a big smile on my face before this story – I sure am now. This is so beautiful….what can I say – I am speechless. Great update and post soon.
Hey..Nix…am very much in agreement with Lind…until i save up am gonna get more info on your wonderful country from you!!!…and this chapter was absolutely awesome babe : )