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Closure – Chapter 34
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They arrived at the apartment and Dana went around to open the car door for her girl. She held her hand as she escorted her up the walkway and to her apartment door.
“Here we are” said Alice. Man. She felt like a dork. How could she have forgotten how to do this?
“Yes. We are here.” Shit, Fairbanks! Smooth.
“Um. If you don’t have anywhere to go…I mean…” Alice shuffled her feet as she trailed off.
Once again, Dana saved her. “I would love to come in, if you don’t mind?” Alice’s smile lit up her face. “Please do.”
The girls entered the apartment and kicked off their shoes to get comfortable. Alice got some wine and they sat back on the sofa.
“I had a great night, Dana. Thank you so much.”
“Thank you, Alice. I don’t think I have ever had a better date. It’ll be hard to top, but, I plan to try.” That caused Alice to grin at the thought of another date.
“I’ll be right back.” Alice walked off to the bathroom. Dana got up and went to get the wine bottle to refresh their drinks. Alice came back a few moments later.
Alice sat back on the sofa. She intentionally sat closer to the spot Dana had vacated.
“I can do this” thought Dana. She walked back over to the sofa and sat right next to Alice. She caught Alice’s blush and figured she did the right thing.
They talked some more about inconsequential things. They both felt the tension and were actually enjoying it. But Dana knew she could not make the first move. Not yet. Not until she knew Alice was comfortable with it.
Alice finally moved forward and their lips touched. Again, everything melted away and the apartment could have caught fire and they wouldn’t have noticed. Alice brought tongues into play and Dana was more than happy to comply.
The kissing went on and on. Dana then felt Alice’s hand slowly rise up Dana’s side to the outside of her breast. Alice’s fingers rubbed slowly against the swell of Dana’s breast.
The feeling was amazing. Dana wanted to give Alice that same feeling. She very slowly moved her hands from Alice’s back so that her thumbs could start making a slow move to Alice’s nipples. Dana wished she could just let go, but, she couldn’t. She needed to be careful — she didn’t want to push Alice at all.
Dana had finally worked her hands around to where she was palming Alice’s breasts. She really did have the sexiest tits of any woman Dana had been with. She really wanted to feel skin. She wanted to taste. But she held back. A few minutes later she could feel Alice slowing down on the kissing and letting up on the fondling. She slipped her arms around Dana’s waist and melted into her — putting her head in the crook of Dana’s neck.
Dana moved her hands and softly stroked Alice’s back while she tried to get herself under control.
“Dane? I don’t normally do this after the first date, but, would you consider being my girlfriend?”
“Hell, yes!”
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Alice seems as naive as a local school girl. It’s a very good pace you’re going at.
SNOGGING!?! LMFAO I really did love it, how did you know? It’s like highschool except with a legal drinking age! You amaze me each and everytime you post Goose, such an outstanding writer with an amazing talent for capturing emotion…and everything else that i cant think of right now because i’m smiling like an idiot in a room full of men! Just do what you do! Loved it, thank you so much!
U just aim to please and manage to everytime u post!! Finally there together yet it was worth the wait. Yet again u captured so perfectly as u always do. Love ur stories and can not wait for the next post :D *Big stupid grin along with every other reader lol* x x
Doing a happy Danish Dance!!!!!! U rock BABE!!!! Please continue real soon!!!!!
Love all of it but loved the “Hell.Yes” best. thank
At last – but I am running out of superlatives on this story – so my future comments may just have to be one word. But I will try I promise just so long as you continue with this fantastic fiction.
I can’t believe I didn’t comment on the last one! I’m sorry hun, I read it and loved it and totally thought I’d commented. I’m kinda dumb though, can you forgive me? I don’t think it’ll come as any surprise to you that I adored this chapter. Very aww-worthy, and you used the word snogging! That’s one of my absolute favorite words EVER, lol. It’s good to see Dana being patient physically with Alice. Not that I think she ever wouldn’t be, but…yeah. I’m making very little sense. Love, love, love this!
happy dance!!! go alice!!! what a great date those were my favorites casual and fun!! :)
too effin sweet!!!!!!!!
omg woohoo! that was so great go danish:)
Wohoo, 2 updates in such a short amount of time. Good to see these two dating again. I hope they don’t fall in their old habits again. But I think they both have learned their lessons and this time everything will work out. (But I’m a hopeless romantic.)
Hell yes! I’m sorry about my last comment, I’m horrible, I know. Sorry. This is truly great though. I’m loving where it’s going. Thanks
HOW MUCH DO I SUCK???? The answer is alot, I knw I’ve been AWOL I went on holiday and then just abandoned my interenet to enjoy the nice weather and then I realised THE MOST AMAZING STORY EVER WAS GOING ON AND I WASN’T READING IT!!! So I’m back waving my Dana clone or order and still running away from my possessed socks and hoping you’ll take me back as an oh so faithful commenter again. MUCHO THANKOS! =)
WOOT. IT”S ABOUT TIME. I so love you even more goose. Alice is going to have Dana’s babies. That would be great. Sorry getting a little over broad. WOOT. off to write
Hello MaGoose, Wow I finally made it… sorry for the later arrival :)… well that was just so very good and sweet and cute. I absolutely love how these two interact with one another and I absolutely love how innocent they are when trying their hands at this dating thing again… they seem so nervous with each other and yet they know one another like the back of their hands… it is just so very endearing… I cannot wait to see where you take this story it is so so good… you Rock. Sincerely, JC
I LOVE YOU!!!!!!!! thats all i have to say cant wait for the next chapter if its anything like this one!x
You’re writing too fast for me to comment. Or I just don’t comment fast enough. (Now I’m confusing myself :S) Anyway, all I can say is… aaaawwww *with a big stupid grin on my face*. :D
“Dane? I don’t normally do this after the first date, but, would you consider being my girlfriend?” Awww, sooo sweet… and the answer was even better “Hell, yes!” hehe… I LOVE Dana!!!… You’re an amazing writer and I love this story, it’s like a drug…. More please.