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Closure – Chapter 26
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Alice seemed relieved by this. “But Alice? Don’t push yourself. Keep working with the therapist and getting back to yourself before you decide to be with anyone else.”
Alice had already come to that conclusion. She was in no means ready to get into a physical relationship again, but, was extremely relieved to know that she could and that Jackie didn’t take that away from her. She nodded and thanked the doctor.
Alice finally had a topic for her next article and spent several hours a day researching. She was doing an in-depth profile of a candidate for the Senate that was a lesbian and the front-runner in the race. She had an interview in two days and needed to have her research completed. There were several different angles to the story and Alice wasn’t sure which way to take it. She wanted to be prepared.
It was good to work. It made Alice feel like her life was back under her own control. It was another small step to getting back to normal.
Alice got to the point where she was running small errands on her own. She still avoided places like The Planet and her apartment and she was never gone very long. She knew Dana worried and, frankly, Alice always felt on edge. Dana had given Alice a taser and pepper spray, but, Alice hoped to avoid any conflicts for now.
Alice had thoughts about returning to her apartment. But it seemed too dangerous and it also just didn’t feel right anymore. It was as if Jackie would always be there lurking. It was something she was working on with her therapist. She did feel guilty to keep taking advantage of Dana’s hospitality.
Dana could not be sweeter. She was so supportive and caring. Alice was not sure if it would continue once Jackie was out of the picture and selfishly wanted to take advantage of it while she could.
Dana made sure Alice knew where she was and when she would be back. And she did it in such a way that Alice did not feel like she was smothering the mouse. It was like they were a normal couple. This was odd, because Alice wasn’t quite sure what they were. The friendship was back but there was more. The kissing the other night showed that. Alice just wasn’t sure if she was ready to trust anyone with that much of herself again. Obviously she did not handle the last break-up with Dana well. She didn’t know if she could survive another one.
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Hello MaGoose, well if that is one of your weakest chapters I have a thing or two to learn that was so good. The emotions that you portray are so rich and so heartfelt. Both these two are on the same wave length and that is felt throughout your story. I love that Alice choose to make dinner for the two of them, she really needs to learn to love herself and with Dana’s help she will get there. Dana needs to step up and show Alice what she means to her, Alice’s reflection of this situation could bring this to a boiling point as she feels like she is taking advantage of Dana and she is nothing of the sort to Dana. Absolutely love this story. Sincerely, JC
*Nods happily* 3 and A HALF actually *puffs out chest importantly* I have a very nice handling of machinery such as computers for my age and a well developed vocabulary too =) that is probably one of my favourite Alice quotes that or the “who came up with peeper?” sequence XD. I don’t think my socks want to come back =( they’re probably frolicking through some green pastures right about now (that introduces some entertaining mental pictures). Great chap chappy ;) I WANT I WANT I WANT AN ALICE =( and her whole safe for sex thing, mhhhmmmmmm hanky panky on the horizons me thinks i do…not that a three year old knows what that is…..PPS gigglebudddddddy!
If Alice ask about having sex she is mending. body and soul She knows that Dana loves her and she love her as well.
this was another “awww” chapter, and really, if you consider that weak…I don’t even know what to tell you aside from your version of a weak chapter blows mine out of the water. I’m glad that Alice is healing so much. The simple fact that she asked about her ability to have sex is a great sign, I just hope Jackie doesn’t come along and spoil it. The cooking thing was adorable, and I think Dana and Alice cooking together would be a great way to solidify their bond. Very, very sweet chapter.
WEAK?? Tht wasnt weak by any stretch of the imagionation lol!!! Another reli well done touching chapter. With some exciting new prospects with Alice gettin healing more and more by the day lol. Cant wait for ur next post keep up ur great work!! :) x
so sweet. loved it. more please?
Me thinks you need a new dictionary because that was so not the meaning of weak! Great chap, good to see Alice slowly coming around…..my salmon is “to die for” do you prefer it grilled or poached? And I so didn’t know that there was a loose uncapped wire hanging from the fan unit in the freezer, I’m ‘shocked’ I tell you (hehe 3 down)
very sweet chapter!! so happy for alice…great work!!
The therapy seems to be working for both of them. Alice’s taking 2 steps forward and almost 1 step back. As a man who saw a shrink for most of his life, I can easily say that this is 95% real.
Swoons and falls even more in love with your story** I love them so much. They make me all happy. Magoose you are a mastermind. I want you to have my babies…Wait sorry wrong quote. I want to kill jackie with a sharp peice of Kryptonite. Sorry I am on a super hero binge. L word and super hero. Dana dressed as wonder woman. Imagine that. Sorry LOVE YOU GOOSE
There’s something to be said for not getting to read for a while and then having 2 chapters of your favourite stories to catch up on. I loved them both. The tentatvie steps these two are making back towards each other are so cute. Slowly but surely Dana is reinstating Alice’s confidence and the old Alice that we know and love will emerge. I can’t wait!
WOW how sweet was alice to make dinner for dana!!! :)
This chapter sets up so many things so strongly, both in terms of Alice’s healing and the new and growing bond between Dana and Alice. Since they shouldn’t even try to recpature what they had, the only thing that makes sense is for them to move ahead, no matter how slowly…and the everyday things absolutely become the important milestones. Well done…looking forward to more “weak” chapters –so long as they’re just like this.
cuteness… me likey… more please… please
I want to make Dana dinner!!! I’m glad to see Alice coming back to the ‘real’ world. I love seeing the interaction between them and i hope it gets better, seeing as how it is safe for ‘sex’..YAY!!!