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Closure – Chapter 34
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They settled down and Dana reached over to hold Alice’s hand. They really did seem made for each other. Even their hands fit perfectly together. She was delighted when Alice scooted over so Dana could wrap her arms around her.
“This has been, like, the best date ever, Dane. Thank you.” Dana was so pleased, yet sad. Alice was so special and she should have taken better care of her when they were “dating” the first time around. If Alice would let her, she would keep dating her for the rest of her life.
“I am having an amazing time, too.” They sat in comfortable silence and just watched the moon slowly rise.
“Dane?” Alice said as she looked up at her.
“Yes, Al?” Dane smiled down at Alice. Brown eyes met blue and a slight breeze caressed them. Alice moved slightly forward and touched her lips to Dana’s.
The world faded away as the two soul mates kissed. Many people wandered past and noticed and left quietly with smiles on their faces — thinking it is not often you see that kind of love.
They kissed for several minutes, or maybe hours? Dana didn’t know and never wanted it to stop. But Alice slowed down and tapered off into little kisses to the corners of Dana’s lips. She then settled back into the strong, safe, arms.
Dana felt Alice shiver a little while later as the temperature dropped. “Come on, baby. I still owe you a dessert.” Dana stood up and helped Alice to her feet. She then put her arm around her waist and held her tight. “Can’t have you freezing on me. How would that look on the front page of the sports section?” Alice giggled and snuggled closer to Dana.
They went to a hole-in-the-wall restaurant and Dana ordered them the most delicious chocolate lava cake and large glasses of milk. After dessert they slowly made their way back to the Mercedes. Neither of them wanted this night to end.
Dana drove as leisurely as possible back to Alice’s apartment. Her palms were sweating and her heartbeat was going crazy. She was hoping Alice might invite her up. Dana knew they wouldn’t have sex. Frankly, Dana didn’t think she was ready for that step either. But she really wouldn’t mind some more kissing…
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Alice seems as naive as a local school girl. It’s a very good pace you’re going at.
SNOGGING!?! LMFAO I really did love it, how did you know? It’s like highschool except with a legal drinking age! You amaze me each and everytime you post Goose, such an outstanding writer with an amazing talent for capturing emotion…and everything else that i cant think of right now because i’m smiling like an idiot in a room full of men! Just do what you do! Loved it, thank you so much!
U just aim to please and manage to everytime u post!! Finally there together yet it was worth the wait. Yet again u captured so perfectly as u always do. Love ur stories and can not wait for the next post :D *Big stupid grin along with every other reader lol* x x
Doing a happy Danish Dance!!!!!! U rock BABE!!!! Please continue real soon!!!!!
Love all of it but loved the “Hell.Yes” best. thank
At last – but I am running out of superlatives on this story – so my future comments may just have to be one word. But I will try I promise just so long as you continue with this fantastic fiction.
I can’t believe I didn’t comment on the last one! I’m sorry hun, I read it and loved it and totally thought I’d commented. I’m kinda dumb though, can you forgive me? I don’t think it’ll come as any surprise to you that I adored this chapter. Very aww-worthy, and you used the word snogging! That’s one of my absolute favorite words EVER, lol. It’s good to see Dana being patient physically with Alice. Not that I think she ever wouldn’t be, but…yeah. I’m making very little sense. Love, love, love this!
happy dance!!! go alice!!! what a great date those were my favorites casual and fun!! :)
too effin sweet!!!!!!!!
omg woohoo! that was so great go danish:)
Wohoo, 2 updates in such a short amount of time. Good to see these two dating again. I hope they don’t fall in their old habits again. But I think they both have learned their lessons and this time everything will work out. (But I’m a hopeless romantic.)
Hell yes! I’m sorry about my last comment, I’m horrible, I know. Sorry. This is truly great though. I’m loving where it’s going. Thanks
HOW MUCH DO I SUCK???? The answer is alot, I knw I’ve been AWOL I went on holiday and then just abandoned my interenet to enjoy the nice weather and then I realised THE MOST AMAZING STORY EVER WAS GOING ON AND I WASN’T READING IT!!! So I’m back waving my Dana clone or order and still running away from my possessed socks and hoping you’ll take me back as an oh so faithful commenter again. MUCHO THANKOS! =)
WOOT. IT”S ABOUT TIME. I so love you even more goose. Alice is going to have Dana’s babies. That would be great. Sorry getting a little over broad. WOOT. off to write
Hello MaGoose, Wow I finally made it… sorry for the later arrival :)… well that was just so very good and sweet and cute. I absolutely love how these two interact with one another and I absolutely love how innocent they are when trying their hands at this dating thing again… they seem so nervous with each other and yet they know one another like the back of their hands… it is just so very endearing… I cannot wait to see where you take this story it is so so good… you Rock. Sincerely, JC
I LOVE YOU!!!!!!!! thats all i have to say cant wait for the next chapter if its anything like this one!x
You’re writing too fast for me to comment. Or I just don’t comment fast enough. (Now I’m confusing myself :S) Anyway, all I can say is… aaaawwww *with a big stupid grin on my face*. :D
“Dane? I don’t normally do this after the first date, but, would you consider being my girlfriend?” Awww, sooo sweet… and the answer was even better “Hell, yes!” hehe… I LOVE Dana!!!… You’re an amazing writer and I love this story, it’s like a drug…. More please.