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Classical Repertoire… Chap 36
While they were eating dessert Kuda, one of the maids that had been there since Tina first started coming to Vic Falls, slipped inside and created another trail of flame lily peatals leading from the living room upstairs to the bedroom where she placed a combination of the rose petals and the flame lily petals on the bed. She made sure that the bed was turned down and that the ring was where it was supposed to be as well as ensuring that the second bottle of champagne was on ice by the bed and the extra bowl of chocolate strawberries was where it should be as well as lighting all of the candles which were strategically placed throughout the room. Satisfied that everything was perfect and that the room was as it should be she slipped back out…. but not before sneaking one last look at the two lovebirds and smiling to herself, knowing that Tina was happy and that she was where she should be. Tina heard the door click shut and knew that Kuda had just added the finishing touches to the room and so she put the final stage in motion.
“Baby, can you get my shawl it’s getting a little chilly out here?”
“Sure T, where is it?”
“It’s in the living room…. I love you baby” Tina said as Bette was extricating herself from Tina’s embrace to get up
“I love you T” Bette said as she looked down at Tina and smiled, her day could not have been more perfect…. until she saw the new trail of petals.
Ever curious, Bette followed the trail as Tina knew she would, and once again was amazed by what she saw. Like downstairs the bedroom was illuminated by candles and the air carried the same vanilla scent, invading all of her senses. She stood there motionless unable and unwilling to move, Tina’s shawl forgotten in her hand. Tina came up the stairs and wrapped her arms around Bette from behind, placing soft kisses on her neck as she began to coax Bette toward the bed. She sat Bette down and knelt down in front of her, reaching under the bed and grabbing the jewelry box which contained the ring. As she looked at Bette’s eyes she began speaking in what can only be described as just above a whisper….
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(59 votes, average: 3.46 out of 5)
A wonderfull story from a wonderfull country. Thank you
Wonderful….awsome….oh please continue…this is amazing….
Nix, this is a beautiful story. Thanks for sharing your country with us. Your chapters could never be too long. Please keep posting.
You bet I am still here but now you are going to kill me if you make me wait to see what Tina has..Love this story and love all in the info on Vic Falls..Please post soon..You are a excellent writer girl keep going
…IF we’re interested? (tapping fingers and waiting for more) Good job, nix!
as soon as I have scraped enough money togeher I will go see Wic Falls. Untill then I will continue to dream about your contry as you decribe it to me. I love your story and the proposel was just perfectly written.
This was absolutely perfect. Just what I needed! Thank you so much.
yeah.. if i get my work done then next week is the last week of hell and am free. who hoo!
Wow, what a great story everything seems just bigger than life including your T&B Thanks
i wonder what tina has under the pillow? please continue i love this story!!
Beautiful! Of course continue.
Beautiful! Of course continue.
Beautiful story. Your descriptions make me feel like I am right there with them. Yes, please continue.
Nix…..amazing chapter, just beautiful and romantic..Awwww …..gunna have a goofy smile plastered over my face all day now…hehe…..i love how you incorporate info. about your country in the story and i love how Tina was the one to propose:)……In short i just love this story of your…..btw your writing could never disappoint me….It made my day…Thank you:)
Yes please continue. I want to know what’s under the pillow.
Very romantic. I’m with everyone else Yes Please Continue!
that was really something very romantic and yes we do want more thanks
Beautiful,Brilliant,Wonderful.What more can I say,Please post soon.
WOW Nix…if I did not have a big smile on my face before this story – I sure am now. This is so beautiful….what can I say – I am speechless. Great update and post soon.
Hey..Nix…am very much in agreement with Lind…until i save up am gonna get more info on your wonderful country from you!!!…and this chapter was absolutely awesome babe : )