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Closure – Chapter 38
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Dana woke before Alice. Sometime during the night, they have shifted around and Alice was now on her side, with Dana tightly spooning her from behind with her arm draped around Alice’s waist. Dana couldn’t think of a better feeling in the world than the skin-on-skin contact with the woman that held her heart. She gave a soft sigh of contentment.
She was surprised to hear from the other woman. "You OK, Dane?"
Dana gave her a strong hug around the waist. "I’m wonderful. I didn’t realize you were up. How are you sweetie?"
"I’m good. Really, really good. I’m sorry about how last night ended…"
"There is nothing to be sorry for." Dana gently stroked Alice’s stomach and kissed her shoulder.
"Well. I am sure you didn’t expect your evening to end with me crying myself to sleep on you after you gave me that incredible orgasm." Dana was relieved at how lightly Alice said this and responded with some gentle teasing of her own.
"Not that I was counting, but, I think there may have been more than one."
Alice chuckled softly. "Someone is quite proud of herself today."
Dana snuggled closer to Alice. “I knew I missed you, but, I didn’t realize how much. I really do love you.”
They lay there in companionable silence for a while — just listening to each other breathe in reveling in being together again.
“Do you want to talk about last night? I mean, what happened at the end?” Dana asked quietly.
Alice moved to lay on her back and looked up at Dana. “I’m not sure how to say this…”
“Just say it, Al. I’d rather hear anything you have to say rather than you keeping it inside and letting it bother you.”
“It’s just that… I kinda want to meet with my therapist first before we talk. Is that OK?”
A brief look of dismay flashed through Dana’s eyes. “Did I do something wrong? Are you OK? I was worried it might have been too soon-”
Alice cut Dana off with a kiss and kept one hand on her cheek as she looked deeply into Dana’s eyes.
“It was amazing, Dana. Really it was. I loved everything you did and I think the timing was perfect.” Alice kissed Dana again to try and comfort the other woman. “I just. Well… I need to talk it through and there is some stuff I want to get clear in my mind.”
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Another great one :) I’m glad that they really communicate this time around and that Alice is coming back to her old self again. Who needs to wait for a check? Just put some money on that table and go! ;) Hahaha. You rock MaGoose, seriously!
I don’t know how you do it, but you have done it again, another perfectly structured piece of writing – fantastic – please post again soon.
You’re seriously trying to make me throw in the towel on this writing thing, aren’t you? Lol. This is incredible as they all are. I love the way they’re being so supportive of one another.
“Check Please” LoL! If it worked for Dana maybe it wil work for me, idk?! Seriously, i love how they are trying so very hard to make sure it lasts forever and i really like how supportive Dana is being by offering couple’s therapy and everything! Well nuff said, you’re just amaZing! Love this chapter just as much as allllll of the other ones. Great update!
I really loved the beginning scene. Waking up next to the love of your life and taking it all in is just beautiful. I probably wouldn’t have moved them to round 2 this soon after the first time but that’s just me. But don’t let the past get in the way of Alice and Dana’s wonderful future. Thank you.
that was great and I am glad that alice is getting back to her old self even if it is a slow going great update pps
OoOo Am i actually first? lol. “Check Please” Did make me giggle. Yet agen another brilliant chapter. You have nothing to worry bout u manage to keep romance, tension, humour, drama all of thm in the story making Al and Dana believable and keep the story moving. I love this story and this chapter was so cute. It’s so good tht there communicating so well. Cant wait for u next chapter :) PPS Xxx
Sorry i did not comment on last chapter,u beat me to it with this wonderful update!!!! I agree with SummerBreeze with the check please,I laughed too!! Im sooooooo happy that they are talking things out,talking makes a strong relationship!!! U deserve a HDD!!!!! Thanks again for the AWESOME chater,Love ur writing!!! PPVS
I love it. Thank ye.
Hello MaGoose, “Check Please” remind me next time I’m in this position to use that line… and credit it to you :P… that was fantastic… super freaking awesome… I love this honesty thing they have discovered they seem to be the only ones in their universe that uses this concept… if we include the show… other fan fics… and the such. I loved Alice’s reasoning behind not talking to Dana right away… you never know the residual effects a bad relationship are going to have on you and it is best to cover yourself first. As for the referral… while I don’t read many Dana/Alice centric stories… I know a good one when I see one… you keep up the amazing work… I’m eagerly awaiting you next endeavor as well… hehe… look out for another surprise… wink wink… Sincerely, JC
very touching conversation and a much needed one between the two.. do we get a wedding??? see second chances can be so worth it!! :)
awesome chap…can see Dana waving her hand around like a nutter calling for th cheque :D
Can’t help but to laughand to love them. Alice is so rightsome thing Dana doesnt need to question her judgement about. In the future they will need to talk,and talk and them talk some more. Check please. take you woman home and step into your future. thanks