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Collision Course 4.51 – Foreshadowing
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“She was right behind me,” said Carmen looking around frantically, petrified that something had happened to Alice.
“Mother fucker,” said Jo, darting over the debris before Bette or Emma could stop her. A fresh fire had started up in the kitchen, sparked by fuel from the plane more than likely. Jo coughed, forgetting for a moment that she was completely human and wasn’t protected by virtual immortality. “Alice!” yelled Jo as she pushed the doors of the kitchen open, seeing Alice instantly. A section of the wall had fallen, and Alice’s leg was caught under a beam.
“Get out of here, look,” said Alice, pointing to the flame that was getting closer to the pool of fuel. Scared beyond reason, Alice was dirty and shaking, thinking of all the things that she’d yet to do in life, like settle down, be in love, leave the drama behind. Instead she was going to die here.
“Not without you, I’ll get my ass kicked,” said Jo with a grunt. “What you are about to see, you never saw, you repeat it, and I’ll have to kill you, do you understand me?” asked Jo severely.
“Yeah… sure…,” muttered Alice wondering why Jo was being all melodramatic with her at a time like this.
Jo knelt next to her, grabbing Alice’s shoulders, “I’ll leave you hear to die, you say anything and you endanger my daughter’s life, now swear to me!”
“I-I-I-I swear…,” swallowed Alice her ankle on fire and Jo seemed to be accessing something in her mind, or listening, Alice wasn’t sure.
“I swear…,” muttered Jo. Digging deep, feeling the power inside of her click on, reaching out and using Amy’s powers to move the section of the wall without touching it, Alice’s mouth dropped, and Jo pulled her to her feet. “Not a word.”
“Who’d believe me?” blared Alice. Jo and Alice began to move quickly towards the doors as the flames finally made their way to the fuel, exploding, sending Alice and Jo careening through the doors.
Six Days Later…
“So as the plane exploded, we were tossed through the doors, and Jo broke a leg and I, again, ended up not getting hurt. I want to thank Jo, for muscling that piece of ceiling off me. And for getting my ass out of there, or I wouldn’t have been here today,” finished Alice. “Now, the ever magical Quin is going to Riot by Three Days Grace as we leave you today. Our next show, I promise, will be lighter and with a lot less talk, and a lot more music, this is Alice Pieszecki signing off from The Chart….”
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JP – What frakking award are you talking about girl? I think Jo’s gotten to you somehow… award… Ok girl… LOL
Would like to say something about the awards but I afraid the sex faries will leave me. Dont let Jo lose her powers and Jack fron 24 wasnt the hero in this the ladies were. Love the minor danages to the gang,Shane will think about this for a long time to come. What happen to the people on the plane?? I know you are busy thanks for posting. thanks bvh
Good stuff! I like how you meld and twist so many storylines. Looking forward to the next installment.
I know..I know..you don’t want the award. Well, to damn bad! Deal with it Ms. JM, you are f*#king good, and deserve it. So, smile, say thank you and then post the next chapter!!! LOL Hugs J…really, congratulations. You know how much I wanted you to win. :)
Love how you wrote the past vs. the present/future events. Gotta admit when you bring Amy into the mix, I get a tad bit confused as to which lady Jo should be with. Alice, please keep your mouth shut, for once? Lovin’ it!
WooHOO!!!!!! JACK BAUER OF CTU!!! HAHAHAHAHHAHAHAHA great job!! LOVED IT! i took my hands away long enough to read. So now of course Al is going to talk to Jo about what happened. and poor Jo with a broken leg and all. Very cool update!!! LOVED IT!!!
Great chap. You wrote that extremely well. I dont like Amy, i hope she doesnt cause any problems for my fave couple. So Jo is human again huh? Thanks for the update, PPS.
YES! I’ve been hoping for a chapter for what’s felt like an interminably long time… Thanks for posting… Now then, about the chapter: Ha! for once Jack wasn’t the hero! I really want Al to be able to keep her mouth shut. She can NOT blab about Jo… And on that note, I don’t want Jo’s powers to be diminished, or completely gone. Hey, what about the other people on the plane, they alright? And what’s the gang going to do without the Planet? I guess they could use Twilight as the new hangout… Great chapter, Janet, and many congratulations on the award!
whatever the fucking award is… give it to the lady!! u deserve it! all of it!!! OMG! what an episode… intense man, just totally intense… every moment it’s BAM!,WOW!,BOOM!,KAPOW!,YOWZA!… ETC! amazing janet. simply amazing… i really do wish i have your talent in writing and ideas… PPS!
Also, I am not as stupid as I look sometimes, – I meant accolade’s
OMG – JM, I am soooo sorry about the award. It will be okay, you may get many interview requests and when it comes to the book, I say hold out for the bidding war… F tina. (F = forget, it just looked naughtier the other way)——————————Could Shanes lips get any sexier? Bette & Tina, Amy & Jo turn to each other at a time of crises? We all know what a tease your are. Run Rosita Run!Seriously congrats on the award you deserve all the aculades you can receive.
Well thanks for the history lesson there J, though your answer wasn’t as fun as the one I got from my mate (“they” speak French cause they thought they were so cool that they needed to lower their cool levels cause the cool mixed with the snow weather coldness would have made for and uninhabitable arctic environment, so they picked the most assy language in the world to speak… he had a bad incident with the french) I have a feeling yours might hinge on accuracy. Was watching 24 this evening, have you ever considered what a Jack Bower dwarf would be like, most kick ass little package ever. Pistol whipping bad ass midget….with a really deep voice. Any way props to the award, which means you write good. And props to the whole not turning you characters into corpses thing. Have a nice day :-)
Oh and whats the story with the dude and the chick written by the guy? is it Zorro? Zorro is awsome :-p
thanks for your story JM. i really like it and glad you added another poem. i usually don’t leave comments but i do read the stories.most of my comments sound stupid.