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    Closure – Chapter 30

    Story written on February 5, 2008 by MaGoose.
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    Alice makes it over another hurdle in her recovery.

    The sun finally rose and Alice felt an exhausted sense of accomplishment.  It was hard, but, she made it.  She grabbed the comforter off the back of the couch and fell into a deep sleep.

    Dana slept at night with her house phone and cell phone set on “high”.  She wanted to make sure she never missed a call from Alice.  She was surprised and a little concerned when she did not get any calls during the night.  She decided to take her morning run by The Planet and then head over to Alice’s with some breakfast.

    She got to Alice’s apartment and was worried when Alice did not respond to her knocking.  She used her key to unlock the door and then quickly disarmed the security system.  She walked quietly into Alice’s bedroom and did not find the writer there.  She moved into the living room and was relieved to find Alice sprawled out on the couch.  From the dark circles under the other woman’s eyes, it looked like she had a rough night.  And napping on that old couch would make it a rough day.

    She knelt down by Alice and gently moved the hair off her forehead and gave her a little kiss.  “Al?”  No response from the writer.  “Al, honey, it’s Dana.”  Alice stirred, but, didn’t wake up.  Dana decided to take matters into her own hands — literally — and carefully lifted Alice into her arms.  The writer still didn’t awake in the time it took Dana to carry her to the bedroom.  Dana placed her tenderly in the bed and made sure she was covered up.  She then went to find a pen and some paper to write Alice a note.  She left it propped up on Alice’s side table.  Dana gave Alice one more kiss and then left the apartment to get to the club for practice.

    Alice woke in the late morning.  She looked around bleary-eyed and saw the note from Dana.

    Hey, Sleepyhead!

    Give me a call when you wake up.  Maybe we can meet at The Planet for some lunch.

    L,
    – D

    Alice was torn.  She wanted to see Dana, but, she really needed to get more sleep.  She gave Dana’s cell a call.  Dana answered as the second ring started and was very out-of-breath.  “Hi, Al!”

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    2. Yet agen im going Awwww!! lol. Dana yet again so sweet and tentative :) And way to go Alice she reli is trying and doing so well bless her cant wait to see how things progress Great chapter as usual MaGoose :) PPS.

    4. awww, major heart for this chapter! I love that Alice was able to take such a huge step, and that Dana’s there giving her the support and the distance she needs. Excellent chapter, love this story muchly as always.

    5. It will be awhile before Alice can stand on her own.At least she has friends to fall back on. Alarm systens was a good ideal,now she needs to used it at all times. thanks

    7. nice chapter..as usual very great lol shes getting back on her feet im so happy for her..i hope she doesn’t just let dana back in as more tho..not yet newho!! shes done so much but i feel shes got some work to do on the romantic side of there relationship.

    9. Dana is so strong! She could pick me up and carry me to bed anytime! Love how Alice is really trying hard to stand alone and be strong, good for her! ALICE AND DANA FOREVER! Fantastic! PPS!

    11. ah hell that was a great effin chap..Go Alice! that was a big step to get through and Dana gave the right amount of support…subtle. hehe thats my response to coffee too :)

    13. Awwwww. Alice getting a kiss when she’s asleep and then getting carried off to bed. Can anybody else she Dana as Alice’s dyke in shining armor? Thank you so very much.

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