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Closure – Chapter 35
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"Dana… You know I rarely get sick. And it’s worth the risk for me to make sure you’re OK."
Dana sank into the hug for a minute. "How is it that you never get sick, Al? You are like the unhealthiest person I know." She murmured into Alice’s neck.
"I think it’s because I am so unhealthy. My body is used to accepting the abuse." Alice continued to hold Dana close and rub her back. Dana was pretty sure she hadn’t realized what she said. And Dana certainly wouldn’t point it out to her.
Something seeped into Dana’s senses. "What is that great smell?"
Alice laughed a little and guided Dana back to her nest on the sofa. She got her all comfortable and then went back to the packages she brought in. "I made you some chicken soup, if you’re up for eating."
"That sounds great, Alice. Thank you!"
Alice went in the kitchen and came back shortly with a small bowl of soup and a glass of orange juice. "I know orange juice doesn’t go well with soup, but, it is good for you. Eat up." As Dana started to eat, Alice went around the room — straightening it up and throwing out the trash.
Dana started in on the food. It was delicious and she was surprised at how well her stomach was handling it. "This is great, Al. Aren’t you going to have some?"
"I might a little later. We have a ton of it. I was snacking on it while I was putting it together and I’m pretty full right now."
Dana’s mind was slower than usual and it took a few more minutes for it to sink in. "You actually *made* this soup? It’s not from a can or something?"
Alice bushed slightly. "Yes. I’ve never done it before, but, I think it turned out OK. I hope you like it."
Dana had just finished drinking the last few drops from the bowl and looked ready to start licking up the remains as Alice looked over and giggled. "I did say there was more, didn’t I?" She went over and reached down to get the bowl. Dana lightly held Alice’s wrist and looked her deeply in the eyes. "Thank you, Alice." Alice blushed again and bit her lower lip in that adorable way Dana loved. "You are more than welcome, Dane." And gave her a kiss on the forehead.
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You did it again…. I have that same stupid grin on my face. It kind of automatically appears when you post. Really… it’s weird :) Anyway a big AAAAWWWW for this chapter. You know, Alice being sweet… who wouldn’t want her to take care of you when you’re sick? I think I would deliberately catch colds for that :) I almost fell of my chair from laughing at the vibrator comment hihihi. I could totally see Dana say it. I don’t know anything else to say than… PPS :D
I love you Goose. That was a sweet funny chapter. I can so see Dana looking down at the ground twilding her thumbs talking about the vibrator. Good funny stuff
YYAAYY!!! :D So happy to see u posted lol. And AWWWWWWWW What a great chapter, so cute and romantic and yet funny jus perfect :). Never fail to please do u :) lol Cant wait for ur next post PPS x x x
“shanegotmeavibratorformybirthdayasagaggiftandiuseitsometimes.” LMFAO!! that was like the phone bill commercial! Geez, i’m serious i get so frickin excited when you post because i know im in for one hell of a treat! YAYAYAYAYAY! not very constructive i know, maybe Alice could get her own talk show one day or something! Anyway i love it! PPS!
Dana is so cute and so in love. Taking care of your love when they are sick, that is no big deal, it just love. The vibrator comment was so funny and sniffing Alice. thsnkd for posting
This is gonna sound really weird, but I think I’m developing a crush on Sick!Dana. Soooo damn cute. I can just picture her sitting on the couch being all sniffly and adorable. Le sigh. And it’s wonderful to see Alice recovering so steadily. I sense a few setbacks to come, but her progress thus far has been incredible. I love that she took care of Dana, and them calling each other “honey” is just too cute. I’m also glad they’re communicating about things…and Dana mumbling about her vibrator? I just about died from cuteness overload. You’re fantastic at this, even if I think you’re crazy. I don’t make sense anywhere near “always.” Lol.
awesome chap…only thing that could have made it better would be Alice in scrubs…..:D
AWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW so…fucking…. cute. It’s actually amazing that Alice knows how to cook. And Dana’s vibrator!! LMAO hilarious, yet…. so so so cute. I only hope Alice overcome and have some hotness going on ;)
What a great update – you have me grinning from ear to ear. These two really do love each other and it’s great that they are working through it. PPS
I liked the role reversal (not in a perverte way ;)), Alice taking care of Dana. And yeah, I agree with Muted, sick Dana = adorable. :D Oh my, Dana using toys, who would have thought. :)Looking forward to the nextchapter.
HAHAHA it will cost ya for the video,but yes u both have been giving me the workout I sure needed! Loved this update,Danish dance again about the vibrator talk!!! U always make me smile when i see u posted,keep up the gr8 work!!! PPS
I think you showed a little nervousness in Alice when she saw the Planet as Dana’s turf. I mean, the Planet is their Planet. And the whole chicken soup for dinner was very sweet. I can’t do a big enough awwwwwwww for Alice and Dana. Especially with the toys making me giggle like a kid. But it is all good.
Hello MaGoose, ok you cannot call such a thing just a filler this was so very good… such an important part of their relationship and so well told… so no sir(e) bop… no filler her… just another brushstroke to your masterpiece. I love how cute these two are… Dana being all sick and sad that she cannot meet her own plans for Alice and Alice making Chicken Soup… I think it would be funny if they end up at the planet when she is better and kit comes out and says something like; “Hey Dana I hope the chicken soup I sent over helped…” that would be priceless :P… you are so rocking and rolling and that little bit at the end… so damn cute and so powerful… Sincerely, JC
AWE can you make these two anymore cuter? “shanegotmeavibratorformybirthdayasagaggiftandiuseitsometimes,,, that line was so funny. got me thinking back to S1 at how shy dana was about being gay… alice is healing and when she is ready there will be the biggest fireworks ever!! :)
aw, you so sweet. I love it