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Closure – Chapter 35
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Dana was enjoying the DVDs, but, absolutely loved the attention from Alice. She once again thought about how stupid she had been to tell Alice she was smothering the mouse. There was nothing better than having Alice close by and all hers.
Dana eventually had to go to the bathroom, so, they took a break from watching and Alice helped her up from the sofa. She was still a little weak, but, not as bad as earlier. That didn’t stop her from letting Alice hold her tight and escort her to the bathroom. She breathed in the scent of the writer.
"Dane? Did you just sniff me?"
"Yes." Dana answered back quickly without a trace of embarrassment. "You smell really good — like Alice and chicken soup — and I am sick and you can’t make fun of me."
Alice gave a delightful laugh and said "Fair enough." After Dana was done in the bathroom and settled on the couch, Alice went ahead and changed to get ready for bed. She came back with a suggestion. "Do you want to watch some more from the bed? You have the DVD combo thing on the TV in there." Dana smiled gratefully. She was getting tired and didn’t want to sleep on the sofa. But she also didn’t want the night with Alice to end. "Great idea, Al." They moved into the bedroom Alice made sure Dana was safely tucked under the covers before she slid in herself. She then gently moved Dana so she was on her side and curled up against Alice.
“You comfy, honey?”
“Very much, Alice. Thanks.” Dana snuggled closely.
As Dana lay there with her head nestled in the crook of Alice’s neck, she thought of how much in love she was with this woman. And just when she thought she couldn’t be more in love, an evening like this would happen and she would fall further.
Dana was feeling much better the next day and was fully recovered by their next date. Dana took Alice bowling. They had so much fun it should have been illegal. Dana took great joy in holding Alice close and trying to show her the proper way to throw the ball. Alice was thrilled to break 50. Dana decided that next time they went she would have the bumpers put up.
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You did it again…. I have that same stupid grin on my face. It kind of automatically appears when you post. Really… it’s weird :) Anyway a big AAAAWWWW for this chapter. You know, Alice being sweet… who wouldn’t want her to take care of you when you’re sick? I think I would deliberately catch colds for that :) I almost fell of my chair from laughing at the vibrator comment hihihi. I could totally see Dana say it. I don’t know anything else to say than… PPS :D
I love you Goose. That was a sweet funny chapter. I can so see Dana looking down at the ground twilding her thumbs talking about the vibrator. Good funny stuff
YYAAYY!!! :D So happy to see u posted lol. And AWWWWWWWW What a great chapter, so cute and romantic and yet funny jus perfect :). Never fail to please do u :) lol Cant wait for ur next post PPS x x x
“shanegotmeavibratorformybirthdayasagaggiftandiuseitsometimes.” LMFAO!! that was like the phone bill commercial! Geez, i’m serious i get so frickin excited when you post because i know im in for one hell of a treat! YAYAYAYAYAY! not very constructive i know, maybe Alice could get her own talk show one day or something! Anyway i love it! PPS!
Dana is so cute and so in love. Taking care of your love when they are sick, that is no big deal, it just love. The vibrator comment was so funny and sniffing Alice. thsnkd for posting
This is gonna sound really weird, but I think I’m developing a crush on Sick!Dana. Soooo damn cute. I can just picture her sitting on the couch being all sniffly and adorable. Le sigh. And it’s wonderful to see Alice recovering so steadily. I sense a few setbacks to come, but her progress thus far has been incredible. I love that she took care of Dana, and them calling each other “honey” is just too cute. I’m also glad they’re communicating about things…and Dana mumbling about her vibrator? I just about died from cuteness overload. You’re fantastic at this, even if I think you’re crazy. I don’t make sense anywhere near “always.” Lol.
awesome chap…only thing that could have made it better would be Alice in scrubs…..:D
AWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW so…fucking…. cute. It’s actually amazing that Alice knows how to cook. And Dana’s vibrator!! LMAO hilarious, yet…. so so so cute. I only hope Alice overcome and have some hotness going on ;)
What a great update – you have me grinning from ear to ear. These two really do love each other and it’s great that they are working through it. PPS
I liked the role reversal (not in a perverte way ;)), Alice taking care of Dana. And yeah, I agree with Muted, sick Dana = adorable. :D Oh my, Dana using toys, who would have thought. :)Looking forward to the nextchapter.
HAHAHA it will cost ya for the video,but yes u both have been giving me the workout I sure needed! Loved this update,Danish dance again about the vibrator talk!!! U always make me smile when i see u posted,keep up the gr8 work!!! PPS
I think you showed a little nervousness in Alice when she saw the Planet as Dana’s turf. I mean, the Planet is their Planet. And the whole chicken soup for dinner was very sweet. I can’t do a big enough awwwwwwww for Alice and Dana. Especially with the toys making me giggle like a kid. But it is all good.
Hello MaGoose, ok you cannot call such a thing just a filler this was so very good… such an important part of their relationship and so well told… so no sir(e) bop… no filler her… just another brushstroke to your masterpiece. I love how cute these two are… Dana being all sick and sad that she cannot meet her own plans for Alice and Alice making Chicken Soup… I think it would be funny if they end up at the planet when she is better and kit comes out and says something like; “Hey Dana I hope the chicken soup I sent over helped…” that would be priceless :P… you are so rocking and rolling and that little bit at the end… so damn cute and so powerful… Sincerely, JC
AWE can you make these two anymore cuter? “shanegotmeavibratorformybirthdayasagaggiftandiuseitsometimes,,, that line was so funny. got me thinking back to S1 at how shy dana was about being gay… alice is healing and when she is ready there will be the biggest fireworks ever!! :)
aw, you so sweet. I love it