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    Closure – Chapter 37

    Dana felt the growing sense of urgency from Alice.  It was obvious from the dampness on her leg from the juices that had already soaked through Alice’s underwear and the motion of Alice’s hips.  Dana thought it was safe to start moving her way down Alice’s body.  She moved her kisses away from Alice’s lips and started kissing the writer’s neck.  She spent some time nibbling and sucking at Alice’s pulse point before licking her collarbone and moving down to her breasts.

    Dana would have loved to spend the rest of the night licking, sucking and nibbling on Alice’s gorgeous tits.  Alice had other ideas, though and insistently pushed Dana lower with a breathless “Please, Dana…”

    She reluctantly left Alice’s chest and continued her path of kisses down Alice’s stomach and to the waistband of her panties.  She could smell Alice’s arousal.  She heard Alice give a sharp intake of breath and let it out in a low growl.

    Dana started running her finger up and down Alice’s slit through her panties.  Alice’s hips were thrusting gently trying to get some contact on the clit.  Dana had no thought to deny her lover anything and ran her finger back up to gently rub the other woman’s sensitive bundle of nerves.

    Alice almost shot off the bed as she groaned “Yes, Dana.  God.  Yes…..”  Dana continued to rub and circle Alice’s clit until she felt Alice stiffen up and release.  Dana gave her only a few moments to recover as she softly rubbed her thighs and placed kisses on her abdomen.  Then she put her fingers under the waistband of Alice’s panties and pulled them slowly down her legs.  She kissed her way up Alice’s legs, paying special attention to that spot on the back of her knee and her inner thighs.  Alice parted her legs wider and Dana did not turn down the invitation.

    Alice was delicious.  Dana couldn’t believe she ever gave her up.  She licked and sucked every inch of Alice’s pussy and made sure to keep her thumb gently rubbing Alice’s clit.  She felt Alice shudder again and then used her tongue to circle Alice clit and then she started a slow but insistent sucking.  Both her hands were under Alice’s ass and kneading it.  She could feel Alice’s arousal once again building higher.

    Dana felt Alice’s body tense at the peak of her orgasm.  Dana deftly changed the pressure and pattern on Alice’s clit to extend it as much as possible.  Alice hit another peak and then sank back into the bed.  Dana kissed her way slowly back up Alice’s body — trying to convey physically how much Dana loved and worshipped her and also that Alice would always be safe in her hands.  Then the thing Dana feared happened:  Alice started to cry.

    Dana knew this might happen — that it was pretty likely it would.  She knew this would be incredibly emotional for Alice.  It still broke her heart.  She held Alice as close as she could in her strong arms and covered them both with the blankets.  She gently stroked Alice’s back and whispered words of love until the other woman fell asleep.  Dana joined her shortly after.

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    Comments

    1. whoa I think all the snow here just melted!!!!!!wicked hot chapter..(whatever gave the idea that I’m a Shane fan? could be I’m incredibly narsasstic..well if that was my name :D )

    2. OH, NO…. I thought Al was crying of happiness… Dana made Alice come 4 times. Stud Dana!! lol…. Aww… But Alice crying breaks my heart. Don’t cry, Ali, baby :(

    3. AWWWW! So glad to see an update :). U certainly captured the realism, U captured how tentative and Dana shud have been perfectly and Alice just as well. So hot, real and so so romantic with a touch of sadness perfect. Love it. Cant wait for next post :) x x x

    4. you really are just trying alittle payback huh? Anyway. Loved it as usual goose. It was greatly amazing and slightly sad. I wish I could cuddle with a crying Alice. But i think Dana would beat the crap out of me. Anywho. LOVE YOU AND THE STORY

    5. What can i say that you havent already? You have done such a beautiful job with everything and i love how slow and gentle and intimate….okay now i’m drooling! It was great Goose

    6. Hello MaGoose, You are such a master at creating such a powerful build up… you have these two woman learning how to love one another and of course love themselves… you create such an emotional bond that is so powerful that when it reaches its climax… no pun intended… we can see and feel their love for one another and this is so soul shatteringly powerful… that ending is so powerful… the culmination of two lovers souls merging… WOW… you Rock… Sincerely, JC

    7. WOW. those tears are of everything happiness and sadness all at the same time.. this was the true moment of closure for alice to move forward… now she needs to time for it to all sink in…. powerful moment for both!!! :)

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