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Classical Repertoire… Chap 36
They sat eating their lunch and just basking in the beauty of their surroundings for over an hour, happy just being in each others company and oblivious to those around them. They were lost in the moment and it was then they both came to realise that all they needed for the rest of their lives was each other. Finally once they could not eat one more morsel of food they packed everything up and made thier way to the exit and on to the next phase of Bette and Tina’s special day. Tina just hoped that everything was prepared and the rest of the day went as smoothly as the first part, she had left the most important part of the day to the staff at Lokothula and she knew they wouldn’t let her down. It was going to be perfect, she just hoped that she could express all that she wanted to and that Bette would give her the answer she so desperatly wanted….
Once they had arrived back at the lodge Bette was greeted by the sight of hundreds of candles illuminating the lodge, the scent of vanilla mingling in the air. There was a trail of rose petals leading from the entrance to the outside dinning area, when Bette took a closer look she realised that the petals were not just any petals, they were yellow and tinged with pink. They had arrived just as the sun was setting as that background coupled with the candles was one of the most beautiful sights Bette had seen, she sat down on one of the chairs and just silently took in everything around her…. it was the kind of beauty that took your breath away, it was complete in its simplicity and Bette was slowly comitting it to memory knowing that this was going to be one of the best days of her life. It was only after she had sat there for a couple of minutes that she realised Tina wasn’t with her and as if it was destined just at that moment Tina joined Bette and once again she was left breathless and in awe of the vision in front of her. Tina had quickly changed into a simple baby pink silk dress which clung to her in all the right places, it had a plunging neck line which hinted at the incredible body which lay beneath and when Tina turned around to pick up the single flame lily that was hidden from Bette’s view Bette saw that her favourite part of Tina’s body was on display. It was a backless dress which ended just above Tina’s ***** and showed her tattoo and Bette could not take her eyes off her.
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(59 votes, average: 3.46 out of 5)
A wonderfull story from a wonderfull country. Thank you
Wonderful….awsome….oh please continue…this is amazing….
Nix, this is a beautiful story. Thanks for sharing your country with us. Your chapters could never be too long. Please keep posting.
You bet I am still here but now you are going to kill me if you make me wait to see what Tina has..Love this story and love all in the info on Vic Falls..Please post soon..You are a excellent writer girl keep going
…IF we’re interested? (tapping fingers and waiting for more) Good job, nix!
as soon as I have scraped enough money togeher I will go see Wic Falls. Untill then I will continue to dream about your contry as you decribe it to me. I love your story and the proposel was just perfectly written.
This was absolutely perfect. Just what I needed! Thank you so much.
yeah.. if i get my work done then next week is the last week of hell and am free. who hoo!
Wow, what a great story everything seems just bigger than life including your T&B Thanks
i wonder what tina has under the pillow? please continue i love this story!!
Beautiful! Of course continue.
Beautiful! Of course continue.
Beautiful story. Your descriptions make me feel like I am right there with them. Yes, please continue.
Nix…..amazing chapter, just beautiful and romantic..Awwww …..gunna have a goofy smile plastered over my face all day now…hehe…..i love how you incorporate info. about your country in the story and i love how Tina was the one to propose:)……In short i just love this story of your…..btw your writing could never disappoint me….It made my day…Thank you:)
Yes please continue. I want to know what’s under the pillow.
Very romantic. I’m with everyone else Yes Please Continue!
that was really something very romantic and yes we do want more thanks
Beautiful,Brilliant,Wonderful.What more can I say,Please post soon.
WOW Nix…if I did not have a big smile on my face before this story – I sure am now. This is so beautiful….what can I say – I am speechless. Great update and post soon.
Hey..Nix…am very much in agreement with Lind…until i save up am gonna get more info on your wonderful country from you!!!…and this chapter was absolutely awesome babe : )