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Closure – Chapter 35
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Dana was returning shots from the tennis-ball-shooter thing when her trainer came over to where Alice was sitting. Alice became instantly concerned and started to gather up her stuff so she could make a quick exit, if needed.
“Hi, Alice. I am so glad you stopped by today.” The trainer said in a very friendly manner.
“Really?” Alice said — genuinely confused.
“Yes. I haven’t seen Dana this focused or working so hard in a while. I think she is trying to impress you.”
“I don’t know about that…” Alice mumbled.
“In any case, I wanted to let you know that you are welcome to come watch practice any time you want as far as I am concerned.” The trainer then walked back over to the court to reset the machine for backhands.
Dana ran over and got some water off the bench. “It’s so great that you came by, Al. Thanks so much.”
Alice couldn’t believe the love in Dana’s eyes. What had she done to deserve this? After everything she did and everything she put Dana through, this woman still loved her.
Alice got a call from Dana one day in the late morning. They were scheduled to meet up with everyone at The Planet for lunch and had a date scheduled for that night.
"Hi, honey!" Alice answered with a smile on her face. It was the smile that was reserved just for Dana.
"Hi, Al." Dana said with a morose voice.
Alice immediately knew there was something wrong. "What’s the matter, Dane?" She asked with concern.
"I’m coming down with a cold." Dana almost sounded like she wanted to cry. "I had to cut practice short because I felt sick to my stomach running around. My head is all stuffed and I feel like crap."
Alice felt so bad for Dana. She knew the athlete hated to be sick. It was almost worse for her than the sickness itself.
"I’m so sorry, honey. Is there anything I can do?"
"No." Dana grumped, sniffed and blew her nose. "I hate to say this, but… I have to cancel our date tonight." Alice could once again hear Dana’s voice trembling.
"Dana, honey, that’s fine! We can go out another night."
"I know. I just have plans for all the other nights and now I don’t want to lose one." Dana really could be just so sweet — even when she was pouting like a small child.
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You did it again…. I have that same stupid grin on my face. It kind of automatically appears when you post. Really… it’s weird :) Anyway a big AAAAWWWW for this chapter. You know, Alice being sweet… who wouldn’t want her to take care of you when you’re sick? I think I would deliberately catch colds for that :) I almost fell of my chair from laughing at the vibrator comment hihihi. I could totally see Dana say it. I don’t know anything else to say than… PPS :D
I love you Goose. That was a sweet funny chapter. I can so see Dana looking down at the ground twilding her thumbs talking about the vibrator. Good funny stuff
YYAAYY!!! :D So happy to see u posted lol. And AWWWWWWWW What a great chapter, so cute and romantic and yet funny jus perfect :). Never fail to please do u :) lol Cant wait for ur next post PPS x x x
“shanegotmeavibratorformybirthdayasagaggiftandiuseitsometimes.” LMFAO!! that was like the phone bill commercial! Geez, i’m serious i get so frickin excited when you post because i know im in for one hell of a treat! YAYAYAYAYAY! not very constructive i know, maybe Alice could get her own talk show one day or something! Anyway i love it! PPS!
Dana is so cute and so in love. Taking care of your love when they are sick, that is no big deal, it just love. The vibrator comment was so funny and sniffing Alice. thsnkd for posting
This is gonna sound really weird, but I think I’m developing a crush on Sick!Dana. Soooo damn cute. I can just picture her sitting on the couch being all sniffly and adorable. Le sigh. And it’s wonderful to see Alice recovering so steadily. I sense a few setbacks to come, but her progress thus far has been incredible. I love that she took care of Dana, and them calling each other “honey” is just too cute. I’m also glad they’re communicating about things…and Dana mumbling about her vibrator? I just about died from cuteness overload. You’re fantastic at this, even if I think you’re crazy. I don’t make sense anywhere near “always.” Lol.
awesome chap…only thing that could have made it better would be Alice in scrubs…..:D
AWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW so…fucking…. cute. It’s actually amazing that Alice knows how to cook. And Dana’s vibrator!! LMAO hilarious, yet…. so so so cute. I only hope Alice overcome and have some hotness going on ;)
What a great update – you have me grinning from ear to ear. These two really do love each other and it’s great that they are working through it. PPS
I liked the role reversal (not in a perverte way ;)), Alice taking care of Dana. And yeah, I agree with Muted, sick Dana = adorable. :D Oh my, Dana using toys, who would have thought. :)Looking forward to the nextchapter.
HAHAHA it will cost ya for the video,but yes u both have been giving me the workout I sure needed! Loved this update,Danish dance again about the vibrator talk!!! U always make me smile when i see u posted,keep up the gr8 work!!! PPS
I think you showed a little nervousness in Alice when she saw the Planet as Dana’s turf. I mean, the Planet is their Planet. And the whole chicken soup for dinner was very sweet. I can’t do a big enough awwwwwwww for Alice and Dana. Especially with the toys making me giggle like a kid. But it is all good.
Hello MaGoose, ok you cannot call such a thing just a filler this was so very good… such an important part of their relationship and so well told… so no sir(e) bop… no filler her… just another brushstroke to your masterpiece. I love how cute these two are… Dana being all sick and sad that she cannot meet her own plans for Alice and Alice making Chicken Soup… I think it would be funny if they end up at the planet when she is better and kit comes out and says something like; “Hey Dana I hope the chicken soup I sent over helped…” that would be priceless :P… you are so rocking and rolling and that little bit at the end… so damn cute and so powerful… Sincerely, JC
AWE can you make these two anymore cuter? “shanegotmeavibratorformybirthdayasagaggiftandiuseitsometimes,,, that line was so funny. got me thinking back to S1 at how shy dana was about being gay… alice is healing and when she is ready there will be the biggest fireworks ever!! :)
aw, you so sweet. I love it