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Closure – Chapter 30
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Alice couldn’t help but smile. “Hey, Dane. I see you made an early morning visit.”
“I hope you didn’t mind! I wanted to bring you some breakfast and I couldn’t leave you sleeping on that couch.”
“Not at all. I am sure you saved me a trip to the chiropractor.”
“So… Are you up for meeting me at The Planet later?” Dana asked hopefully.
“I guess I could be. I just…I didn’t sleep real well last night.” Alice admitted quietly.
“Why don’t you sleep for a bit more and I’ll bring you some lunch after practice?”
Dana could almost hear the smile in Alice’s voice when she said “That would be great. Thanks.”
“Bye, Dane.” Alice said sleepily.
“Bye, Al. I’ll see you in a couple hours.”
Dana entered the apartment quietly and moved to the bedroom. Alice was still sleeping.
She took the lid off the coffee and blew fumes at Alice. It was funny to see Alice’s expression change as she realized that there was coffee to be had.
Without opening her eyes, she said “Gimmee!” Dana chuckled and handed over the coffee while Alice got herself in a seated position.
“I hope you don’t mind me waking you. I was a bit concerned that if you slept much later you wouldn’t be able to sleep tonight.”
Alice lowered her eyes and focused on the coffee cup. “I’m not sure I would be able to sleep anyway.”
“Sweetie? Do you know how proud I am of you for making it through the night by yourself? This is a huge step. And you did it.”
“It was so hard not to call you, Dane…”
“You know you can call me whenever you want -”
“No, Dana, I can’t!” She instantly regretted her harsh tone and reached out to cup Dana’s chin and stroke her cheek with her thumb. “I didn’t mean that the way it sounded.” Dana nuzzled the hand and gave Alice a kiss on her palm. “I just need to make sure I can stand on my own. I need to do it without smothering anyone and I have to do it without a girlfriend controlling me.”
“I understand hun. Just… I guess just realize that you don’t always have to be so strong. You have friends and we can help you, if you need.”
“I know that Dane. I think just knowing that is part of what got me through last night.”
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that was great and well done alice but she still has a long way to go great update pps
Yet agen im going Awwww!! lol. Dana yet again so sweet and tentative :) And way to go Alice she reli is trying and doing so well bless her cant wait to see how things progress Great chapter as usual MaGoose :) PPS.
love it as usual Goose
awww, major heart for this chapter! I love that Alice was able to take such a huge step, and that Dana’s there giving her the support and the distance she needs. Excellent chapter, love this story muchly as always.
It will be awhile before Alice can stand on her own.At least she has friends to fall back on. Alarm systens was a good ideal,now she needs to used it at all times. thanks
Alice made it, huge step in the right directions. can you make dana any sweeter to alice,lol just too cute putting alice to bed. :)
nice chapter..as usual very great lol shes getting back on her feet im so happy for her..i hope she doesn’t just let dana back in as more tho..not yet newho!! shes done so much but i feel shes got some work to do on the romantic side of there relationship.
aw, I like the “Gimee” part. so cute, thanks. cloning huh? lol
Dana is so strong! She could pick me up and carry me to bed anytime! Love how Alice is really trying hard to stand alone and be strong, good for her! ALICE AND DANA FOREVER! Fantastic! PPS!
almost forgot…I’ll keep the wine chilled and the pilot light lit,oh and I fixed the freezer so life is good :D
ah hell that was a great effin chap..Go Alice! that was a big step to get through and Dana gave the right amount of support…subtle. hehe thats my response to coffee too :)
Poor Alice,thank god Dana carried her to her bed! Great chapter again!! Please post soon!!
Awwwww. Alice getting a kiss when she’s asleep and then getting carried off to bed. Can anybody else she Dana as Alice’s dyke in shining armor? Thank you so very much.