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Closure – Chapter 23
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Dana’s two week hiatus from tennis obligations had been over for a while. Luckily, she was still able to spend most of her time with Alice. Dana practiced at the complex’s court and only had to venture out occasionally for meetings or special training sessions. During those times she arranged for one of their friends to show up as a “surprise”. She figured Alice knew what was going on, but, let Dana think she didn’t.
Then there was a Saturday night sponsor party. It was a huge deal for Dana’s career. All her current sponsors and ones that were being wooed were invited for a cocktail party meet-and-greet. Dana did not have fun at these, but, knew it was critical for her future.
Dana asked Shane to come over and do her hair for the event. It was really just an excuse to have Shane stay with Alice while Dana was out. But Shane really did do a kick-ass job on her hair for the evening — much better than she could have done on her own. Alice was sitting and watching the cut/style and bantering back-and-forth with both women.
“Shane? Any chance I could talk you into giving me a haircut?” Alice asked suddenly.
“Anytime, Al, and I’ll only charge half-price…” Alice grinned and threw a balled up napkin at her. Alice hadn’t done anything with her hair since they had been at the beach house. She would just wash it and put it up in a ponytail most mornings. It was nice. Jackie used to have her at the salon weekly for a trim and color touch-up. Alice shuddered a bit thinking back on how controlled she was.
Dana noticed the change in Alice and quickly moved to get her out of her thoughts.
“Al?” Alice looked up questioningly. “We need to decide which dress. The red or the green?”
Alice smiled and said “Green. Without a doubt — you look amazing in that color. You’ll have to knock the girls away with a stick.” While Alice said this lightly, Dana knew that the thought bothered the writer.
“I’m not looking for a lady. I am just looking to not make a fool out of myself.”
Dana was miserable at the party. She had to hide it, though. Gotta be perky for the sponsors. Then there were the women. Dana couldn’t recall when she had been hit on so much. Some of them were quite forward — especially the one who put her hand on Dana’s ass. It was partially her fault. She did get a bit of a “player” status after she broke up with Lara. But now she had absolutely no interest. The only person she wanted was back in the cozy beach house. Dana was kicking herself for not bringing a date.
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Dana was defending her self. She didn’t go looking
I made you giggle? SCORE! Bahahaha you totally stole my next killer line on the ET thing but that was totally what i was going for =) DANA KICKED HER BUTTT DOWN! Go dana go dana! I totally agree I digged Al’s do wen it was short! Oh the sweet romance of it all! I’m still waiting for my clone, the cookies hav gone hard they are no longer moist ¬_¬ and i got spaghetti on my i heart dana tshirt =( and my socks have crawled off with a life of their own. Alot can happen in a day or so….it could happen. Thanks for the great post!
Bitch slapping time. Dana is amazing. I want her to be my body guard. Alice’s hair is sexier short. I mean Season 5 long is pretty to. But her pixie cute is hot. Anyway. I love it. Keep it up
I forgot the weapon of the day. Dana should have taken a whine bottle from the party.
CATFIGHT.. GO DANA,lol goofy dana is SOOOO good!!!things are just heatin’ up. jackie isn’t gonna let that smack down stop her. i want to know what dana has planned!
I think it might’ve been good if Dana wore here red dress, from when she and Alice came out as a couple. And Alice in the green dress she wore to her/Angelica’s surprise party in season 3. Good move Dana. No pro athlete should be sponsored by a rapist. Not quite what I expected in the fight but it was good.
that was great and I can’t wait to see what will happen next so please post soon great update I love it
Love it! But I have to say I’m worried about Jackie following Dana to the beach house. Not that I think she’d try anything so soon after getting her ass handed to her, but still. I’m almost tempted to ask you to just let Shane take care of her, but that wouldn’t be good in the long run. Still, it’d be nice. And in answer to your question, the only thing wrong with having both of them is that they’re not real. :( I seriously want to not be single anymore, lol.
MaGoose, haven’t you heard of the expression “3 is a crowd.” Even though I love them both, if I have to choose, your version of D will suit me just fine. lol. No problem, I can wait just like waiting to see the rest of your story. No rush on the cloning and you will have 2 months to make sure every detail was done to perfection. Once the cloning of a perfect “Dana Fairbanks” is complete, please ship her via “Ludicrous Speed Cargo Co.” to my door. And you will be rewarded handsomely. Fair and square. LMAO, all the above comments are killing me. I laughed so hard that my stomach actually hurts. Back to this chapter, loved it. Friends showing up as a “surprise”, and A knew what’s going on. very funny. Looked like A started to be herself again having a little fun with S. Good news. On a more serious note, “bring it on! ” It looks like we all are ready to take on Jackie. “A frosty look?” MaGoose, I’m shaking. I see Lucia had taught D well. But I can’t see D having the same size biceps as Lucia. I have to give it to D, very bold to say, ‘happy to have a real woman in her bed.” Also I am impressed with D determination and willpower as she said, ” never, *never* let you hurt her again.” Don’t tell me that Jackie had D followed. I think the storm is brewing and I don’t think Jackie would let this one go so easily. So MaGoose, please double check the shed to see if everything is in place and call us for backup if necessary. Oh no, I will be away then may I volunteer the other readers? Seriously, this is a great update! THANK YOU!!!
Heya MA! LOVED IT!!! Bring on the dyke drama! There is nothing more hot (okay maybe there are a few more) than a woman defending that which she feels is hers ESPECIALLY in a kick ass dress! YES! Loved that Shaney did Dana’s hair (too cute). This was great! MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE!
The second that Dana’s fist connected I swear I could hear the roar of cheers from all the readers! And the bit with Shane & Dana..I thought of the Godfather, I’ll make her an offer she can’t refuse! well that and jackie sleeps with the fishes :) Awesome chap
hail_danalice while your gone I got ya covered…I’m a cook so am well trained in the art of all things sharp and pointy :)
Thanks Shanesthebest. I am counting on you but be careful, don’t get arrested. I so want to here when Jackie would get her retribution. I will miss here a lot.
great chapter!!!!! a side of dana i’ve never seen very interesting and sweet, i love that she did that for alice plus she got to hit that asshole which would have been fun for her…im curious as to what jackie will do next, especially after getting her ass kicked :S can’t wait :)
Great update. I think it’s safe to say after readings these comments: if you mess with Alice, you mess with all of us ;). Smart move for not letting Dana start it. Can’t wait for your next post.
heh in a city of millions LAPD won’t be looking for a Canadian :)
Go Dana! I love it, enough balls to hit her hard but enough self-restraint and brains not to get herslef in trouble. I’m loving where you’re going with this story here’s to as many arcs as you can come up with!
Ok, so maybe Dana isn’t so uncoordinated as I intially thought, maybe she should consider boxing as a profession! LoL. I’m glad Jackie got what was coming to her and i hope more to come. Thanks for another amazing post, love it!!!! PPS ;p
Hello MaGoose, Kick her @$$ Dana… and Shane and Bette and Tina… heck let everyone have a round… I think I might become a polyshipper… a little bit here and there… lots of ships to sail yet :P… this rocked hard my friend… Sincerely, JC
Oh damn GO DANA!!! Next time you cross your paths hit that bitch hard with your racket girl! She ain’t got nothin on my tennis player…. I mean Alice’s tennis pro. hihi I love it Magoose! I hope Alice will be completely okay! I can imagine her hair, loojms great to me, kinda like s2-ish? but with dark highlights?