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    Collision Course 4.55

     

                “But Jayden will be back soon,” began Carmen with a grimace.

     

                “Nope, she called Sam and is going back to school in New Hampshire, finishing up her nursing degree, so she’s seriously out of family,” sighed Lara.  It was sad; Sam kept loosing all the people she loved.

     

                “If that girl didn’t have bad luck, she’d have none at all.  Jess, CJ, Jayden leaving, Brian going back to the ‘burg, gets shot…  Jesus,” said Carmen.  Looking around the sterile looking room, she grabbed a melon and tossing it back and forth between her hands, feeling listless after hearing Ro talking about going to work with the BAU.

     

                “Are you ok?” asked Lara reaching over and touching Carmen’s cheek sweetly. 

     

                “It’s Ro,” said Carmen softly.  “That dude, Jack Bauer came over earlier, offered her a job…”

     

                “That’s great,” stated Lara with some enthusiasm. 

     

                “Not really,” muttered Carmen sadly.

     

                “Why?”

                “Cuz she and Alice were going at it when I left, Alice was pissed that Ro would even consider going to work for the government.  I can see her point but, Alice didn’t grow up with no money.  We did, we would scrap for everything, I remember Ro working until midnight when she was a kid sanding cars for her dad, who was in the other end of the garage, painting a car.  Every penny counted, and Ro never said a word.  Our moms were sisters and Ro’s mom died when she was six got mugged, she was a school teacher.  Just took her purse and stabbed her, she bled to death a block from her house.  Taking this job means that Ro goes to school free, and might even like doing what they’d be doing, Alice doesn’t get that,” snorted Carmen.

     

                “I can see Ro doing that, but it’s up to her, and I’m sure that Alice will understand,” said Lara.  A few of the other chefs were walking onto the kitchen.  They all called out hello to Lara, who seemed to be fitting in effortlessly in the new environment. 

     

                “I should get going,” said Carmen with a grin.  “Will you be late?” asked Carmen kissing Lara quickly.  Lara grabbed her as she moved away, kissing her again, this time with more passion, making Carmen beam brightly.

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    1. I’m having to be selective about what stories I read, NO TIME. My son has NO #3 on one arm and #8 on the other.Can show at work. He is a Nasa car FREAK. Okay Bette and Jo No living together. Sam and hane Together. Tina Quin together Maybe that would be hot. Ro will do what she thinks best You threw LOT OF SHIT AT US. Just will close, it 86 here today. Dont hurt yourself with the snowblower and dont work to hard thanks bvh

    2. I didn’t expect Bette and Jo’s “honeymoon” to end so abruptly. And Sam’s just full of surprises, huh? Ro working on an elite team of crimefighters sounds like a good idea, too. As for Quin and Tina…that’s kind of a nice pairing. But how will Quin take to dating her sister’s ex?

    3. One situation, two couples: Younger couple, Sam and Shane, broach the subject of living together. It’s done and dusted, with a “yes” and some hot, happy sex in like, no time flat. Older, “wiser” (?!?) couple, Jo and Bette, broach the subject of living together. They throw a protracted wobbler, in tandem, with a pretty much unequivocal “no” being the answer, and have to be told to behave by the stewardess. Uh-huh. Yeah. They might be players, but Shane and Sam could maybe teach B & J a lesson in maturity. Heh! Anyway, Ro should take the job, she’ll kick ass and take names; Carmen and Lara are still hot… Carmen maybe needs to test “Heaven” out; and Quin and Tina are starting to look good… *very* good. Let’s see what Amy does to throw a monkey wrench into everything. Great chapter, Janet, as ever. Thanks

    4. Well, with Jo and Bette, two alphas there is bound to be some horn battering. It will be interesting to see if they can work through it…Quin and Tina = HOT HOT HOT!!! Thanks for this morning treat!!

    5. Stick to your guns Jo! Don’t move in w/ Bette! Afterall Jo has the bigger place & Bette’s reasons for not moving (Angelica) are weak. Loved their fight, also love Ro’ & Alice’s. Ro should def. take the job. Really like Tina w/ Quin but not sure Quin should be tied down just yet.

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