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Collision Course 4.52
“Think I should even bother rebuilding? I mean, it will never be the same again,” said Lara softly.
“You should rebuild, if you don’t, it means the bastards that shot that plane down won. You build again, tells them that you, we, won’t back down. So, hell yes, it might take a few months, but build it, and they will come…,” joked Carmen her smile wide and bright making the sun seem less bright in all of its midday glory.
“You are never serious anymore,” commented Lara with a small smile.
Carmen thought about that for a minute, “True, after the whole Shane thing, I figured that I needed to loosen up, and Rosita has been kicking my ass about easing up a little bit too. You know, her being with Alice has made a huge difference in her.”
“I noticed, and a difference in Alice too,” admitted Lara. “So, we haven’t talked about it…”
“It?” asked Carmen her legs swinging back and forth like a kid.
“You know, us… Umm… sleeping…”
“There was no sleeping if I recall correctly,” smiled Carmen pushing her shoulder against Lara’s. “I should get serious right now, right?”
“Right,” agreed Lara.
“Right…,” said Carmen pausing, still swinging her feet. “I mean… was it a mistake? Do you think it was a mistake? Because, I wasn’t thinking it was a mistake, I was thinking that, you know, we were dancing around and flirting and…. Having fun? I haven’t had fun in a long time, and I did serious with Shane, and I think I like… doing fun with you….”
“Just fun, no commitment, just… sex?” asked Lara as she swallowed. Lara did like Carmen, but wasn’t up for another round of ‘just sex’ as it had been with Alice for so long.
“I didn’t say that, Lara, I mean, this little circle of connectivity…,” began Carmen. “No, you know what, I’m not going there, I like you, a lot. You’re not Shane and I can’t bring that baggage into this relationship…”
“So we have a relationship?” asked Lara quickly wanting to outline something here, and not go coasting along without having hashed this out.
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Yay, Al kept the secret… so far, that is. So, Jo’s ready to go all human for Bette… I liked the idea of an infallible Jo. If she can’t die, Bette can’t lose her… and I don’t want Bette to lose her. I’d like a Darci on hand to cure any ailment: hangnails, colds, preventative measures for grey hairs (don’t have any yet, thank goodness)… I think Lara and Carmen can work, I just think they should try it and see… the heat’s already there, can they build something a bit more lasting? Al and Ro, still hot, and Ro’s just going to have to realize that Alice isn’t going to stop loving her, no matter what… Shane! Sam! Date? What kind of date DOES one take a millionaire on? I’d show Sam the life of a pauper. BBQ ribs on a paper plate from a roadside trailer, a couple of beers, and a rest of the night she wouldn’t forget. Some things, money can’t buy… Is Becca gonna have a thing for Quin? Quin’s a bit of a wild card, isn’t she? I keep pairing her up with everyone, in my mind. I thought for a while there, she was gonna prove to be a bit too much temptation for Alice! Quin certainly is tempting… plus she’s wicked smart. Tina should heed her words… if she’s as straight, then the sky is green. Great update, Janet. You *totally deserved* that award, *t o t a l l y*! I’m always waiting for more of this story. Thanks for the post, and I hope the next is soon!
YOU DESERVED TO HAVE A BIG PINK AND GREY THINGET BY YOUR NAME. NEVER READ ANYTHING OF YOUR I DIDNT LIKE.Even when you killed everyone. Alice and Ro I see together Jo and Bette, Lara and Carman, The two S’s Tina needs someone and Quin will do well on her own. Thanks so much for posting BVH
Yea! Sam and Shane are finally gonna get it on. It’ll be interesting to see what happens next with all the couples you have paired up. I’m really liking the depth of feeling between Bette and Jo. Lara and Carmen are really cute as a couple. The movie with Quin is becoming more intriguing. And has Tina changed her mind again?
Congratulations on the award, it will be so nice to see the pen beside your name, you deserve it IMO…Loving the story as always, can we see Tina persue and romance a women, its would be nice to see Tina fall in love. Thank you
So glad you’ve recovered from your ICU experience. LOL. You mentioned my favorite movie of the moment ‘Loving Annabelle’ – Sweet. I’m worried that Jo is going to be normal again. It probably won’t stop her from instinctually taking chances & basically being a bad ass always risking her life. Is it too late to scream “DON’T DO IT JO”!? Sam’s fear is understandable. Damn! the electricity between Quin & Becca made me want to see them onscreen. Lovin’ the direction of your fic.
what to say, what to say…first off…CONGRATS!! You deserve to win and of course we don’t think this will stunt your creative mind and make us think everyone is safe…after all you wouldn’t be you if you did that! Tina needs someone in her life, so go ahead and do that i suppose…LOL…and Bette…loved how she wanted to protect Jo and indirectly herself of possibly losing someone else she loves…poor thing is still very much broken. I love her and Jo..so…please continue…oh…what’s up with Meredith being down for an hour and a half then waking up with no problems?? UNBELIEVABLE!!! LOL
Congrats JM! Pink & Grey look good on you ;) and no, read your warning the last time so it wasn’t me…just filling in the circle… must be a sign for making Jo human…lol.
I love it that you will have that symbol on every chapter you post from here on! You know how I feel about your writing. Totally enjoying Bette in love, but bettyvhall is right, now it is time for Tina to be in love…can I put in my request that it is with a WOMAN. Hey, I know…SIMONE!!!! LOL Thanks for the shout out for Loving Annabelle. As you can probably tell from my other stuff, Simone captured me. Maybe she could sweep Tina off her feet, or vice versus…hell, Tina could even be the top with Simone! I figure Annabelle’s first love came back for her, and now Simone needs someone closer to her own age! Hey, it could happen, especially with you behind the helm!! :-) Thanks J.