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Collision Course 4.51 – Foreshadowing
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“Tina…,” moaned Bette from across the room, turning to her side, struggling to get up. Coughing, grabbing at her side, feeling like someone had kicked her a million times and that every rib was broken. Shane looked at Bette, then back to Tina, not saying anything.
Jo moved towards the kitchen without anyone spotting her, instantly wanting to find a way out of the café. Flames lapped at the back outer wall of the kitchen, the wait staff seemed to have gotten out before the fire had started. The back wall had fallen from the structural damage. Jo coughed, grabbing her stomach, spitting up a large amount of blood. Wiping her mouth with the back of her hand, looking up and seeing her reflection in a broken mirror, her eyes bright blue, “What the fuck?” asked Jo to herself her whole body shivering as she crashed to the floor on her knees.
“Jesus, Mary, and Joseph,” said Alice from besides Bette, on her knees, assessing the damage. Bette stood, putting an arm around a shaken Alice, hugging her quickly, seeing Joss standing up, and looking around with intent eyes.
“Jo!” yelled Emma, who had been thrown towards the side door that was now blocked. No answer, “Jo, gods damn it, where the…”
“Where is she?” asked Bette, seeing Helena and Quin getting up. Quin’s face was covered in blood, a huge gash over her eye was open and spurting blood. Putting her hand to it, Quin winced, Helena tore a piece of her shirt off and pressed it to the wound.
“Sami?” said Izzy, her eyes creeping open, making a face, her whole body ached. Sitting up and looking around, having seen things like this before, but never having been a part of it. Taking a mental inventory of herself and finding that she just hurt, but nothing was hurt.
“Still here,” said Sam, hugging Izzy and kissing her cheek as she did. “Where is Carm?”
“Over here,” said the Latina, pulling Lara to her feet also, it was a minor miracle that they were all alive, much less relatively unscathed.
Joss Wade took out a small digital camera, snapping pictures, looking at Lara, “For insurance purposes,” quipped the young director. Lara barked a hard laugh, Carmen shook her head and Joss proceeded to take pictures. “Never know when you need to build a scene like this…,” muttered the woman.
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JP – What frakking award are you talking about girl? I think Jo’s gotten to you somehow… award… Ok girl… LOL
Would like to say something about the awards but I afraid the sex faries will leave me. Dont let Jo lose her powers and Jack fron 24 wasnt the hero in this the ladies were. Love the minor danages to the gang,Shane will think about this for a long time to come. What happen to the people on the plane?? I know you are busy thanks for posting. thanks bvh
Good stuff! I like how you meld and twist so many storylines. Looking forward to the next installment.
I know..I know..you don’t want the award. Well, to damn bad! Deal with it Ms. JM, you are f*#king good, and deserve it. So, smile, say thank you and then post the next chapter!!! LOL Hugs J…really, congratulations. You know how much I wanted you to win. :)
Love how you wrote the past vs. the present/future events. Gotta admit when you bring Amy into the mix, I get a tad bit confused as to which lady Jo should be with. Alice, please keep your mouth shut, for once? Lovin’ it!
WooHOO!!!!!! JACK BAUER OF CTU!!! HAHAHAHAHHAHAHAHA great job!! LOVED IT! i took my hands away long enough to read. So now of course Al is going to talk to Jo about what happened. and poor Jo with a broken leg and all. Very cool update!!! LOVED IT!!!
Great chap. You wrote that extremely well. I dont like Amy, i hope she doesnt cause any problems for my fave couple. So Jo is human again huh? Thanks for the update, PPS.
YES! I’ve been hoping for a chapter for what’s felt like an interminably long time… Thanks for posting… Now then, about the chapter: Ha! for once Jack wasn’t the hero! I really want Al to be able to keep her mouth shut. She can NOT blab about Jo… And on that note, I don’t want Jo’s powers to be diminished, or completely gone. Hey, what about the other people on the plane, they alright? And what’s the gang going to do without the Planet? I guess they could use Twilight as the new hangout… Great chapter, Janet, and many congratulations on the award!
whatever the fucking award is… give it to the lady!! u deserve it! all of it!!! OMG! what an episode… intense man, just totally intense… every moment it’s BAM!,WOW!,BOOM!,KAPOW!,YOWZA!… ETC! amazing janet. simply amazing… i really do wish i have your talent in writing and ideas… PPS!
Also, I am not as stupid as I look sometimes, – I meant accolade’s
OMG – JM, I am soooo sorry about the award. It will be okay, you may get many interview requests and when it comes to the book, I say hold out for the bidding war… F tina. (F = forget, it just looked naughtier the other way)——————————Could Shanes lips get any sexier? Bette & Tina, Amy & Jo turn to each other at a time of crises? We all know what a tease your are. Run Rosita Run!Seriously congrats on the award you deserve all the aculades you can receive.
Well thanks for the history lesson there J, though your answer wasn’t as fun as the one I got from my mate (“they” speak French cause they thought they were so cool that they needed to lower their cool levels cause the cool mixed with the snow weather coldness would have made for and uninhabitable arctic environment, so they picked the most assy language in the world to speak… he had a bad incident with the french) I have a feeling yours might hinge on accuracy. Was watching 24 this evening, have you ever considered what a Jack Bower dwarf would be like, most kick ass little package ever. Pistol whipping bad ass midget….with a really deep voice. Any way props to the award, which means you write good. And props to the whole not turning you characters into corpses thing. Have a nice day :-)
Oh and whats the story with the dude and the chick written by the guy? is it Zorro? Zorro is awsome :-p
thanks for your story JM. i really like it and glad you added another poem. i usually don’t leave comments but i do read the stories.most of my comments sound stupid.