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Closure – Chapter 24
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Dana was relaxing out on the patio after her morning workout and daydreaming about Alice. Just then, the object of her musings walked out of the sliding door. Dana could not help but smile. Alice had the comforter from the bed wrapped around her. Her glasses were on and her hair had a mind of its own. Dana had never seen anything cuter. Alice collapsed into one of the other chairs. Dana said “Good morning, sunshine”, gave her a kiss on the cheek, and went to grab a refill for herself and a cup of coffee and something eat for Alice.
Alice sipped her coffee and picked at a bagel. Dana thought she seemed to be gathering her courage to ask something. “Do you think we could go shopping today?”
Dana carefully thought through what to say before she put it into words. Her confrontation with Jackie was very fresh in her mind. Neither Jackie or Dana went to the police, but, Dana was not naïve enough to think that Jackie would back off. Dana answered with that in mind. “We can do anything you want. But, you know, I could get one of our friends to bring anything you need.”
Alice grimaced a bit at how much trouble she was putting her friends through. “Al, honey, don’t think twice about it. Every one of our friends knows you would do the same for them.” That seemed to make Alice feel a bit better.
“The thing is that I wanted to get some new glasses.” Dana looked at Alice and the glasses she was wearing. They were certainly not her style and looked quite expensive. They weren’t her normal pair.
“What happened to your other pair, Al?” Dana asked curiously.
Alice blushed and stared at the floor. “They had been broken…once…and I kinda fixed them, but, one of the lenses fell out and broke today.” Alice trailed off. “It’s OK. It’s nothing.” Alice got up to head back to her room.
Shit. The bitch must have broken them and got Alice this new pair. And Alice tried to fix the old pair.
Dana reached out and gently stopped Alice. “Tell you what? You get cleaned up and I’ll call Shane. We’ll make a little party of it.”
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dana is finally communicating very openly i might add. glad the girls were able to alice a nice afternnon at the mall, girl time is always fun!
AWWW! I’m glad they are finally getting back into the swing of things. I missed the funny, sarcastic Alice but she’s coming back and I forsee…okay i’m not yoda but I cant wait to see how Dana and Alice prgress and finally take care of Jackie! Thanks so much for another FaNtAStiC post!!! PPS!!
I have been a silent reader of this story! I like it! I really like how you are handling Alice’s recovery! Can’t wait for the scene where they “re-connect”! Oh and for some reason I keep picturing Jackie Warner as Jackie! Keep up the good work!
Hello MaGoose, that was so very sweet sometimes it is nice when we can fall back into the routines of our pasts… they can bring out so much within us… sometimes we let our lives get to far ahead of us and we tend to forget those things that made life a little more comfortable… I love the dynamics that Shane, Dana and Alice have together, beautifully captured. Sincerely, JC
Aww, that was adorable. The AlShaDane glasses buying day sounds like so much fun! And I’m with Dana, there’s just something about Alice in her glasses. I don’t know what it is, but it’s very, very good. Thanks for the reassurance that things are gonna work out with the hosebitch, lol. I threw that baguette in the shed should Dana need it.
Shopping with the girls and goofing with articles. It can’t get any better than this. It’s good to see Alice smiling.
I am sooooo sorry that I haven’t been able to comment on the past few chapters, because they have really been great. And this was one even better. I love the fact that Dana’s not running away from conflict and that she’s totally devoted to Alice. And the kisses on the forehead are sweet and everything, but how many more must we endure before the real action begins???? :)
Ah here comes the rebirth of the Alice we know and love…YAY! What a fun day out you wrote for them all. So good too that Dana isn’t letting anything fester, honest open communication is going to get these girls where they need to go!
MaGoose, what a terrific chapter! Love all the little things that you brought our attention to, such as “the comforter, her hair had a mind of its own, gathering her courage, Dana carefully thought” & so on. It felt as if I was watching an episode in my head. Really well done. I see that A still did not have all her confidence but things were looking up. Just the simple fact that she gave away her Jackie’s glasses indicated her subconscious of letting go. Really now, “what *was* it with her and Alice’s glasses? I wear glasses too and everyone just call me 4 eyes and never receive any compliment. Totally love the 3 musketeers at the mall. I am very impressed by D being so forthcoming with her feelings for A. I too hope that you will bring them together soon. The last part was very sweet. But I can see A might still need some more time to heal her wounded soul. Oh btw, can I order a copy of that sport magazine too? I also felt at ease that your shed is ready and I trust that with you, HF, and everyone else will give D a hand if necessary. I can’t wait till I return to participate again in commenting with everyone. Thank you.
WOOT> GO DANA. I love her. I want my very own. “sigh” But anyway. I love the story as usual magoose keep up the amazing work. YOUR MY HERO
Love the communication between alice and Daana. Glad to see the fun the girls had together.. The glasses that Alice threw away,what if Jackie goes o get new glasses and sees them. The glasses was very important in this chapter to me. thanks
Awesome chap, so glad to see the three of them relaxed and having a good time.fyi yes we profile in Canada but really 3000+ miles away, I’m in no data base and never said I’ll kill her (eh paper trail being left here)ninja stealth darlin…ooh and what you learn from nursing school and Faith the V.P.S, there’s more then sharp and pointy…the 5 basics to torture, plus if some dumb ass can’t get outa a walkin freezer,so not my fault! :)
See, this Dana’s so good everybody wants one for their own lol Thanks for the chap Magoose, love it as usual. :)
Awwwwwww I heart AlShaDane! Great post, Al was so sweet getting all upset and then it was about her and awwww! I know we must have some weird wavelength experience going on =D ooo yes i need big heavy tools, maybe some powerful weed killer, oh and a cage to keep them in once they’ve been subdued…if you have any tranquilizer darts lying about that would be a big help these socks are unpredictable predators who are not safe unless heavily medicated. No thank YOUUU for the giggles =D be vigilant – the socks are on the move. PPS!