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Collision Course – 4.16
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“Detective?” Said Bette, seeing Sam stiffen.
“Look, whatever it is you can say it here,” said Sam, getting a sinking feeling the moment she heard the word detective.
“Sam, there was an accident…,” began Darci, clearing her throat, words failing her.
“This day just keeps getting worse!” blurted out Alice.
“Jesse…,” whispered Sam. “No…, Darci, don’t say it…”
“We did everything we could… he had severe head trauma…”
Sam reached down, pulling the IV from her arm, shaking her head, “No, goddamn it… no…” The needle clattered on the floor, the silence was overwhelming.
“Sam…” began Carmen, but Rosita reached for her, pulling her back.
“Where is he?” demanded Sam, her steely grey eyes meeting Darci’s.
“We put him on life…”
“Spare me the doctor jerking! Just tell me!” yelled Sam, getting up, Brian grabbing at her, but she pushed him away.
“He’s still in the ER… Sam, you might not…” started Darci, but Sam was determined to see her son, no matter what condition he was in. Sam pushed roughly passed Darci and the detective.
Jayden moved to the detective, “He was with his grandfather, my father, what…” began Jayden.
“He’s… also dead, I’m very sorry. Jesse, his name was?” Jayden nodded at the question, “Your father, Mr. Masters, must have had a heart attack. His foot seems to have pushed down on the accelerator, Jesse seems to have unbuckled his seat belt and veered the car off the road. He more than likely saved a few lives by doing that. Instead of a major pile up, it was a one car incident. I’m very sorry for your loss,” said Leigh Drake.
“I’m going after Sam,” said Brian, trying to keep the tears out of his eyes. Justin took his hand and followed him out, as did Mel and Lindsay.
“We’ll come up date you later,” whispered Lindsay to Bette.
“Please…”
Silence in the room, finally Carmen got up, starting to clean up the boxes of food, Bette helped. No one knew what to say, the finality of it seemed to settle in, the young bright boy that had bound out of the room only hours before, was dead.
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you continue to have me by the seat of my pants! Loving this. I actually liked how Bette and Tina pushed aside their differences and were able to be there for their daughter. Henry needs to suffer greatly. Thanks can’t wait for more!
Oh, god. That was just awful. I’m glad Jesse will live on in Angie, but that was heartbreaking. I had just spent a kind of a vicious minute there, hoping Jo was gonna just make Hank suffer, but screw him. I like the way you’re entwining the stories more with each chapter. Engrossing stuff, Janet. Cheers
Oh my goodness…why did I read this at work…very well written but dag…so sad…Henry is as good as dead.
this story is amazing please update soon. i think i’m addicted to this story
Damn, Girl . . . you got me cryin’ . . . And I’m gonna’ tell ya’ right now, that this tomboy don’t cry to easily especially after just ‘reading’ something . . . That’s a fucked up deal . . . Jesse havin’ to die and all . . . God, you should like write for the fuckin’ show ;-p ~tear falls~ . . . Okay, I’m kool, now, ANYWAYS, my girl, Shane, has like perfect timing . . . glad Sam took that hand . . . I wander what’s gonna’ become of Shane and Sam and Carmen . . . Baby-girl, you got me fuckin’ hooked and like the others that are out here, I need my fix, like NOW!!! LMFAO!!! Anyways, keep up the great work and update soon for me . . . and like always from me, Baby-girl, LYLAS ;-p . . . love ya’ . . . holla at me!!!!
I’m really sorry that you are feeling so bad. Hope you get better soon…Man, did shit hit the fan or what? A lot of times one can figure out the direction a story is taking, but never one of yours! That’s why I love reading anything that you write. Ok, just when I think Bette possibly might go for Jayden or even Sam or Rosita, she ends up getting close to Tina. As you would say “MERDE!” Thanks for posting when you were so sick. Next one soon…pleeeze?
Good God you are a drama queen!!! Drama, drama, drama!!! The thing is…I love your style of drama. Because of your writing abilities, I am on the edge of my seat every second while reading this. Oh, and your author’s comments to me…you are one of the few who can comfort me while still making me feel like I am on the edge of the cliff!! “…but at the end, I think you’ll remember why I’m a rogue…” Okay, I am definitely falling off that cliff!! Thanks JM!
WOW! I am speechless, thank goodness all I have to do is write my comments & not say them. Never in a million years would I have thought that Jesse would be a casualty in your story. Kudos, ya shocked me, you always take a route that no one would expect. Truly feel for Sam, losing Jesse & his bio mom. Can’t wait to see where your story takes her & the rest of the gang. Can Jo beat the crap out of Henry & get away w/ it & will she make him forget who kicked his ass. Super job. Great stuff.
Sweetheart, Everyone else has sung you praises. I’ll just thanks you,and post soon and feel better thanks bvh
OMG! Tears came to my eyes more than once. You’re a great storyteller. I can see everything happening in my head in such detail. Keep up the good work!
Oh Janet you broke my heart a littly…why did the kids get a raw deal :( Let Jo hang Henry’s Ts (no not Tina, the other Ts) to dry and Tina deserve her own version for being negligence. Glad Sam took it. A bang-up chapter JM.