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Closure – Chapter 25
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Alice would usually take a nap in the afternoon. Dana took that time to go over to the tennis court and meet with her trainer or practice with Harrison.
Alice had some trouble sleeping and woke up early. She found a note from Dana.
A –
I’m next door at the courts teaching Harrison how to play. Call my cell if you need anything. I’ll be back to the house by 4.
L,
– D
Alice stood there for several minutes looking at the note. She really wanted to go see Dana, but, she was worried that Dana wouldn’t like it. She hadn’t seen Dana play in person in a long time, though. It’s not like she wanted to interrupt — she just wanted to watch. But would Dana think she was crowding her? She didn’t want to upset her. She might get mad. Alice didn’t want to make her mad. All these thoughts kept spinning around in Alice’s mind until she couldn’t hold them in anymore. She sunk into the sofa and started crying.
Dana came in a few moments later. It was a great workout and her trainer was really pleased. Those pleasant feelings evaporated as she heard Alice sobbing in the living room. She ran in, concerned as to what she might find.
All she saw was a frail Alice sobbing into her hands on the sofa. Dana moved over to her. “Alice?” Alice did not look up. “What’s wrong honey?” Still no response except the sobbing. Dana felt her stomach drop. Did that bitch Jackie get to her somehow?
Dana sat next to Alice and pulled her into her arms. There was no resistance. Dana just kept holding her and slightly rocking her to try and calm her down. The tears started slowing down and Alice seemed to relax.
“Honey? Can you tell me what’s wrong?” Alice had her head buried in Dana’s neck. She mumbled “Just me being stupid.”
Dana, to her immense credit, realized this was another result of the mindfuck from Jackie.
“Sweetie? You are talking to Dana Fairbanks: Certified Goof.” Dana felt the soft exhale of a laugh against her neck. “Nothing you do would be stupid to me.” Dana soothingly rubbed her hands up and down Alice’s arms.
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Bahahahahaha oh that was sooooooooooooo hot and they KISSSEED! K-I-S-S-I-N-G! Great post =D =0=0=0=0 would you really use it? Awww i’d feel so special! *hugs herself* I’ve had to buy padlocks and barracade myself in a padded room at night o_O they’re coming…thanks for another great post, I’ve got to dash so only a quick comment. Thanks gigglebuddy ;)
“You feel like home, Alice.” – Awwwwww. And I just have to say, picturing you on a platform in a lady-suit with a hat, waving to your constituents and promising “DANAS FOR EVERYONE!” is cracking me up. Majorly. I’m giggling, and I don’t normally giggle. I adored this. Nice to know that Alice felt comfortable enough to do something like that at the end, after the setback I thought maybe she’d shy away from sex. I’m glad Dana is being so damn wonderful to her about everything.
You feel like Home. That said it all. Alice is well on her way. She is getting stronger in body and mentally/ Give her awhile and she will kick Jackies a&& herself. thanks
omg…. hilarious last scene!!! “Sure as hell you are.” why do I keep picturing Alice in Charlie’s Angels spoof. omg…. I’m glad Alice is making progress. That is a progress to admit what she’s doing. yeah :) omg. Alice and Dana both need some actions going between them. But it was sweet of Dana to ignore hearing Alice. haha I couldn’t have ;)
It’s so on now. That whole having to listen to Alice must have killed Dana. She should pay her back. It would be funny. I love the story Magoose. I can’t wait to see what you have in the works. I think Jackie needs to get tazered. That would work for me
You already have my vote Magoose. Will you hire me as campaign manager though? lol DANAS FOR EVERYONE!!!
It is normal to worry about getting somebody mad over even the smallest of things. It’d be normal even if Alice worried about clipping her toenails too loud. But these two women are in love and that should never change. I definitely didn’t expect Alice to have a *moan* dream near the end. Nice touch.
holy frig…incredibly sweet and incredibly HOT!! (heh don’t piss Shanesthe..is the mantra at work well except they don’t call me that, I should make them call me that it would amuse me :D oh and honest I didn’t know she was in the freezer when I locked it nor did I beam her with the frozen fish she must have fallen on it..2 methods down 3 to go)looking forward to next post!
First of all sorry for no commenting for a while been reli busy and only just started reading all these great stories again and just caught up with urs today. Oh and am i glad i have Al and Dana are so sweet and tentative together and Dana is so considerate of Alice it’s so romantic between the two. Thank god Jackie got a taster of what she deserves for doing what she’s done to Alice. This last chapter was a good one, i must say i reli did not see that last bit coming nice touch lol. Brilliant writing and brilliant story of course still hooked and loving it and cant wait for ur next post :). FANTASTIC PPS :) X X X
i felt bad for alice. it will take while before she is able to feel comfortable and confident with her own decisions. i think alice needs a like boo time visit,lol…:)
great chapter!!! those girls crack me up..i love this story :)
OH YIPPY SKIPPY!!! First kiss all over again! I cant wait to see how the progress, glad to see Dana getting brave and Alice not rejecting her. Loved it, Keep Jackie out of the picture unless she’s getting beat down! ;P THANK YOU!! PPS!!
Sorry I didn’t comment on your last chapter, which was great. Life kind of got in the way (I hate it when that happens :S). Seriously… I would have had to wait longer than 15 minutes before going in after hearing Alice like that ;) Looking forward to your next post :D.
I’ve never commented on this story, but I like the whole perspective of it. It’s refreshing. And yay, Dana and Alice kissed!! :D