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Collision Course 4.51 – Foreshadowing
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Alice pushed away from the mic, looking over at Quin who smiled at her, “That was great, Ali.”
“Yeah, well, gotta give props to the heroes right?” asked Alice as she got up her ankle still tender. Not able to put out of her mind just what Jo Wheaton had done, vowing to talk to the woman alone one of these days, but she and Bette were heading on a much deserved vacation now that Jo was sidelined from work for the six weeks it would take for her leg to heal. Emma Scott was tracking down the people who might well have had something to do with the planes that had been shot from the sky, 24 in all.
“Alice, heroes come in different shapes and forms, and in your own way, you’re one too.”
“Thanks,” said Alice walking out and slipping an arm around Quin’s waist. “I just hope that my hero girl is home, I plan on exerting some energy tonight.”
“TMI, just… too much fucking information….,” snorted Quin with a bright smile, her hair free of coloring for the first time in a long time, but she was wearing a pair of blue tinted contact lenses, changing her appearance slightly.
Alice smiled, thinking that she was happy to be alive, “So, are you going to do it? The movie?”
“I don’t know, mother thinks I should at least give it a try, who knows, as long as I get to play here with you, yeah, I might do it,”
“Good,” said Alice as they exited the building, Rosita waiting for her by her Mini, arms crossed, her leg gleaming in the sun. “Out of the bad must come a little good.”
CC
Foreshadowing
5.2.2006
JMG
I dreamed a million dreams
All haunted my a million screams
Of the dead men walking
Across the desert heat
I saw them all on the news
The war is won
Yet we fight on
The fire still burns deep into the night
So many men, so many women
All making the problems worse
No love loss between our kin
We live in a world of chaos
This is the world we’ve created
With the hands and minds blessed to us
We’ve used them to curse and kill
Instead of heal and culture
Where is that one that can save us?
Everything has just come crashing down
Tumbling and fumbling in the dusty dark
One by one, we all fall down
It was once our time
Our time to rule
Instead, we are torn between war
And hunting down the enemy within
The cancer swells up from inside
The very minds we thought protected us
The wars rage on
Bringing madness in its wake
I might not come home tonight
My generation is the one on the front lines
Of a problem built by our forefathers
I make you no promise to if I’ll return
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JP – What frakking award are you talking about girl? I think Jo’s gotten to you somehow… award… Ok girl… LOL
Would like to say something about the awards but I afraid the sex faries will leave me. Dont let Jo lose her powers and Jack fron 24 wasnt the hero in this the ladies were. Love the minor danages to the gang,Shane will think about this for a long time to come. What happen to the people on the plane?? I know you are busy thanks for posting. thanks bvh
Good stuff! I like how you meld and twist so many storylines. Looking forward to the next installment.
I know..I know..you don’t want the award. Well, to damn bad! Deal with it Ms. JM, you are f*#king good, and deserve it. So, smile, say thank you and then post the next chapter!!! LOL Hugs J…really, congratulations. You know how much I wanted you to win. :)
Love how you wrote the past vs. the present/future events. Gotta admit when you bring Amy into the mix, I get a tad bit confused as to which lady Jo should be with. Alice, please keep your mouth shut, for once? Lovin’ it!
WooHOO!!!!!! JACK BAUER OF CTU!!! HAHAHAHAHHAHAHAHA great job!! LOVED IT! i took my hands away long enough to read. So now of course Al is going to talk to Jo about what happened. and poor Jo with a broken leg and all. Very cool update!!! LOVED IT!!!
Great chap. You wrote that extremely well. I dont like Amy, i hope she doesnt cause any problems for my fave couple. So Jo is human again huh? Thanks for the update, PPS.
YES! I’ve been hoping for a chapter for what’s felt like an interminably long time… Thanks for posting… Now then, about the chapter: Ha! for once Jack wasn’t the hero! I really want Al to be able to keep her mouth shut. She can NOT blab about Jo… And on that note, I don’t want Jo’s powers to be diminished, or completely gone. Hey, what about the other people on the plane, they alright? And what’s the gang going to do without the Planet? I guess they could use Twilight as the new hangout… Great chapter, Janet, and many congratulations on the award!
whatever the fucking award is… give it to the lady!! u deserve it! all of it!!! OMG! what an episode… intense man, just totally intense… every moment it’s BAM!,WOW!,BOOM!,KAPOW!,YOWZA!… ETC! amazing janet. simply amazing… i really do wish i have your talent in writing and ideas… PPS!
Also, I am not as stupid as I look sometimes, – I meant accolade’s
OMG – JM, I am soooo sorry about the award. It will be okay, you may get many interview requests and when it comes to the book, I say hold out for the bidding war… F tina. (F = forget, it just looked naughtier the other way)——————————Could Shanes lips get any sexier? Bette & Tina, Amy & Jo turn to each other at a time of crises? We all know what a tease your are. Run Rosita Run!Seriously congrats on the award you deserve all the aculades you can receive.
Well thanks for the history lesson there J, though your answer wasn’t as fun as the one I got from my mate (“they” speak French cause they thought they were so cool that they needed to lower their cool levels cause the cool mixed with the snow weather coldness would have made for and uninhabitable arctic environment, so they picked the most assy language in the world to speak… he had a bad incident with the french) I have a feeling yours might hinge on accuracy. Was watching 24 this evening, have you ever considered what a Jack Bower dwarf would be like, most kick ass little package ever. Pistol whipping bad ass midget….with a really deep voice. Any way props to the award, which means you write good. And props to the whole not turning you characters into corpses thing. Have a nice day :-)
Oh and whats the story with the dude and the chick written by the guy? is it Zorro? Zorro is awsome :-p
thanks for your story JM. i really like it and glad you added another poem. i usually don’t leave comments but i do read the stories.most of my comments sound stupid.