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Collision Course – 4.16
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Sam collapsed at the edge of the bed, back pressed to the foot of the bed, curling up, realizing just what she’d said, feeling the pain finally in her heart. Brian pushed in, his jaw set, picking up his sister, scooping her close to him, and taking her out of the room. “I’m taking you to your room, don’t argue with me.”
Sam said nothing, letting Brian carry her out of the room, Darci already on the phone making arraignments.
Standing, looking down again, the world small moving ants below her. Spreading her arms wide, hoping to hell that CJ was in fact waiting for her. Sam lifted one foot up and eased forward…..
Shane grabbed her from behind, yanking her down to the rooftop, “What the fuck are you doing?” yelled Shane as they landed hard on the asphalt of the building.
“Got the fuck off me, Shane!” growled Sam, pushing Shane off her. But Shane held fast, wrestling Sam back down to the ground.
“Listen! I know about Jesse… but, Sam.. don’t do this!” yelled Shane, begging the woman to stop fighting with her.
“Why? Tell me? My son is dead, his liver is about to be sewn into Angelica, in about…” Sam stopped, looking at her watch, which had been smashed as Shane pulled her down onto the roof. “Oh, half an hour?”
“I know,” said Shane. “You gave her a gift, something that she’ll never forget…”
“I gave her my son! His lungs, his kidneys, his skin… Jesus…,” said Sam, fighting back the tears of pain. Scurrying away from Shane, finally free of her grasp.
“He’s still here, Sam. You can’t give up on him,” said Shane. Reaching for Sam, but the woman moved away, closer to the edge again.
“I got up… every morning…,” cried Sam, “Just for him, there was no other reason in the world.. I have nothing to live for, Shane. Now, go away and let me be….”
“I’ll fucking knock you in the nose again, Sam. I swear, I’ll knock you out or I’ll pin you down, whatever it takes, you’re not going over that edge,” stated Shane.
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you continue to have me by the seat of my pants! Loving this. I actually liked how Bette and Tina pushed aside their differences and were able to be there for their daughter. Henry needs to suffer greatly. Thanks can’t wait for more!
Oh, god. That was just awful. I’m glad Jesse will live on in Angie, but that was heartbreaking. I had just spent a kind of a vicious minute there, hoping Jo was gonna just make Hank suffer, but screw him. I like the way you’re entwining the stories more with each chapter. Engrossing stuff, Janet. Cheers
Oh my goodness…why did I read this at work…very well written but dag…so sad…Henry is as good as dead.
this story is amazing please update soon. i think i’m addicted to this story
Damn, Girl . . . you got me cryin’ . . . And I’m gonna’ tell ya’ right now, that this tomboy don’t cry to easily especially after just ‘reading’ something . . . That’s a fucked up deal . . . Jesse havin’ to die and all . . . God, you should like write for the fuckin’ show ;-p ~tear falls~ . . . Okay, I’m kool, now, ANYWAYS, my girl, Shane, has like perfect timing . . . glad Sam took that hand . . . I wander what’s gonna’ become of Shane and Sam and Carmen . . . Baby-girl, you got me fuckin’ hooked and like the others that are out here, I need my fix, like NOW!!! LMFAO!!! Anyways, keep up the great work and update soon for me . . . and like always from me, Baby-girl, LYLAS ;-p . . . love ya’ . . . holla at me!!!!
I’m really sorry that you are feeling so bad. Hope you get better soon…Man, did shit hit the fan or what? A lot of times one can figure out the direction a story is taking, but never one of yours! That’s why I love reading anything that you write. Ok, just when I think Bette possibly might go for Jayden or even Sam or Rosita, she ends up getting close to Tina. As you would say “MERDE!” Thanks for posting when you were so sick. Next one soon…pleeeze?
Good God you are a drama queen!!! Drama, drama, drama!!! The thing is…I love your style of drama. Because of your writing abilities, I am on the edge of my seat every second while reading this. Oh, and your author’s comments to me…you are one of the few who can comfort me while still making me feel like I am on the edge of the cliff!! “…but at the end, I think you’ll remember why I’m a rogue…” Okay, I am definitely falling off that cliff!! Thanks JM!
WOW! I am speechless, thank goodness all I have to do is write my comments & not say them. Never in a million years would I have thought that Jesse would be a casualty in your story. Kudos, ya shocked me, you always take a route that no one would expect. Truly feel for Sam, losing Jesse & his bio mom. Can’t wait to see where your story takes her & the rest of the gang. Can Jo beat the crap out of Henry & get away w/ it & will she make him forget who kicked his ass. Super job. Great stuff.
Sweetheart, Everyone else has sung you praises. I’ll just thanks you,and post soon and feel better thanks bvh
OMG! Tears came to my eyes more than once. You’re a great storyteller. I can see everything happening in my head in such detail. Keep up the good work!
Oh Janet you broke my heart a littly…why did the kids get a raw deal :( Let Jo hang Henry’s Ts (no not Tina, the other Ts) to dry and Tina deserve her own version for being negligence. Glad Sam took it. A bang-up chapter JM.